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Title: Chapt 13 - 15 part two
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie nsi On: July 30, 2006 14:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And yeah... I did go to the limit.. so here is the rest of the reviews... little giggle of embarrassment.. chap 14 cont- I love just how Blushy Inuyasha gets around Kagome. Too cute and so very true. A sweet kiss scene!! Awesome!! Again you like my other favs are the ones who can write the kisses so realistically so masterfully, that it isn't seen on paper in black and white.. it is there in front of you as you watch the scene as an unseen presence. Awesome!! Really Awesome work!! I have to admit something.. I squeal with glee when I read about Rin making a picture of her and Sesshoumaru together and him having a smile then him asking her to make another. Another shining example to the depth of this stoic and hard to portray character of Takahashi. Kudos!! Whoot!! Whoot!! and Excellent!! Rolls over with joy!! More trouble! Another flunkie being sent after the Tachi crew must be a fanatic. From the way you ahd describe the ships that little boat is just begging for a beating. Loved how you kept Belgarath in character again with the fight. He really doesn't like to fight when it's so unnecessary. And that flunkie is certain making Sesshouamru irritated and as we all know -that's not a healthy life promoting aspect. Blinks several times.. Sesshoumaru wanting his brother beside him in a fight.. Right on!! "Belgarath sighed. He muttered, "They always do this. They always have to challenge me." " LOL!! what a comment!! Great work with that intense scene. Rin is defintitely smart. She knew why Sesshoumaru sent her below deck. Chap 15- Lemon!! Yumm!! Boy, is it a hott scene. Very well written very tasefully done and fully of emotions. Finally, Inuyasha has gotten over what everyone else thinks. Very tender, the way Kagome kissed and laved at his scarred shoulder. Whoot!! You kept them in character even more. They were both blushing!! I love their blushing. And Inuyasha grumbling about Kagome's bra. funny!! Hmmm..what was that wave of pink light? Will it have something some importance in the future? Oh no...just when they finally complete the mating and love making. Interruptions like Kagome feared would happen-happened. I wonder is Sesshoumaru annoyed because Inuyasha wasn't updeck to hep with the fight/conflict? And why was Sesshoumaru complaining about bad timing? Having Silk pick out the Inn... I wouldn't wanna go in there either. Can picture the smell and shudders. OH Yes!! Sango is back and oh dear... she has Miroku with her. I pity her having being stuck that awful womanizing lecher. Can't wait to read and review the next 3 chapters! So I end here and say. Bravissiom and please keep up the good work!! starting to get tempting to read the latest chapter. But will wait and take her time. Please keep up this most excellent and masterfully executed brillant genius!!
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Title: Chapt 13 - 15
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie nsi On: July 30, 2006 13:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Back again with another batch of reviews for you. Ready, Literary Goddess... smiles happily.. shuffles papers.. clears throat.. Now presenting reviews chap 13 - Ah, man.. to get interrupted, Poor Inuyasha. The discussion about why Inuyasha is being targeted at the new "dark God" smacks fully of Naraku's schemes. You know I noticed something about the two jewels... The Shikon no Tama - is pink and made with a Female priestess. The Orb - is blue and made by a Male god. Do I sense or have wishful thinking there is a Love interest going to develope between the two? That would a truly sweet story or even a one shot!! I would love to see it!! Giggles happily!! (would it classify as Alternate pairing?) Again the emphasis from Belgarath only PURE can touch it. Are we forshadowing here? rubs hands together. Loving this story, Goddess!! Umm question.. Why is Inuyasha pouting about being up on deck? I wonder in what way (or ways) the Orb would punish Naraku.. Inuyasha's comment "Basically any demon too weak to fight on their own merits.." that really goes for Kouga also. Kouga, a full demon, with two Jewel shards is almost equal to Inuyasha, a half demon, with no shards.(it's only because Kagome osuwari Inuyasha every time that the fight is left undecided- don't think Inuyasha would kill him but get him to acknowledge strength he possess). I love the percision that you have with all the characters. KUDOS!!! Bravissimo!! Oh-oh... They gave themselves away after Inuyasha was going through the trouble to keep it secret. Sesshoumaru's comment about who had more power in their relationship!! Too funny!! Getting good with Sesshouamru "prying" the information out of Kagome and Inuyasha about her time. Very excellently executed!! I enjoyed how the Inu Brothers "bonded" after Kagome huffed and went back to her homework. Inuyasha read Kagome's History book??!! What an Awesome and Wonderous feat that was!! WOW!! I tried to read a History textbook and fell asleep. ROFLMAO!! The video game.... mouth drops open.. Sesshoumaru agreeing to their terms. WOW!! You certainly have me swooning with Amazement. Chap 14 - Ahh I see why he was pouting. He's bored and feeling trapped - he can't run nor is there any demons to work off the energy. Got it!! Hmmm... Rin and Inuyasha should play then Inuyasha would have some pent up energy worked off and same for Rin. Thanks for answering the question. Mandorallen just had to go and annoy Inuyasha some more at least he apologized. Poor Inuyasha no matter what he does... somehow something always interfers with his realtionship with Kagome. I wonder if Mandorallen will go and apologize to Kagome for causing troubles. (grumbles it was partly his fault for making -to Inuyasha- moves on her.) I can see it now.. someone is going to tell that man to just shut up and butt out. lol!! Sweet!! A tender touch, giving Rin crayons!! Loved it!! Love this story!! Inuyasha certainly seems to be really capivated more by the uniform that Kagome is wearing again... seems he momentairly forgotten that outfit... chuckles. I love the blush fest that is going on!! And Sesshoumaru caught him!! jumps up and down... Love is a Spectator sport. lol!! (having more cream soda..) Oh my gawd!! Rin asked Sesshoumaru to colour with her.. Way too Kawaii!! Though if Inuyasha wasn't there and snickering... would he? Would Sesshoumaru become one of those pets that loves to chew on crayons when your not opening? (my cats do) I really enjoy also how you express Sesshouamru's curiousity. It is a true pleasure to read. Not many writers (besides my favs) can paint these so forgotten characteristics in Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha as well. Kudos!! Bravo!! More blushing!! Kagome bent over in that skirt of hers and Inuyasha took notice!! Ouch!! They bonked noggings. That probrably made Kagome see stars. (Inuyash ahs a hard head, so he probrably only got the pain.)
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Reviewed By: OpinioVana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 12:45 PDT
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Ooh…. Do you think that it's possible to become addicted to an author's writings? I do because I've been jones'n for a fix of yours so I re-read your story (again)… I LOVE it, but that's nothing new. Alright… I forget why I'm writing this… I think my prescription just kicked in cuz now I'm tired… I'm sick and tired of being sick and tired… wait this is a review right? I know I wanted to say something…. Oh never mind, I doubt I'll even post this.
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Reviewed By: LidaWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 15:43 PDT
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hey wat happened to ur fanfic? lol is ok i found it agian!! lol its brilaint like normal keep it up! :)
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Reviewed By: OpinioVana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh… a Koga POV. Poor guy is just as lost now emotionally as he is physically. Being that he is in the strange unknown world and Kags is willingly mated to Inu. Even though he never really had Kags you've got to feel a tiny itty bit sorry for the guy. Except for all of the crap he was pulling by grabbing Kags and his mere presence sent Rin spiraling back to relive he death basically. No matter how I feel about the guy, I have to wonder just what important task that Koga had to complete… I mean isn't that way the Voice kept Inu from killing him? That's another thing… how in the world was the Voice able to keep Inu from ripping Koga's throat out? Inu was in full demon mode right? That last time is went into that mode even Kags had a difficult time managing him and if it weren't for his sword… well I'm just glad he got his sword back that time. Can the Voice physically control Inu's actions or did it just say something VERY persuasive to Inu that you didn't tell us? Because wouldn't Inu be enraged this time since not only did 1. Koga not believe Kags would have mated with Inu 2. Koga had his hands on Kags and 3. It was found out that should we say…Rin & Koga have history. And that brings me back to Rin. I really want to know how Rin will react now that she knows that the man from her nightmares is not only alive but also very near. I mean Koga was acting very familiar with both Inu & Kags when Rin was near. I do hope that Inu & Kags familiarity with Koga will not disrupt the trust between Rin and the pair. But I doubt that would happen since Rin was able to trust Poledra and she is of wolf… oh damn I do hope Rin will still trust Poledra. So many questions! I mean now is Rin going to stay by Sess's side 24/7 seeking security from her protector? Since this time when Sess left her sight Koga came and with Sess by her side Koga left. Or is she going to withdrawal from the world because of the trauma that seeing Koga caused? Or… Or is she going to forgive and forget? You know out of sight out of mind like some children are… but Rin isn't any normal child… Damn… I always have so many questions regarding Rin... please say you are working on the next chapter and will have it up sooner than you expected… I know that's just very wishful thinking.
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Title: Chapters 10- 12
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie nsi On: July 16, 2006 08:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well the other day I was soo happy I decided to read more!! I also decided to list you in my Literary Goddess Grouping. So that is the title I'll use in my reviews for you. In Chap 10-Inuyasha showed concern about his youkai side. Is that what happened in chap 9? Oh MY GAWD!! Sesshoumaru is apologizing even more to Inuyasha and wanting to become brothers!! Shocker!! But very pleasant!! I forgot to include in the other review..I loved it when Polgara swatted away Kagura's attack like a pesky fly. I really love how you are progressing and maturing the two brothers slowly. It speaks volumes of your grasp on the characters. I have see other writers(non goddesses) that have Inu and Sess have a girl-cry fest and do a fluff type of bonding-you know the skipping picking flowers making bracelets for each other type of deal within minutes of confession. You have kept it realistic like Inufan625 and Doggieearlover. I bow to you!! KUDOS!! Whoot! Whoot!! I did laugh when Inuyasha complained he could do it himself but really couldn't without Sesshoumaru then Kagome. And the line about Quit Touching Me- I had a Bill Cosby moment..lol.. giggles..Then using his sheathed sword to poke his brother away!! I was laughing for quite awhile. Ugh.. Ce'nedra drives me around the bend. I'm with the Inu brothers.. Cringing and covering the ears..I really liked the part with the Orb. I had forgotten it had a personality. I wonder if Kagome will be able to touch it? I think Naraku will definitely be interested in it as well. I love it soo much when ear rubbing is involved.. Sighs happily!! He said Mate!! Bounces around the rooma nd computer happily squealing with gleeful delight!! And Kagome then being Kagome making certain she understands exactly what Inuyasha asked of her. Right ON!!Chap 11-Another bath scene..with Inu brothers!!DROOOOLLSSSS..Nuts.. was secretly hoping for a water fight..pouts.. maybe later..I liked how they tried to be all macho with why they protected Rin/Kagome. cute. That devious Sesshoumaru!! He ensured the soap would be slippery for Inuyasha!! Again I commend you on having Polgara and Kagome talk!! I really like the influence she is providing for Kagome. And Kagome was right about Inuyasha's behaviour and the "cast". lol!! And the bonding scene with Durnik!! Excellent work there Goddess!! Really brillantly done!! And the sneak attack from Rin!! That was also awesome work!! Yes, Inuyasha and Rin are good playmates.. They both have boundless energy they can work off by playing!! That is a sweetly touching idea you incorperated!! Poor Inu-Kagome picking on him about his eating skills while Bledin just grossed everyone out. Chap 12-Barak!! Right on.. I've always like that burly monster of a red head!! Barak gets so upset when someone pokes fun at his ship.. he is so proud of it.. giggles!! Can someone please kick Kagome..She is always so easily swayed by flowery and vapid talk. Poor Inuyasha..trusting his instincts and getting the short end of the stick again.. That was just mean and cruel of Kagome. He was only protecting her. I have always wondered if Garath Barak bristled would their beards also bristle? Oh..no..The Bear Cult!!!and they have targeted Inuyasha!! Hooray for Sesshoumaru defending his brother!! And Thank you (chould have done this in first review) Having Inuyasha being smart and intelligent!!And Sesshouamru trying to cover up for the Half breed comment. Loved the kiss!! She finally said yes!! Please keep up the excellent work!! You Totally Rock!!
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 21:06 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about getting it in threes! I almost felt sorry for Koga (almost). First finding out that InuYasha had claimed Kagome as his mate, then getting it from Poledra, and then the realization that Kagome had actually chosen InuYasha instead of him. And on top of all of that, InuYasha could have turned him into mincemeat pretty easily in his youkai form if the "Voice" hadn't stopped him. I almost couldn't believe it when Kouga took off with his tail between his legs. And good ole Ginta and Hakaku, there to talk some sense into him. At least they were smart enough to be afraid of InuYasha in that form. And what will the others do now that they realize that InuYasha has been in contact with the voice? Will he finally ask Garion about it, or are they gonna try to corner him and just make him mad? And poor Rin, I hope she gets over her fright quickly. Hopefully, Sesshomaru will be able to calm her down. Another excellent chapter. Figures, I go over to a friend's house for dinner and discover you had posted your new one when I got home. Outstanding as always, and I can't wait for the next.
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Title: chapters 7-9
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie nsi On: July 15, 2006 17:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am back again and with a review of chapters 7 to 9. Well I am quite thrilled to have the chance to read such a wonderful story!! It's Awesome!! Woo-Hoo!! and a Whoot!! Back in the other three chapters I began to get a feel that it's Naraku. In chap 7-you kept Inuyasha so true to character with him being concerned over Kagome and Sesshoumaru. The flashlight incident was entertaining. I think our Inu was slightly jealous. He wants to keep all things Kagome to himself. funny how Inuyasha seems to be discovering Kagome is a female and has..ohh my-breasts! And the Carmel scene!! TOOO cute!! Sesshoumaru perplexed by carmel..The comment Belgarath made about Domesticity was funny also!! Pictures Inu in a pink maids outfit and featherduster-chokes...Eyes wide!! Inuyasha kissed her in the middle of brushing her teeth!! That is just weeeiiirrrddd...Never knew he be the type to have a toothbrush fetish...Poor Inu he going to be one stressed puppy and burn out soon if he keeps this up and Sesshoumaru who knew he was a matchmaker?...The spacing again was a little confusing with scene changes. I really like Polgara!! What a great influence she will have on Kagome. This is what she needs a mature woman figure not related who can talk to her properly about males. Not like with Sango and her violent streak (though WELLL earned violent streak).blinks..blinks again..blinks again...Did Sesshoumaru just say thankyou to Inuyasha and Kagome?..shocked...Did like the horse thief scene..GOOD!!! And the bath scene wonderful. The boys take their baths to aviod Polgara's wrath too much!! I wonder if Inuyasha will want a amulet for Kagome?..More about the Prophecy!! Awesome!! This is GREAT!! I take it this is the first that Inuyasha has ever had "stiffening" of parts..giggles madly.. sputters and laughs..I am wondering if it is Naraku who is stirring the demons. Chapt 8-More about the Prophecy!! I like-y this bunches!!The cycle of overprotective-overaviodence-blushing-fighting is the best part!! Sesshoumaru just doesn't know what he is missing!! I must say I enjoyed this chapter!! Am little disgruntled with Silk. Never liked him. Wonder if Inuyasha will take him down a few notches...And Yes! Kagome did something wrong!! Always jumping to the worst conclusion and always making Inuyasha pay for it like a very, very spoilt child!! I wish someday...Kagome would get a taste of her own medicine..And Ouch! Poor Inu not getting to finish. Gotta hurt..POOR Inuyasha. After so long being told how worthless and tainted he is he can get over his self hate. Chapt 9-What is it about the Will and turnips? Is it their colouring? I do so enjoy just how you are confusing the dickens out of Kagome!! I love the phrase "A bored and confused hanyou was the worst" I really loved that!! Again Great inter-action with Kagome and Polgara. Ohh!! The Tension!! I love it!! The fight scene was going so nicely and Inuyasha was going to release some stress when people interfer. YES!! Polgara has done it again!! I love that woman!! You do David and Rumiko so much honour!! You Rock!! And now that Kagura is in it!! Damnn.. I am shocked I was right it was Naraku...I can't wait for the next batch of chapters!! Please keep up the most excellent work!!
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Reviewed By: OpinioVana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a wonderful writer and this is a terrific story. I have enjoyed reading every chapter since the beginning and eagerly await the update! I adore the interactions between Sess and Rin! Also the development of the relationship between Inu & Sess is interesting they are finally acting like brothers. However, I do have a few questions about Rin and the whole sorcery deal. Does Rin know that the raven/crow that seems to be showing up and following her places isn't a 'nice' birdy? Or is she still to naive and innocent to think that a bird would be anything but a bird? Or am I completely reading it wrong and the bird is just a bird? Can Rin communicate across distance utilizing thought alone or only when the other person is in the same room? I think I have too much time on my hands to be re-reading from the beginning your creative fanfic and am thinking too far into it so I'll stop asking questions… for now.
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Title: chapters 4-6
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie -nsi On: July 11, 2006 16:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOWWW!!! I just finished reading chapters 4 to 6 and I must say WOW!! That was awesome!! You really have the characters done pat! I actually feel as though I am reading from both David Eddings and Rumiko Takahashi books!! I loved how you explained the presence of Inuyasha, Kagome, Rin and Sesshoumaru by using the Codex!! What a great touch!! Kudos!! Bravo!! The spacing that divides the different scenes was a bit wider so it helped with the transition. In chapter four, I liked how you got into the discussion about demons... very nicely done... Smooth and tasteful!! I was so pleased by the introduction of Aldur into the story! WOW!! It was amazing, truly. You kept him perfect! I enjoyed how the boys reacted and how Aldur described their hearts and then the comment about Kagome. Loved the blush fest that went on afterwards between Kagome and Inuyasha. Laughed when Sesshoumaru grumbled in his mind about them having to stop that while he was there. Then in chapter five I laughed at poor Inuyasha and the horse!! And his horse likes him!! I have a piccie for you about this though I didn't draw it!! If you like I'll post it on my journal. What an amazingly touching scene you wrote with Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru at nighttime with Kagome and Rin. That was really sweet. Inuyasha using his haori to keep the girls warm. I enjoyed how awe-struck Inuyasha was with Cho-Hag's castle Stronghold! That was great!! I really liked it!! I was bowled over with the court scene with Kagome's dress!! That was awesome. She sounded so beautiful!! You kept her in character nicely!! Polgar loves to dress up the girls under her wing, Soo true to her character!! I love the choice of colour! Awesome!! Poor Inuyasha caught staring at her chest!! Also very Inuyasha!! I was waiting for the 'Miroku' comment but realized that would have just taken away form the elegant and beautiful scene you were painting for us. Thank you for this story!! It's fast becoming one of my favourites!! Again you did an amazing job on Kagome- having her over-react and misinterept Inuyasha's actions during the court session. Sometimes she needs to have a smack to the head. Polgara was good at that. and the scene with the card game!! Hiliarious!! Thank you for sharing this story with us and please keep up the great work!! Can't wait to review the next three chapters!!
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Title: chapters 1-3
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie-nsi On: July 09, 2006 13:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you can forgive me... I had only just started reading your story now. I think I might have to do this a few chapters at a time or I'll get too swamped.. Sorry... First,I really, really liked how you had started the story off. Very nicely done! Kudos to you! A treat! I enjoyed how you had Sesshoumaru meet BelGarion and Polgara first. Very nice. I laughed at how she used her vast armoury of skills to put the demon lord in his place. Washing/drying dishes!! very good. The sad part is you kept Ce-Nedra true to character... cause I still wanna throttle her like I want to when I read the Belgariad/ Mallerion series. I hope someone teaches her to leave Inuyasha alone. Then again Garion is quite whipped by her... Almost the same way Inuyasha is with Kagome. LOVED with way Inuyasha was when they met with Beldin!! lol!! I nearly fell out of my chair on that!! I wonder how Kagome would have reacted? Liked how Inuyasha's tummy made itself known... so Inuyasha!! I can see Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru forming an Alliance in this type of situation where they don't know what is going on. I like how you have kept the characters so in character while making this story!! I also loved how Jaken was stepped on by Silk. That was awesome. Someone else who does what Sesshoumaru does to that little toad. I did partily gag when Inuyasha mentioned that he might eat Jaken if he wasn't slimey... I think Inuyasha would have gotten turned off food completely if he did... giggles... And shoving Tessaiga up Sesshoumaru's butt would probably result in one sword barrier being activated and one VERY ticked off Sesshoumaru being launched off like a rocket... Interesting results... pictures it in her head. The only thing I found confusing was when you switched the scenes. It was close to the previous scene so I kept thinking they were one in the same, until about halfway through when I figured out-oh.. this is a new scene.. And then Kagome going on about her tests.. very Kagome-ish. And Sesshoumaru got introduced to Beldin!! what a hiliarious scene that was!! Please keep up the great work!! Look forward to reading then reviewing the next 3 chapters.
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Reviewed By: YukiNoMiko On: June 10, 2006 05:35 PDT
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hey. i love this fic so much!! it's my #1 fave in all the fics i've read! inu seems a bit OOC and i thought he was a too harsh on shippo on that other chapter.. still i love it! but could pls lessen his swearwords? the way he acts in the fic, it's like inuyasha is... barbaric. so pls, could you lessen his swears?
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 10:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great chapter! It was nice to have Sessomaru's actions at the shop explained (I couldn't figure out how he would NOT know what was going on), but then to have Koga finally show up. Somehow I knew he wouldn't take Kagome being mated to InuYasha very well. Though, there at the end, I wasn't certain if he should be more frightened of Inuyasha or Poledra (or was it Polgara that was there?). And now the Voice has been outed by InuYasha's demon, no less. And will Sesshomaru have to explain how he has the power to raise the dead? What can I say except this was a really wonderful chapter, and I can't wait for the next.
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Reviewed By: GothicCotton On: June 08, 2006 08:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!!!!!!!
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Title: Vickey
Reviewed By: mnesai1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 01:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story. I can see the buildings and the sites in my mind's eye. Much like Lord of the Rings. You are a very good writer. But I am writing because I'm sure the other fans would agree, we WANT MORE!!!Please hurry and update. Dying to know what happens next
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