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 Title: YAY!!!!
Reviewed By: RingoSango [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 30, 2006 22:53 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
your story is awesome!!! i love reading it even though it's taking me awhile. i love long stories. i've read many and yours to me is the best!!! keep up with the good work and i hope that you will keep writing and maybe you'll write some of your own stories.
 Reviewed By: NiffStral  On: May 28, 2006 09:57 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hello! It's me, NiffStral, if for some reason you aren't reading my name. Well, since they deleted this at ff.net, I'm reviewing here. Since I told you I wouldn't review this author's note, I'm not really saying anything about the fanfic, just to tell you I'll start reviewing here. Coincedentally, I'm also talking to you right now, through MSN. Huh.
 Reviewed By: New Fan  On: May 24, 2006 13:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
Congrats on graduating. It must have been very exciting. I hope that you find a job really soon with all the things happening about oursource and everything--which I think it will not have effected you. I'm greatly looking forward to reading the next chapter when it comes available.
 Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover (nsi)  On: May 24, 2006 10:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
Congrats on both graduating and on your capstone project winning first place for Best Drama!! I assumed you were busy with real life, this being the time of year for graduations and the like. Good luck in your job hunt, and I anxiously await for this adventure to continue. It's really getting good!!
 Title: Congratulations!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2006 21:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Your story has won Second Place for Best Drama Fiction from the Feudal Association. Your award can be found here - http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2006awards/Best_Drama_Fic_2 nd.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
 Reviewed By: ganzil  On: May 02, 2006 05:53 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just wanted to let you know how much I have been enjoying this fic. I almost didn't start reading this since I don't usually read crossovers, but once I opened the first page and found out it was a crossover with the Belgariad and Mallorean (which I love), I had to give your story a try. You've done a great job of integrating the two groups of characters and giving them a good storyline to work with. Your fic has the same satisfying blend of action, humor, romance and drama that makes the Eddings works so much fun to read. Thanks for writing such a well-conceived and executed fic. (And Inuyasha interacting with other characters, not to mention the dry voice, is priceless!)
 Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 20, 2006 20:19 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OH NEW ATTACK, poor inu getting all confused cause of the voice, sorry i didnt review last time, my cau was up, oh iv started the malloreon i wonder what part inu play in this. DONT LEAVE ME HANGGING, UPDATE SOON *bring in truck load of snickerdoodles* got milk?
 Title: Chapter 60+
Reviewed By: WinterMoon/LaLaMoon  On: April 18, 2006 22:18 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi... I've been reading your fic for awhile now. I'm liking the updates. Please. Update again soon. Moon.
 Reviewed By: New Fan  On: April 18, 2006 17:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Sess-chan is still PO about that incident with Rin?? Boy can he hold a grudge. I see my Rin is showing off her new found ability. Got Inuyasha jaw on the ground. Great chapter as always update soon.
 Title: WOW! Just WOW!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 18, 2006 08:11 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Holy cow! That was certainly worth the wait! (though in reality, it really wasn't that long). I can't wait until we find out more about Sesshomaru/Rin - he certainly has become VERY possessive of her! And the battle, the fog, the blue Wind Scar - it was completely captivating. I could not read fast enough to see what happened. I can't wait for the next installment since it seems like things may be getting a bit exciting from here on out.
 Title: The Artist Formally Known as EmilyHigurashi
Reviewed By: FullmetalFangirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 13, 2006 19:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, FarAwayEyes! (This is EmilyHigurashi, btw. i made an account and i also wrote a fanfic about fruits basket! Please read it and review it if you have the time - i would really vaule your opinion ^^ ) Anyway, I'm getting worried 'bout you!! No rush in getting the next chapter up, I just hope you aren't too stressed out right now. Just remember your fans love you!!! Keep up the good work! :D
 Reviewed By: Leo_mae  On: April 05, 2006 08:33 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok well since aff is still not working properly I'll just review on here. I didn't like this chapter very much, but I just don't like Jaken. I understand though that this is filler and is necessary. And I think I've figured it out. I went back and pretty much re-read the entire story, I noticed that you made a mistake too. Inuyasha tore the scarf when he first saw Kag after she was attcked. But oh well. Anyway that voice in Inu's head, it's that damn orb isn't it? That's why it told him to talk to Garion cuz the orb talks to Garion. And I think I understand the whole thing between Sess and Rin now. Well update soon ok ja!!!
 Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: tootalltygerlily [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 03, 2006 23:40 PDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations, your story has been nominated for "Best Drama Fiction" at the Feudal Association. Voting will be held through May 1st, 2006 and winners will be notified shortly thereafter. Feel free to join our group and/or help us spread the word about our group! The official website for the group - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The yahoo group where nomination/voting takes place - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ If you have any questions, feel free to email Dark Avenger (the owner) at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com
 Reviewed By: New Fan  On: April 01, 2006 18:51 PST
Comment/Review:
When I read this story, I would have thought that what you just wrote was something I miss when I was watching the Inuyasha eposide on Sesshoumaru. I would have wished that they would wrote more about Inu's brother because he is such an awesome character. I was wondering did you made up Sess jounrey traveling Japan or did you read it from its creator because the way you described how he existed was so realistic that I thought I miss reading or seeing any of Inu eposides and movie (trust I seen them all in Japanese version). Great chapter as all ways and I hope the next chapter will be Sess my favorite. Update soon.
 Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 01, 2006 00:44 PST
Comment/Review:
Hey Zelix. I just wanted to tell you that I remembered why I had not been reading your fic. I'm not familiar with the characters outside of Inuyasha and they were introduced so quickly that I couldn't keep them straight. So I guess that I need to read the other category or something in order to truly appreciate your fic for what it is. However, I have read everything that you have posted and really enjoyed it even though I kept getting the characters mixed up. I read it all in one sitting and remembered quite a bit from when you had first posted it on AFF. Inuyasha and Kagome need to get over their insecurities. It's beginning to feel almost narcissistic. They've made some progress, but like most humans, keep hitting the same pothole over and over again. Something needs to wake those two up before it becomes imperative that they have total and complete trust, which is where I'm sure that you are leading. Sometimes I just want to slap both of them. Hehe. See, I am getting into the characters that I know. I like the metal smith. He intrigues me. Oh, so does Rin and Sesshoumaru's relationship. Hehe, I wonder if she will change her features to look more 'womanly' now that she has discovered her new powers--which by the way are totally awesome. I like the varied powers that the other characters possess. Love the wolf. Oh my, and I loved the battle where Sesshoumaru lost it. There are a lot of places that really excited me and I will probably read up on the other characters. Love ya, Snow
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