| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ] |
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 22:06 PDT
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thanks for another chapter. was expecting two at once. and to answear your question. As a giant dog, dripping acid and leaving a burning trail....lol
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Title: I love fluffy hunting!!!!
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 21:23 PDT
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terrific. Sesshoumaru hunting with grace and ease. loved it. and need more of it....i know i'm bad.. keep up the good work and add a story to that poem. it's my first one!!
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Title: your very welcome
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 12:54 PDT
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your welcome for my last comment. just finished reading this chapter, and i love the way inuyasha "hunted" that guy. personally i belive he should have got a lot more. fluffy tranforming and helping chase the sob.... btw...i have a poem out, called silent tears. if you have a chance give it a read. thanks for a great chapter... luvs ya
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: September 09, 2005 15:26 PDT
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Knifty, it's good to hear from you again!! Was getting kinda worried about you since there hadn't been a peep from you since 8-27. I live in Washington state myself, the only thing I have to worry about is earthquakes. Just for grins, here's another quote from my story idea. "If she chooses to keep her power, you have mentioned this before, but you have made no effort to elaborate. You will explain it to me now." The Lord of the West said in a tone that while mild, demanded obedience. Zaadren growled, pulling a hand down his face. "Fine, but we need to be where no one else can see or hear us."
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 15:24 PDT
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I grew up reading this series. it was the very first my aunt lent me. you managed to get all the right personalites to mix lovely. i must say you do David Eddings proud. keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: September 06, 2005 12:36 PDT
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Hope you don't live where the hurricane hit. Just drop a line and let us know if you're still alive, please. Your long absence worries me.
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 05:12 PDT
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a very interesting story line, although I am not familliar with the crossover it has been so well done that it matters not where the orginal crossover storyline takes place. I have been trying dessperatly to put a character's pesonality to a name but am being baffeled to say the least. I wish to know if the character's introduced in this story are of original design or if not the name of the author they where borrowed from please, If they are borrowed then I would like to read more on the author. Great Story I look forward to seeing the rest of it unfold.
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 27, 2005 09:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapters. The shoe thing was hilarious. How old are Kagome and InuYasha in this story. I assumed they were in their late teens which would make Rin only 4 or five years younger. I love this story, so keep up the good work and I will be watching for updates.
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Reviewed By: chey On: August 26, 2005 19:58 PDT
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this is really good you should have moer reviews than this i cant wait for the next cahpter.
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 26, 2005 10:01 PDT
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Gotta love the change of heart Sess has about Inu. The later chapters are even cooler. Just for grins, here's a quote from that story idea of mine: "Remind me whose bright idea it was to go sightseeing in Feudal Japan?"
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 23, 2005 20:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for a great update. I wonder how they are going to hide his human night from everyone, and lets hope they don't get attacked before the morning.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: jjojodoll On: August 23, 2005 17:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was one of the best chapters your fanfic is very good in most they change inuyasha's personality but you kept it the same i really like it!
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 23, 2005 05:53 PDT
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Two more action packed chapters. You are doing a great job with this story. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 21, 2005 15:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two chapers at once is fantastic. You are so talented. This story is one of the best I read in a while. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: kag156 On: August 21, 2005 12:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story, totally different and new plot then then any other fanfic. but I was wondering is Kagome ever going to use her miko power and get a bow?
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