| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ] |
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Reviewed By: bk On: October 29, 2005 08:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad your story was nominated. It is an excellent story and deserves recognition. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: starchild* On: October 12, 2005 14:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey super story! I just can't wait to find out what happens next. Oh, I loved the mud fight you made with InuYasha and Sesshoumaru. I laught so hard. You did a realy great job. Well I send my next revew when you put up the next chapter. Until then keep on writing! Starchild*
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 02, 2005 22:24 PDT
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This by the way is my fav chapter. and all because of one thing....MUD FIGHT. all i have to say to that is i'm glad the puppies are playing nicely again. lol. at least inuyasha clued sess into what's going on with rin. maybe it will help some. how's your paper from school doing. good luck on that. update when your able. your good enough to wait for....luvs ya
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 02, 2005 20:24 PDT
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it's me again. read both new chapters at the same time and you just had to remind me about those uncured animal skins, didn't you!!!!Poor Rin, and Poor Sesshoumaru, her not sure why he won't say anything, and him being a baka for not realizing just how badly he's hurting rin. I must agree though that inuyasha does have prettier hair then kagome. ttyl
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Reviewed By: EmilyHigurashi On: September 27, 2005 14:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my f-ing god!!!!!! This is SUCH an amazing story! I can't believe how you can think of all these complex new characters, and the Inu/Kagome lemons are really intriguing and well-written. (I'm hoping for a Miroku/Sango one soon ;) And also the Sesshoumaru/Rin relationship is so cute how he cares for her. And I really like how Inu and Sessh are getting along - I've always wanted them to, though I know it'll never happen in the anime or manga. Anyway, I think you are an absolutely fantastic writer and I'm really glad I discovered this fanfic! You do a REALLY good job of updating (I've never read a fanfic before where I didn't have to wait long at all for the next chapter), so keep doing it! Seriously, I love this story. Great job!! :)
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: September 26, 2005 19:34 PDT
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Okay. confession first. i went to aff. and read the rest of the story. loved what you have written so far. but i'll keep my reviews here. YOUR MEAN>>>sorry had to...lol. baka grolims is all i have to say. how dare they pick on inuyasha. but i love the way sesshoumaru comforted him. he's starting to more and more show how much he really cares about his brother. and kagome. and the fact that he actually trusted the monk to do as he was told. well all i have to say is baka fluffy...thanks. like i said loved it.
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Reviewed By: bk On: September 26, 2005 09:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a cliffhanger. I think Naraku may be closer than they think. We know Kagone will survive now that Sess is there but will Inu ever be the same knowing what he almost did? Questions, questions I guess I will just have to wait till next time. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: September 26, 2005 09:03 PDT
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Have you updated on Aff yet? Wonder if Sess is going to make Rin his mate later on, with her power, there'd be no contest from other youkai. Sorcerers can change their form, who says it has to be an animal?
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Reviewed By: bk On: September 25, 2005 09:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story. I have been evacuated from Katrina for several weeks and when I finally got home and got my power & internet running (limited connections) again I couldn't belive how many updates I missed. Your story keeps getting better and it amazes me at how quickly you update. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Twosen On: September 24, 2005 00:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has got to be a crime that you've got so few reviews!!! You have a terrific writing style (very true to Eddings!), the ability to hold your readers in suspense and mad skills to be able to update so much and so often! Love the Inu-Sess relationship, the Silk-Miroku interaction and the fact that you're true to canon, although Sess did strike me as slightly OOC at first. But then it's understandably so, I suppose. I like how you managed to pick out all my favourite Eddings characters to come along for the fun. Never thought I'd ever come across such a well-melded Mallorean-InuYasha crossover before. Kudos to you for this incredible feat!! And also you have my eternal adoration nd worship for leaving Jaken out of this for the most part!!! *adores and worships* Can't wait to see how Rin's "powers" are going to manifest themselves. (Hopefully nothing as drastic as Garion's killing of chamdar, I hope... I'm guessing something along the lines of Polgara's "MORE SEEDS!!!"?)
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 23, 2005 19:16 PDT
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Hmmmmm. i hadn't thought about the age thing at all. i guess her getting sorcery would level the playing feild....Oh ya, review....um great chapter....let's see, anything else....it's about time kagome tells the others what her name means. i couldn't see the old fox waiting much longer. and i couldn't belive when fluffy didn't kill the she-wolf out right. even though that would be hard to do....lol.. oh and thanks for updating again so soon. and have i told you lately that i love this story....ttyl
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Reviewed By: Jade Cricket On: September 22, 2005 22:36 PDT
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Hello! I came across this yesterday, and seeing as it has both of my favourite series, I couldn't resist trying it out...and I absolutely love it! Read the whole fanfic in one sitting...haha, got to sleep round about 5 in the morning, but it was worth it! I notice you update within a week or so...pleeeeease update soon! Can't wait to see how everyone's going to react to Rin's new abilities! (I bet she's going to mention the birds talking to Pol...which will then start that whole thing about the Will and the Word coming with the onset of puberty, right?)
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 22, 2005 21:03 PDT
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Ok. first of all i have to say that your evil to do this to rin. but i belive it will help her more later to fight of whatever may attack her, so your forgiven. Second of all i'm extremly glad that you didn't post this late at night. i'm supposed to be asleep before my husband gets home from work, but you happen to keep me awake. and third, thank you for two more great chapters. they where very will written. the only problem i had was i thought according to the books, birds mostly talked about themselves. but then everything has a purpose. Keep up the great work. luvs ya.....
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 05:32 PDT
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having rin be able to use the will and the word was a twist i was not expecting. I'm just wondering what sesshoumaru is going to do to garion when he finds out that he is the causing rin so much pain. and your right, watching fluffy hunt in human form is deffently more enjoyable. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: The Journey to the City of Enless Night On: September 21, 2005 00:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
teribly addicting this it. its 3am yet i cant stop reading...
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