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| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ] | | Pages (19): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 › » ] | Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 20:58 PDT
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I meant story, not artwork, sorry... I was using a form letter.
| Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 20:44 PDT
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Your artwork has won an award from the Feudal Association for the April 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2007awards/Best-InuKag-Roma nce-Fic-3rd.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_April2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. We just finished our sixth term in existence! Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
| Reviewed By: aj On: May 08, 2007 16:51 PDT
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thank u i love the chap please update really soon!!!
| Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 04:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first came upon this story a few days ago, I decided to see what it would be like. I find this story to be delightful. You have done a great job in capturing the feel of the Eddings books and your writing of the characters is almost dead on. However, I feel that I need to point out a flaw. Beldin and the dancer were a couple by the end of the second set of books. Also, didn't the emperor take the seeress as his wife? Where is she? I figure that this story is taking place just before Polgara's pregnancy but after Elriond's transformation. Anyway, that's all that I can see wrong. Now, unfortunately, I have to face the unfortunate task of waiting for your next chapter. Keep up the fantastic work. Take care, Fyrloche.
| Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 19:34 PDT
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Wow, very hot kisses. I can't wait to see how things will progress. I have no clue who the non-Inuyasha characters are when they are at home but I'm really liking your versions of them.
| Reviewed By: I am Foxglove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 06:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chap 67 O.o Y'know . . . I think you might be right, there . . . Out of anyone from the Inu-crew, I think it'd be Miroku who could do the best Sesshomaru impression. *sits quietly for a moment to visualise* O.o *coughs* Ahem . . . Anyways, moving on. Another fine installment! Can I just say, I love the way the narrative in this story jumps from character to character. We get to see things from everybody's point of view and can look closer into each individual's motivations and personality. It makes for a very wide view of the story, and also keeps things fresh as well. ^_^ I love Sango as a character, so this new installment made for a good read. This relationship blooming between her and Miroku is swiftly becoming more and more endearing. It kinda looks as though Miroku's almost blown away by it; as though he never truly believed she'd open herself up to him . . . and now that it's happened, he's just totally knocked for six! =D And I'm so glad Sango is growing more and more assured of herself as we go along in regards to the relationship. I've always seen her as a character who's been severely damaged, internally - I mean, what with all the manipulation and torment she's been put through, who wouldn't be? And I think this would reflect in her trying to trust herself with someone intimately; for her, this would be particularly difficult. In "Journey", her character's written particularly well, because we can still see some of the damage she carries with her. Miroku, by alternately nudging, encouraging, antagonizing, enticing, and guiding her, seems to be helping her along the road of healing from these wounds, by just being there for her. And we can see Sango opening up now. It's brilliant to see. I hope their friends back with the main group won't be worrying themselves sick; mind you, I'm a little inclined to worry about this mission myself. There's so many freaking complications that could arise in that city. I imagine Kirara won't be happy about having to stay behind, either . . . and I can't see Shippo being too thrilled when he finds out, poor kid. I trust in Feldegast to be able to keep them safe, but still . . . I guess we can only wait and see, now . . . *chews thumbnail nervously*
| Title: Surprise surprise
Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 03:34 PDT
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I'll admit, I started reading this story with no inkling of what it was about. The mixture certainly caught me by surprise. I had yet to meet a fan of the Belgariad/Mallorean that was not introduced to it by me. And I would never have thought of the cross between it and Inuyasha. But well done. I thoroughly enjoyed all of it, though I am eager to know whether the story is actually completed or whether you are going to finish it. I do hope you do. It has such potential and could only go higher. In the meantime, congradulations on a job well done.
| Reviewed By: New Fan On: April 06, 2007 18:52 PDT
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I glad to see you back in the saddle again. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 15:57 PDT
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Your story/artwork has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open April 1, 2007 - April 30, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
| Title: got cut off :(
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 16:08 PDT
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Well, instead of telling me it was too long, it just cut off the end: It looks like they'll be headed to the city soon enough, and we'll see how the performance is pulled off. It is funny that he used Sesshomaru as his model to copy - hope the demon lord doesn't find out any time soon! It sounds like they're just about ready for the real deal. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and hope we also get some more insight on what happened between Kagome and InuYasha that made him so much more relaxed with her in public. And I'm curious as to what Rin and Sesshomaru are up to as well, and will she be having another lesson soon? As always, a wonderful chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next.
| Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 16:07 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that Sango actually recognizes Miroku's change in behavior. He really has flirted with less girls and not groped her as often. He really is trying to change his ways. She also noticed that he's done things for her that he probably hasn't done for anyone else. Thank goodness she realizes that the changes are for the better! And her thoughts travel to thinking it would have been nice to share the sunrise with him. Oh, and they woke up together! At least she realized that she liked it, rather than wanting to slap him as soon as she saw him. And she understands now that Miroku doesn't consider her weak, but also knew that Shippou would have aggravated the situation with InuYasha and someone needed to keep him in check while they worked to calm him. It's nice she actually sitting and pondering all of these things. She really is starting to mature with their relationship, as well. And there's Miroku being thoughtful again, and bringing her breakfast. No ulterior motives, though he does recognize that she was lost in her own thoughts. Funny that he surprised her with one of Kagome's modern phrases. That was nice of her to acknowledge the gift that he had given her, and to admit that she'd never had perfume before. I don't find it that hard to believe, considering her background. This was such a nice scene between the two of them; and Sango is still acting so shy, prompting him to ask if he can kiss her. Oh, and she likes it so much, she wants to kiss him again, and I see she's being the dominant one, this time. Of course I see he couldn't resist rubbing her bottom, but at least this time, she didn't mind. Too bad that Silk had to come along and interrupt them. And what a scary idea, Miroku is going to play a Gromlin High Priest and they're going to walk right into town. I hope no one asks him to make any sacrifices while they're there. I hope they get in and out in a hurry. Of course Sango wants to go along, and it's a good thing they didn't try to tell her no. they really don't want to make her mad. Whoops, it looks like not only did she wake Kirara from her sleep, but now she walks right into Miroku, but he had another gift for her. It figures that she loves the new scabbard for her knife more than anything else he'd done for her. It looks like Velvet is rather impressed with Hiraikotsu, and she's right, you have to be strong to throw it. Just another reason to stay out of Sango's way when she's angry. InuYasha and Kagome finally make their appearance. It looks like they are finally more at ease with each other in public, and Sango has noticed. I could also understand if they're relationship has become even stronger after what had happened with the wolf. InuYasha is also concerned about Miroku posing as a high priest when they go into the city. He'll probably kill them himself if anything happens to them while they're gone. They'd better return to the others in one piece. I really like how InuYasha is so much more open in their relationship in front of the others now. He really has become more secure and comfortable with Kagome, and himself. So the group as split into two, with the one headed for the dread city. And Sango got caught, wanting to rub Miroku's butt! Good for him for calling her on it, and encouraging her to do it. It figures they'd get interrupted again before they could get any further than a kiss, though I guess they should have known someone would come looking for them. Well, Miroku for being a peaceful man, sure pulled off sounding like the high priest. I don't blame Sango for not liking the change when he became cold and cruel. It looks like they'll be headed to the city soon enough, and we'll see how the performance is pulled off. It is funny that he used Sesshomaru as his model to copy - hope the demon lord doesn't find out any time soon! It sounds like they're just about ready for the real deal. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and hope we also get some more insight on what happened between | Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 04:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think that I have reviewed you before -sorry! I adore the Begariad/Mallorean series. I can't believe that you have found such a seamless way to crossover the characters with the Inutachi - it wouldn't have occurred to me, but it works beautifully. I am a big Miroku fan - I love him in this chapter - he's obviously 'Silklike' (but better looking) and I look forward to what he does next as a 'Grolim' priest.
| Reviewed By: fluffy802005 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 15:03 PDT
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i'm really excited to get to the sango/miroku parts. i relaly love the inu/kag moments, but the san/miro ones r the ones i've been looking forward to the most.
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 11:38 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens next, so update soon please! Keep up the good work!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: fluffy802005 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 12:58 PDT
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wow. it's been awhile since i've been able to sit down and actually read anything, let alone write. nenw job and all. as always i loved it. seeingn the way things are evolving with rin annd sesshy are always nice. poor girl is so lost right now. annywyas, curious to see who this new character is, and as always, will annxiously await next chapter. (sorry bout t he mistakes, stupid laptop is too sensitive... )
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