| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Reviewed By: Helena Mariel On: December 21, 2008 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, well this is an unexpected turn of events! I cannot wait to see what else is in store for "poor" Bulma... although, I have to admit, I hope they both stop being so damn hard-headed. :/
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Reviewed By: Helena Mariel On: December 21, 2008 19:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, dear. This is turning out to be quite a steamy number... I expected their relationship to physical at first, but the emotional detachment is something I pretended didn't exist whenever I thought about their relationship. Of course, Vegeta is not an emotional man, but I cannot wait to see hints of waff here and there. :) Marvelous writing, as always.
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Reviewed By: Helena Mariel On: December 21, 2008 18:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is quite an amazing introduction to what I sense will be an amazing story. I've always mourned the fact we never got to see Vegeta's and Bulma's relationship develop, so I find comfort in those fanfictions where it's narrated. I will continue reading. :)
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 12:05 EST
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Nice to see the tension remains on both sides despite Vegeta's vow not to touch her 'til she submitted her want for him. Vegeta can tease her all he wants, but it's obvious that he wants her to willing want him more than he lets on. Can't wait for more of that. I'm sure your wonderful writing style will make for an interesting look into Vegeta's past. I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Louise85 On: December 19, 2008 19:16 EST
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I love this story! You have such an original take on the whole Bulma & Vegeta get together scenario, and I'm just loving it. I also can't wait to learn more about Vegeta's brother. So please, take your time if you have to, I just hope you'll never stop writing these beautiful stories :)
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Reviewed By: ruthless culprit On: December 19, 2008 00:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lord jesus christ. thanks for this xmas present. what a chapter. i swear i could picture her looking at stars and cool constellations. and that whole line of his saying the vehicle belongs to me was like a "i told you i am royal and earth is shit compared to what i can show you" my god. and that scene in the elevator. i could die now happy but no not yet. i cant wait for taburu's persona and conflict in this plot. happy holidays.
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Reviewed By: Sarah Soler On: December 08, 2008 22:00 EST
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I love where this is going... *sighs*, these ARE Bulma and Vegita. You're completely in tune with them. Awesome job. This story is written like a novel, with such usage of language. Love it!
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 00:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you better apologize!!!! just kidding LOL. love the new addition. i think bulma is coming around. im just fascinated with the way vegeta is gonna make her come out of her bubble and see what's outside and have her realize that really she needs to get off the pedestal and live as a human with instinct and not with pretentious duty.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 22:42 EST
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I do not diss Bulma at all. I thought she was doing really well to hold it out this long before she went crazy so to speak. I'm glad that you did finally update and it was a great one even if it wasn't as long as they usually are. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Princess Buruma [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 18:48 EST
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Yay, finally a new chapter! I wanted to know how the space travel would come out, and now I can't wait for the next part ^^
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Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: December 06, 2008 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the line about him pinning her like a butterfly. It's a very beautiful visual metaphor. Also now Bulma will see how things are on Vegeta's terms. You continue to make these two very 'human'. I really enjoyed this chapter.
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Title: anxious
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 16:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep signing on hoping for an update. Please update. Type faster LOL jk.
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Reviewed By: il trovatore On: November 11, 2008 03:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bella! bella! bella!
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Title: awesomeness
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: November 10, 2008 13:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this chapter. I think it's great you explored how her relationship with Vegeta has effected her life at Capsule and her responsibilities. I am ALSO happy he's taking her with him into SPACE. I really look FORWARD to seeing how this story will go, and I am glad you are writing what YOU want to write. I will continue to read this excellent story!
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Reviewed By: Kyrene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 19:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The absolute last thing on my mind was "here we go again". This story is so unique in the writing and just the way it's done altogether that cliche is really the last thing on my mind. I really can't wait for the next chapter. I am so incredibly excited for those two to be alone in space. And this chapter made me all the more excited...The way you describe Vegeta is just beyond words. Actually, same for Bulma. Both are at the top of their characters with how you describe them. (After saying all that, I do feel a twinge of poor Yamucha...) Oh, also, even so with all this hotness and such, I have to say that my favorite part was probably Mr. Brief's having more interest in the food then in his daughter making out with the mass-murderer alien house-guest in front of his company. That had me giggling for a little while. Now I'm done. Keep Going!!
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