| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ] |
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2009 22:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is AWSOME!!!! I loved it. I hope u continue.....I will be waiting!!!EXCELLENT STORY!!
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Reviewed By: Nikki Coley On: March 24, 2009 11:39 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Okay I really need to know what's happening with Rin and what's happening to Sesshomaru!! Next update should reveal that Pleaaaaasee! Hehe XD
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 21:02 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my… Silk is absolutely terrified, isn't he? He's more afraid of being in that cave than he is of being swallowed alive by that demon. I don't know how Miroku managed to do it all - but their very lives did depend on him. He has Silk fighting him tooth and nail while he's trying to maintain the barrier that's protecting them. And of course that demon taunting them and bashing on the mountain trying to make it collapse around them doesn't help in the least. The harder he works to hold the barrier, the harder Silk is fighting him to get loose. Miroku really doesn't want his friend to die like that because he's having to put up a hell of a battle on two fronts, when it would have been easy to let him go and get eaten. I know at one point Miroku was interested in seeing a demon raised from hell, but I'm sure after this one he'll be in no hurry to see another. He has almost insurmountable strength within to hold all of the fronts he's carrying. He doesn't want to die in that cave either, but Silk isn't helping matters any - especially when he goes and pulls a knife on him. And that demon really doesn't have a clue what he'll be facing once Miroku finally decides he must make a stand before the cave does collapse around them, since they had no hope of seeing if it went anywhere because of Silk's fear. The demon thought they had no chance against him. Wasn't he surprised when Miroku started to draw him in to his wind tunnel, but the demon had given him no choice. With the barrier failing, Silk so terrified he'd rather leave an be eaten, it was the only option he had left of escaping alive. Well, the demon now knows where those that are sucked into the kazaana go even if Miroku has no idea what actually happens to them. Except now, he's having to deal with the toxic poisons of the demon that he was forced to absorb. And thank heaven they're now past that hurdle, but Miroku has the new problem of being poisoned, and Silk has no idea what is happening to him. I hope they either get back to the others soon, or the others come looking for them. Someone should be able to help him - I know I would love to see Kagome be able to purify his body of the toxins he absorbed but anyone helping him at this point would be a blessing. And he can't die, because Sango is going to kill him again if he does. An exciting chapter and I look forward to the next one. There's so much going on!
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Title: Glad to see a new chapter!
Reviewed By: iPoe (Licentia poetica) On: March 10, 2009 12:49 PDT
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Poor Miroku! Having to fight a claustrophobic ally and a demon from hell at the same time...no wonder he's sick! Can't wait to see who heals him and how he reacts to Silk's "poke" at his selfishness.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 08:45 PST
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Congratulations Far Away Eyes - your story Journey to the City of Endless Night has been nominated for Best Action/Adventure and Best Serial at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! CatLover260
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Reviewed By: NikkiColey On: December 21, 2008 09:25 PST
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Omg it would SO cool if you posted a few chapters around Christmas. Like a... Present to the fans *hint hint*. I love this story but I feel like waiting for updates is like watching a pot boiling (or however that saying goes with the boiling pot thing). ^^
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Title: From litele_one @ LJ
Reviewed By: I am Foxglove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 12:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good. God. D: This is the second time I'm reading through these latest two chapters and still I'm left gaping and ... genuinely anxious. I never saw that coming. If this were a movie, this would be the part where I hide behind a cushion and not emerge until everything was alright. DX But I can't, I'll just have to gnaw on my fingernails and read on when the next installment comes around - this is definitely one of the most anxious cliffies I've encountered in a fic. Hopefully Sesshomaru's newly-realized pack will rally around him, and he can bring himself to draw strength from them. And god, hopefully Rin is okay. I know she's a tough cookie, but to think of her alone in a foreign world is ... *shudders* Sesshomaru might lose his mind with worry. Wah, it's going to be so hard sparing enough attention for Sango's and Miroku's next chapter with all this happening! >< I have to say though, I'm wondering whether the birds had a feeling/instinct about what was going to happen ... Uncanny how they warned Sesshomaru to protect Rin just before this!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: October 25, 2008 06:32 PDT
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You have updated so quickly. I thank you for that. Poor Sess, I had a feeling that he should bring Rin with him. I hope that they will find her really soon or Sess will tear down anything in his path. I enjoyed the brother's bonding when Sess found his brother. I like how Inuyasha let down those walls and allow Sess see the best side of him instead his rough exterior. Update this great story soon.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 19:29 PDT
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ooooh....a nasty cliffie! Good chapter. I like when I see Inu and Sessh bonding like that.
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Reviewed By: Charles Watford On: October 18, 2008 13:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see you're still alive and writing. This was a great update. I enjoyed this heart warming moment with Rin and Sesshoumaru. Please keep them coming.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: October 18, 2008 09:10 PDT
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I loved this chapter. I was wondering if you stop updating your story. When will the good start happening? I hope on the next update it will be soon. Update sooooon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: FyrlocheNSI On: October 18, 2008 08:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating. It has been a while and I know how RL can interfere with writing. Well written and entertaining. It does seem to push the intimacy level of Rin and Sesshoumaru, though. I know that he is very protective of her and this is a reflection of their private time together where he can be less rigid. I guess that the problem I have is that I am not used to seeing Sesshoumaru portrayed with this much sensitivity. Don't get me wrong, you did a great job and I enjoyed the chapter. I look forward to your next installment, however long it takes to get it. grins Later.
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Reviewed By: Me On: October 18, 2008 06:33 PDT
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I missed your story, thank you for updating. :) Any chance will be seeing Inuyasha or Kagome next chapter? (FYI- For some odd reason it says that this story is 'Complete')
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 20:56 PDT
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Sweet chapter. And it's nice to see Sessh get his priorities straight
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Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 19:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you found time to update. I really enjoy this story. The interaction between Sesshomaru and Rin is so sweet. It's nice when they have quality time together.
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