| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Title: Simply wonderful!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 06:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I've got several things to say about this chapter! First of all, parents are SO embarrassing! Poor Bulma; having to endure hearing when she did dance recitals and such, and in front of Vegeta of all people! And when Bulma's Mom & Dad came home and she [her mom] opened her big fat mouth! Wow, I think Bulma's Mom is a super freak asking all those intruding questions! And what is the deal with Bulma lying?? Who is she trying to convince? And who would be embarrassed about being with a fine specimen like Vegeta?? The way you write him, I'd love to have him crash at my place! I did get a little pissed with the things Bulma said, that was really hurtful. But payback is a bitch! Vegeta is making her eat her own words each and every night, that's for sure! I love the part when you say that he was evil, brilliant! The dinner party scene when they're eating, I was drooling as you described Vegeta's thigh…and the little foot play under the table was HOT. Okay… The ending was superb, a little surprising that Bulma would throw herself off the roof, but more surprising is how Vegeta reacted! Ah, the incredible awesomeness of this story is sublime and enthralling… thank you so much for not letting me die this weekend with this update (and for plugging my name in your notes, squee!)! Have a wonderful July 4th weekend, and I'll end this review with the all famous line that every reviewer gives but writers hate to read: UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 23:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it how she actually threw herself. i can't wait for the next chapter you've got me on pins & needles
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Reviewed By: Lou85 On: July 02, 2008 10:52 PDT
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Oh. My. God. This fic is so hot and well written that I just wanted to say to you that I love you. I was beginning to lose hope that any new good B/V fics could be written these days, but thankfully I came across this wonderful fic. Please update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 08:09 PDT
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UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! BEFORE I DIE!!!
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Title: Kinky sh!t
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: June 30, 2008 10:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your fics. Thank you so much for the updates. Chapters 6 & 7 are fabulous but you know I had to go back and read 5, you know for research...Can't wait for the next update. Your style in writing and the way you turn everyday Vegeta and Bulma into a kinky, battle of the IQ's is intense and I love it. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for Chapter 8 and 9 and 10 and 11 and 12 and you get the idea. Later
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Title: yeah!
Reviewed By: MonkeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 22:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this is wonderful. I hope you're planning on continuing. I love this pairing so much. I haven't read a DBZ fic in forever, but I will always love Vegeta and Bulma. :) I love the plot and your style of writing.
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 13:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the fact you touch on all the senses and your words paint a pic of a lovecrazed woman dozing off at work thinking of something irrelevant to the present matter. i loved those details. great work.
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 09:39 PDT
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Wow! Wonderful chapter! I had the goosebumps reading how much fun Bulma have been having... I would be a daze too, lucky girl! And what's the deal with Yamcha calling her? Ugh, and she said she loved him within a ear-shot of Vegeta!!! I was like "Oh my God!" When she turned around and he was sitting up! Vegeta may come off being a guy that doesn't care; but I know he would probably hurt anyone that tries to mess with Bulma now. Thanks for this update, it was just what I needed to get through this weekend! Until next update! Bye!
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Reviewed By: keleos On: June 21, 2008 19:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM BAAAAACK! Will write a proper review later, I swear!!! Just letting you know how much I'm in love with this ff!!!! XD
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 10:16 PDT
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I'm going to be NEEDING an update. Like really fast. :D
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 12:03 PDT
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Wonderful chapter! I just love the way this is going, it has such a nice structure and your style is just amazing. Absolutely enjoyable! Looking forward.
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 10:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
crazy. interesting morning after. thank god there wasn't any regret from his part. lol. i can already see the hardships awaiting our favorite couple. i fucking love the way you write and you choose each word to fit the syntax and the mood.
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Title: SQUEE!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 05:08 PDT
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Lovely chapter six!!! Wow, I'm so jealous of Bulma!!! I like the take on the whole 'marking' thing with Vegeta... you read so many with him biting her, so this explaination was nothing I heard before. Can't wait for the next chapter, but I have to... so until then keep up the great work with this brillant story! Cheers!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Ally92 On: June 05, 2008 15:34 PDT
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awesome fic!
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Reviewed By: Meanlilkitty On: May 28, 2008 19:22 PDT
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Damn, that lemon was so good it left me dizzy afterward. I'm saving this one!
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