| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 23:23 EDT
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No! This can't be happening! It can't even go down like this! Why Vegeta?! Why?! This chapter has gotten me so anixous for the next one. Great job.
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Reviewed By: Malou On: April 16, 2009 09:07 EDT
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oh my gosh. This fic is great, and honestly, it keeps on getting better and better every chapter! Please don't keep us waiting too long ;) Also, I wanted to thank you for recommending "And Then You Kissed Me" by The Cardigans a while back. I love that song! (Part 2 is also really great)
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 18:19 EDT
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Drama drama drama, and just when they were starting to connect a little right there. I love the personal effects they have on each other. Vegeta's still trying to force his feelings into his lust but it's obvious that he's starting to realize how much she effects him. Such an evil cliffy, I love it. Can't wait 'til you continue.
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Reviewed By: Little Saiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Squee* More! I need more!
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Title: Lamb and the Wolf
Reviewed By: Tempy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 13:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Talk about leaving you on the edge. That was phenomenal. I love all the mention of old classic movies, as well as the wolf and lamb reference. The idea of Vegeta no Ou frightens me, because it smells like trouble. The end of the chapter couldn't have been more perfect. Vegeta's words made my eyes widen and my heart drop. I'm totally antsy about the next chapter. I am completely enamored with your work, and it just keeps improving. This chapter put knots in my stomach that won't be let loose until the next one. I look forward to it. =D
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Title: Chapter 22, cliffhanger of doom!
Reviewed By: Unholy_Rage On: April 13, 2009 09:20 EDT
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Argh cliffhanger! Damn I'm REALLY REALLY anxious to know what happens next in this glorious adventure you've spun for us. And ooo, Vegeta no Ou!!! :D
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Reviewed By: Sarah Slutz On: April 13, 2009 05:11 EDT
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OMG no way, whats going to happen now? I doubt Bulma is going to desert him that easily. Holy smack. You keep getting better.
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Title: chapter 22
Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 22:39 EDT
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Wow, that was not expected, and adds a new, interesting twist to your story. I'm wondering though, if Bulma will actually go. She has a nasty little habit of not doing what she's told. :D I'm also really interested to see what Baba has up her sleeve. Her meddling is driving me nuts! I actually want to grab her and Enma and shake them until they see the love. (Whether seeing that love is simply a result of brain damage by shaking does not matter.) Eagerly awaiting your next installment.
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Reviewed By: Malou On: April 10, 2009 06:22 EDT
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If it's not made clear to you yet: please never stop writing these amazing stories! :) You have the ability to portray Bulma & Vegeta so well, it's unbelievable. And seriously, your writing is much better than most books of this genre that have been published! Anyway, I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter :)
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 23:26 EDT
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It's nice to see a bit of kindness between them, after all the emotional exhaustion they put eachother through...though I'm sure that will resume soon. Lovely chapter, and now that I'm fully caught up, I'll be waiting patiently for the next one.
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 01:04 EDT
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So I just finished chapter 14; I have been devouring this fic as fast as I can, but your chapters are so deliciously long that I'm not getting through it as fast as I thought I would! I just wanted to say how much I am loving the interaction between Bulma and Vegeta; the way they are both growing as they learn more about themselves through this relationship. I am glad to see that they are both beginning to see something beyond the twisted game of lust and control that they began with, even though neither is ready and willing to admit it. Can't wait to see what happens during their trip to space (I agree, with you, I LOVE the V/B in outer space fics) and am excitedly looking forward to reading the next few chapters before heading off to work tomorrow.
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 23:58 EDT
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Oh my god. Just finished chapter five. Holy shit. Ho SHIT was that ever good. I can't even describe how much I like this fic so far. This sick and twisted game of power between them; so perfect for those two. It's amazing. Utterly breathtaking.
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Reviewed By: Tempy On: April 06, 2009 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An absolutely fantastic story thus far. Once I began reading it, I could not bring myself to stop. You are a fabulous writer, and I'm very excited to read the next chapter. You have a new fan. =)
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Title: fabulous filler
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: April 04, 2009 16:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for inviting me to read the next chapter in your masterpiece. I beleive this was a great date for our couple. Even though Vegeta showed great power in this chapter it was a nice tranquil chapter especially compared to the last pain and pleasure event we just attended. I absolutely can not wait for the next chapter to get posted. Stop teasing us and post already. I can't wait, I can't wait, I can't wait.It's been a year since you started this project...please keep it going. Until next time, I can't wait, I can't wait, I can't wait!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KurisutiKamae On: April 04, 2009 00:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely stellar. I love how you keep his personality dark and reserved but still manage to show his weakness for her. It is so realistic. He probably would never become all mushy and sweet. But this is perfect. He remains dark but weakens just enough around her that only she notices and that is more than enough for her. I am absolutely enthralled, I check for updates on this story more than my e-mail and that's a saying a lot. Keep up the greatt work.
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