[FanFics] Support This Site
[ New Forum ] [ Register ] [ Login ]

"The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ]
Pages (19): [ «    1  2  3  4  5  6  7  8  9  10  11  12  13  14  15  16  17  18  19    » ]
 Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 03, 2006 17:34 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
again, i really love this, you could be a great author,sesshoumaru's a bit possesave eh? You desueve a cookie *gives cookie*. anyway PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON *gets on hands and knees to beg*
 Title: kareemachan
Reviewed By: kareemachan [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 03, 2006 07:35 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, I admit that I rolled my eyes when I read your story's synopsis on the fan-fic page. I really didn't think you could mix the two stories together successfully. Boy was I wrong! But that meant when I finally did read it, I got to read what you've written so far as a whole, adding to my enjoyment. The stories do mix, the characters are nicely delineated and sustained through the story, and (blessed be!) your grammar and spelling are impeccable. Not only has this given me a new story to look forward to, but I'm going to have to go back and re-read Edding's Belgariad series again; it's been a while!
 Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2006 14:04 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i ment cheater at the game kagome, kagome...i just finshed the belgariad. i do think silk and miroku make very good friends . i wonder what the juggler and vella are doing...^_~...PLEASE UPDATE SOON
 Reviewed By: Kitboxer  On: January 13, 2006 12:50 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
update.
 Title: Great Fic
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2006 11:52 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just love this story. I hope you do well in the contest. This fic is certainly worthy of any awards it receives. You have developed the characters well and I continue to look forward to each and every update. Good luck!!
 Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 09, 2006 15:47 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You just get better and better.....inuyasha is a cheater BAD....UPDATE SOON PLEASE.im on the last book
 Reviewed By: Sandyin [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 05, 2006 02:10 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
First off your evil. I've stayed up till dawn the last few days reading from start to where you are now. Now I have to say at the start I was a little thrown off, but this is easily turning into one of my favorite stories, and will be reread. You've made the characters grow in several differnet ways I havn't seen before, and it's interesting how you've kept it all in line. Over all great work and I hope to read some more of it soon.
 Title: Good chapter
Reviewed By: Bate [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 30, 2005 09:10 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! I really liked the way you mixed Shippo into the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome, and the playfullness of the whole chapter... Yeah, I do believe I'll look into those books. It sounds like a cool world... And a Happy New year to you!
 Reviewed By: Bate [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 22, 2005 23:08 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love it! Absolutely love it! I haven't read/heard the original stories that you've crossed Inuyasha with, but I think it's brilliant! You write wery well, it's easy to follow the story, with a good plot, and a nice drive in it... Can barely wait for the next chapter(s)..!
 Reviewed By: EmilyHigurashi  On: December 22, 2005 19:38 PST
Comment/Review:
oh man, that was some fantastic lime right there!!!! and i agree theyre not ready yet, im just impatient lol. Great job! And I'm so excited to see where this story will go as it approached month nine!!! :D Keep writing!
 Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 21, 2005 12:51 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love the belgariad so far.im in the second book.i wont be able to rad 4 about two weeks cause im going to florida.but still UPDATE LOTS poor shippo.iv also started a new story.....now when i get back there shoould be al leats 3 new chapters.PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEE
 Reviewed By: fionamalory [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 08, 2005 18:12 PST
Comment/Review:
Well, that's definitely the perfect reading material for a cold night! Certainly warmed things up around here. *g* Lovely chapter and nice to see Kagome and Inuyasha getting some um...quality time together. Hee!
 Reviewed By: Emilyhigurashi  On: December 07, 2005 12:55 PST
Comment/Review:
GREAT CHAPTER!!! Wow...that lemon was definetely worth the wait. Now, I'm just waitin' for one on Miroku and Sango ;) Great job keeping the story interesting after so many chapters! Lots of authors lose their groove after that long, but you continue to surprise me!
 Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 06, 2005 14:55 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW. *is still bowing down* yesterday i bought all of the belgariad series and im hooked. well *stops bowing to beg* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON *starts bowing again*
 Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: Cathy C [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 06, 2005 08:48 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics out there. I wasn't familiar with the crossover series, but found it extremely enjoyable - in fact I'm going to have to find it and read it for myself. I've enjoyed ever minute of this fic and look forward to every update. The characters and their relationships are so real - it's hard to put into words. Thank you for taking the time to put this outstanding piece together.
Pages (19): [ «    1  2  3  4  5  6  7  8  9  10  11  12  13  14  15  16  17  18  19    » ]


Write Review/Comment
Name/Nick:
required
Title:
optional
Rating:
optional
Style of Writing:  
Spelling & Grammar:  
Originality/Creativity:  
Enjoyment Factor: Is this a fun to read or a boring fanfic?
Overall Rating: Not necessarily based on the other ratings.
Review/Comment:
required
If you've rated the fanfic, please try to explain your reasoning behind your rating
(You may enter up to 4000 characters.)

characters left
You may use the following HTML tags inside your comment:
<b>Bold</b>
<i>Italics</i>
<u>Underline</u>
<font size="3">Font Size</font>
<font color="green">Font Color</font>
Spam Filter:
required
Please enter the letters written below:

.########..####........##..##......##.
.##.........##.........##..##..##..##.
.##.........##.........##..##..##..##.
.######.....##.........##..##..##..##.
.##.........##...##....##..##..##..##.
.##.........##...##....##..##..##..##.
.##........####...######....###..###..