| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 14:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! It was nice to see Bulma come to Vegeta's rescue in the last chapter, but nothing beats a little masculine show of strength when rescuing a damsel in distress. Cannot wait for you to update. Bulma and Vegeta deserve a little R & R! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 10:50 EDT
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It's good that Vegeta's back. After all that massacre it's good that they're back together. You're still going strong and I hope that they connect in next chapter. Can't wait.
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Reviewed By: LolaV On: September 20, 2009 10:24 EDT
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Ah, my hero. Just another reason to love my Prince. Well worth the wait. Thank you, Caprice.
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: September 20, 2009 08:34 EDT
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That almost brought tears to my eyes... He saved her!! I held faith, and he didn't dissapoint :) And she loves him! Something we all knew from the start (I find myself re-reading the prologue a lot, one of the best in-mind sequences and dream-fantasy ever written), I really hope they come together. Your promise will not be forgotten! Goodluck with the next chapter and hope to see it soon :) -X-
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Title: ahhhhhhh!
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2009 23:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in tears. I felt her heart break. Omg I thought he'd leave her. That tear symbolized as a kiss was a spectacular image in my mind and when the "skies crashed" I felt a tug in my abs, Vegeta. I wish I had a dark prince like that =/
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Reviewed By: iymeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2009 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually review because I never know what to say in them except "good job," but I feel it's necessary to review to keep the writer writing. And I really want you to keep writing. I've read a lot of fanfics, but I think this is the best-written and quite possibly the most entertaining read. I really love this fic. So... please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 07:55 EDT
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:) Great as ever... what will happen when he remembers all... Eeeek
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 14:45 EDT
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Aww, that was so sweet. I loved it.
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Reviewed By: LolaV On: August 28, 2009 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fantastic, just fantastic. Was so excited to see the update. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: August 26, 2009 06:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, an update! Very good chapter, the only things that were nagging me were this: Weren't she wearing his necklace on her wrist? (To stop it from jingling in the bag) and shouldn't he also recognize the dagger she used to cut him free? Not that it should bring back his memory, but it should atleast show him that she is in a way familiar to him. Or maybe use his paranoia to make him suspiscious of it. But all in all, excellent continuation. I love Vegeta's feral side, and you portray him very well in this state! You left us once again with a cliffhanger: The bracers being unchanged "for the untrained eye". Will this mean they're off when he wakes up or not...? ARGH! You better update soon and put me out of my misery :D Love, Xaverri
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2009 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so scared for a moment thinking he would rape her but u managed to make vegeta act like himself at the core regardless of the amnesia. I can't wait for the next chapter. I literally screamed with glee when I saw my update email =)
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2009 23:29 EDT
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Oh! That wasn't what I was expecting. The softie side of me wanted that kiss to mean something akin to reconciliation rather than retribution. And Bulma not being able to crack those cuffs? Bummer... I thought that him falling asleep on her lap was sweet. :3 I'm definitely looking forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: KurisutiKamae On: August 25, 2009 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again a stellar chapter. Plz update soon. I'm just dying to know what happens and can't wait till they break the abstinence but in a meaningful and special yet dark way.
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Reviewed By: Arumuelle1 On: July 26, 2009 08:55 EDT
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! DIOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS... OK...OK...Ok... Estoy seriamente tratando de recuperar la respiracion aqui, teniendo en cuenta que practicamente se me cerro la garganta mientras leia los ultimos parrafos. DIOS DIOS DIOSSSSS, PROXIMO CAPITULO, PROXIMO CAPITULOOOO!!! Ehem. Disculpa que llegue tan tarde xD, pero no me habia dado cuenta de que habias puesto otro cap por que ando de viaje! Pero Dios, siento que estoy sufriendo una taquicardia de la alegriaaa! ARGHHHH. Vaya, seriamente necesito algo de autro control xD
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: July 24, 2009 06:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are right up there with my favorite B/V writers; TemptingTemptation and Amber! This is the first fic that truly believably discribes Vegeta how he used to be, and how he's struggling with that now. With every last chapter I read, the world that Bulma is in seems more and more alien, instead of the other way around. You make us understand him, and how alien her world is to him. Chikyuu really does seem like a paradise after all this :) I hope you update soon, but take your time because I'd much rather have you keep up this quality than finish it off quickly! Goodluck and thank you for brightening up my days.
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