| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Title: HOT!
Reviewed By: Tiffy On: May 28, 2008 17:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a fuckin genius this chapter had to b one of the best written b ulma and vegeta sex scenes!!!!!!! it was sooo HOT!!! I loved it beyond words! cant wait for more!!!!
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 04:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done! This is got to be the HOTTEST B/V chapter ever written the history of all time! Honestly, girl you really wrote your ass off on that one. I was very pleased! So pat yourself on the back... I cannot wait for chapter six, becasue there is always fun in the 'morning after' element! But please don't make it so predictiable like all these B/V stories... making him not wanting to be with her after all the fun they had! Unitl next chapter, cheers!!! @_@ ~gokusgirl
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Reviewed By: keleos On: May 27, 2008 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Are you asking me if I MINDED the lemon! Holy shit that was hottt! And I don't know, something MORE than just lemon... it's hard to explain (it might be because I've been dying to read this ch and you just made my day!!) I just love the way you write, the dialogue is great, the anticipation is great, the background is great, the thoughts are great... and you keep both Bulma and Vegeta SO in character! Thank you so much!
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Title: AAAAH! WOWWY!
Reviewed By: TheShinonbiyoru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 09:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya! This is great! I hate it when Vegeta's all 'Namfy Pamfy' gets on my nerves. I love it when he rough like this :D After all that's who he is, so we shouldn't change him ;) Can't wait for the 'morning after,' it should prove to be amusing-hehe! A joy to read! Please keep writing! LOVE IT! Katania a.k.a Shin xx
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 07:50 PDT
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Oh God, that was scorching hot!!!! Jeez Caprice, this was just awesome. Damn, great job.
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Reviewed By: taity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 07:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy sh't!! My laptop has caught fire!! Damn that was HOT!!!
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: shadow_hearth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 22:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! The lemon really was the perfect touch to this story! Please, I can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 21:47 PDT
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Wow. Well, don't be so concerned about the lemony things; they were necessary for the story. It was not unpleasant, really. I don't like hardcore lemons; I think they spoil the intense moments, such as the ones that are way too descriptive. Yours was smooth and metaphoric, intense and steamy. Quite enjoyable, mainly because is a part of the story. I wonder what comes next!
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 21:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy fuck. great sex. if only i could have an animal like him =D
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 09:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg update updtate update!
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Title: fabulous writing
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: May 20, 2008 19:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work. You pulled off their personality perfectly. I super can't wait for the next chapter. Let's see how Veggie handles Bulma in the sheets. As always I enjoy reading your fictions. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: The_Red_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 20:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter! Your stories are great so please update soon! Oh man, Bulma has him backed into a corner it was so great to see them both go at each other! By the way, you really nailed Vegeta and Bulma's personality! i really can't wait for the next chapter! Great work! ~~Go-chan
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 13:51 PDT
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Nice. She really got him to the point... How could he refuse? She is so smart, just as she must be. You have it right. Well done!
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 12:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is great! I love the dialouge that flows between Bulma and Vegeta, and how you're building up the intense moments between them. Well written and very descriptive material, I cannot wait to see what you have intended for our Saiyan Prince in chapter five! Good job!!!
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Reviewed By: Liorella [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 13:51 PDT
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Positively wonderful. You have no idea how happy it makes me to see a 'realistic' VB get together. And, woah, do you pull it off well. Your writing style is just great, the characters are in character and your sense of wit is so refreshing. That scene with Enma, Baba and Kami had me just rolling. Perfect! Please, keep up the awesome work.
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