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 Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 04, 2008 08:29 PDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20Sept08 / ~ Inuyashloverr & KnittingKnots Owners of the Feudal Association
 Title: The Journey to the City of Endless Night
Reviewed By: wa_ya_a_disi  On: September 22, 2008 04:07 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'ts excelent! So fare ive read up to the 60th chapter but I'm just, well, in love with this story. I've read the book that you are basing it off of and I think you showed there charicter better then any other artist. And the interpretation of the charicters from Inuyasha are just as excilent. Keep writing, your doing good!!!
 Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 16, 2008 10:15 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashaloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
 Reviewed By: PUMPKINPI7782  On: September 13, 2008 21:15 PDT
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Hi, I only read "The Journey to the City of Endless Nights" , but it is one of the best stories I have ever read. It has everything, a variety of characters, Angst with different characters, action, adventure, drama, comedy, I mean everything. I just started to write fanfiction about a month ago and I hope I can become a great writer like you or many of the other authors I have come across. I hope you finish:-) Take Care Pumpkinpi
 Title: by litele_one [chap 75]
Reviewed By: I am Foxglove [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 14, 2008 11:23 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent. ^_^ So good to hear from dear Jaken again, and the rest of the council for that matter. I feel like we're beginning to get to know them as characters, and look forward to more of the same. It appears our battle is being fought on two separate fronts here, with the Inutachi and co. at the head and Jaken with the hometeam. And I have to say it was nice to hear word of Hettar's contingent, I had wondered what was going on with them! Hmmmm . . . it would seem I misjudged Varana just as Jaken did. There are still a few I'm not sure about, but perhaps I should be more patient. After all, this is a convening of the Good Guys, is it not? Belgarath or the Twins wouldn't conspire with the untrustworthy. Personalities and interests are sure to clash, after all, but that's just natural. And we have more to meet, haven't we? I'm delighted Jaken's making allies. I had worried about him, all alone and dispirited in that alien environment, but it seems like he's adapting fit to make even Sesshomaru proud. And it seems that sharp tongue of his may be an asset as much as a hindrance too! *laughing* Yes, I am very pleased with this. I imagine we'll be following this side of the story from its beginning to resolution, yes? *rubs hands* Fantastic. I am very, very intrigued. Top marks for this chappie. ^__^
 Reviewed By: Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly  On: July 14, 2008 03:04 PDT
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Great seeing you back in action. What Jaken is proposing is very good and certain to make the Murgos nervous. Dealing with religion is dicey in any situation. As always, I look forward to more.
 Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 13, 2008 17:44 PDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So we get to see what Jaken is up to. It looks like he's enjoying himself, in spite of trying to convince himself that he should like his surrounding or the humans there. I wanted to laugh when one of the twins mentioned they were happy to see he was making new friends. And he certainly is proving himself to be useful to them. It does help to come into a situation sometimes from the outside without knowing all of the politics to see an answer, but then be wise enough that you need to know some in order to formulate the right response. It looks like he may help everyone achieve their goals - even if he can protest all he wants to that they're just stupid humans. At least they are showing appreciation for his talents and skills, and he seems to be learning to accept that. Another good chapter and I look forward to your next one.
 Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 19, 2008 03:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
 Title: amazing!
Reviewed By: shi shi [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 11, 2008 22:08 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
tell me how u got the text/format to come out right because my computer isnt working.and yes this is amazing an only read the first 2 paragraphs!
 Reviewed By: Crystal Singer  On: June 09, 2008 05:52 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
superb as usual, hope you are on a roll
 Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 07, 2008 20:35 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, been a while since an update, but it;s an awesome story still. Continue to update this one, will ya? Ja ne.
 Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 07, 2008 06:50 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad to see this chapter. Even with everything else that has been going on, I'd still been wondering about Sango and the others. And we know she'll eventually help save Miroku - because how else can she let him have it if she doesn't? I do like how she finally acknowledged her feelings for him, even if she's still denying them, and Velvet pointed out a few things to her about him that she'd obviously ignored or missed, all because she didn't want to admit to herself he might have changed. This was a really good chapter with insight to both of the women's feelings about their man in addition to them managing to escape the collapsing temple. I look forward to more, and what's happening with Miroku and Silk - I hope the spy hasn't had a meltdown in that cave as of yet, and I'll bet Miroku has his hands full.
 Reviewed By: Fire Blade [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 07, 2008 04:20 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
An eagerly awaited chapter and it was well worth the wait. Looking forward to more.
 Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2008 22:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I stayed up and read it!
 Title: by litele_one [LJ]
Reviewed By: I am Foxglove [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 13, 2008 04:30 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
[Chapter 72] Hi FAE! Long time no see, huh? *waves cheerfully* ^_^ So down to business . . . Wow, alot of emotion in this chapter! And actually, alot of issues addressed that needed addressing. I suspected there'd be problems for Shippo and InuYasha as they tried to find their footing in this new father/son position that they've found themselves in. They've got a ways ahead of them, I think, because they BOTH have certain issues that really need settling. For Inu, he's often quick to temper, habitually gruff, and a little recalcitrant with matters of the heart because of his negative experiences in the past - not to mention the fact that his father died before he could even gather memories of him, never mind tips on fatherhood. For Shippo, well, it's quite obvious with him - the murder of his father, his immaturity . . . and because the Inu-tachi became, quite frankly, his surrogate "pack", any rearrangement of the pecking order within that pack is going to displace him and he'll be feeling vulnerable, hence his attitude. At least now we have Sesshomaru fully prepared to whip the boy into shape, but what about Inuyasha? He really was trying to help Shippo into his new position within their ranks [ie. the fox is now the "pup" of the alpha mates] and it's clear he's hurt and frustrated by the boy's resistance. I think he regrets how rough with him he's been in the past now, and now that he himself is beginning to mature - as evidenced by his repairing the relationship between his brother and himself, and his and Kagome's relationship now - he's able to look back and see where he went wrong. And of course, he being Inuyasha, he's fully prepared to beat himself up for his "failure". And I'm glad someone finally thought to address the way Kagome coddles the runt. Shippo does get picked on by Inu, but at times he can be very sneaky and Inuyasha ends up getting punished for it when Kagome comes running . . . but after all, she was just fifteen when she landed in the Sengoku Jidai, so she could hardly be expected to be model parent material either. And she and Inu present a united front now, so that Shippo can't play them off of one another anymore. Storytime As Presented By Belgarath [Now in Surround Sound! XD] was fun! I'm glad Inu and Kag just got some time to unwind together like that, while Sesshomaru held down the fort with the runt . . . Ah well, though, that's the repercussions of having a big old family like the one they're developing now, ain't it? When they start having pups of their own, they'll have precious little time of their own together. XD At least alone, anyways.
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