| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ] |
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Reviewed By: kfa453 On: February 09, 2010 18:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
an update finally good to know kagomes fine well till next time
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: February 02, 2010 18:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. It been a long time since you have updated. I hope that the next update will not take so long. I am sorry about your kitty. I hopet that your kitty has bring to you and your family great joy before it passed away. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2010 06:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for continuing to write this chapter, you have an impressive amount of perseverance. Nice to see that Inuyasha's full moon nights won't be so stressful anymore. Maybe he can be encouraged to train his sword skills more- Even if Tetsaiga doesn't transform, it may be useful as a normal sword against human/near human opponents, such as the group is most often facing.
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2010 20:11 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy to see the new chapter! Of course poor InuYasha can't help but to feel guilty about what happened, and I don't blame him for being pissed that Kagome could been hauled off to some other alter and sacrificed. but in the end, she unleashed her tremendous amount of power and saved him - those Gromlins didn't have a chance. And I'm glad the InuYasha finally asked Garion who the voice in his head was and now knows that even though it might annoy him, it really is on his side. It has to be so hard for him to deal with something he can't see, touch or smell since he depends on his senses so much. I'm glad no one in this battle is any the worse for wear - but sooner or later we'll have to find out what happened to Rin, Miroku and Sango along with Silk, and just what Kouga has been up to. I look forward to future updates!
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Reviewed By: Lady Yoko On: January 07, 2010 17:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this story is one of my favorites. The creativity and originality is just amazing. I enjoyed this story a lot and so have all of my friends. You could say we got hooked. If it were up to me I'd say that this should become a real novel. It will be and is a very popular story. So I think you deserve a good overall rating. Thank you for writing this story and I hope you continue it and finish it. Lady Yoko
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Reviewed By: Charles Watford On: August 02, 2009 11:53 PDT
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Thanks for continuing this wonderful story. Now that the manga is finished and it has been revealed that Onigumo truly loved Kikio and that it wasn't just some twisted obsession or lust, I was wondering if that was going to have an impact on this story or not. Another question is concerning the sacred jewel: Is Naraku going to complete it in this world and become the uber Naraku I loved at the end of the manga or no?
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Reviewed By: kfa453 On: June 24, 2009 16:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the story and cant wait for more aww i wonder what happened to poor rin until next time
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Title: GREAT!!!
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2009 11:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon... i know, i know maybe not in the next 15 min or tomorrow...just don't wait a year to update ok ...and why it says that its completed????
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Reviewed By: iPoe On: June 14, 2009 18:54 PDT
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Glad to see you're back! I've been away from the computer for a week and it was nice to have a good read to come back to!
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: June 14, 2009 06:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. Well worth the wait. I am saddened by the news of David Eddings passing. I have enjoyed his work and was really looking forward to what else his mind would come up with.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 20:57 PDT
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What a surprise...I didn't expect to see Koga this time around, but it was a really good chapter...I really liked your characterization of Koga here.
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Reviewed By: TakaRaiIshikawa On: May 23, 2009 16:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! I love this. it's been fabulous keeping up with this. I've been reading for two years now. please keep going.
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Reviewed By: ladygriddlebone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 19:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I meant to do this a long time ago, but real life got in the way. Sorry about that! I've been enjoying this story ever since I first discovered it. You have a real knack for juggling all the characters (from two different universes, no less!) and sub-plots, while continuing to move toward a larger, more encompassing plot. I've actually really enjoyed your development of all of the characters and relationships, even the ones I don't normally care for, or wasn't familiar with upon starting this fic. Your Sesshomaru is one of very few that can bring me into that character's mind, for example. That said, I was really glad to see another chapter with Miroku and Silk. You've left us with many a cliffhanger for those two, and I'm happy to finally see some resolutions for them. Loved the sequences here between the two of them; Silk's fear and anxiety were very raw and palpable, and I had a real sense of Miroku's desperation to get the other man under control before he could get them into a more dangerous situation than they were already in. It was interesting to see Silk's reaction to Miroku's wind tunnel, and Miroku's reasoning for behaving the way that he does. As a Miroku/Sango fangirl (as I'm sure you know), the last part of this chapter made me quite happy. There's something that's just so sad about the way Miroku and Sango constantly keep each other at arm's length, refusing to get too close. Miroku's stubbornness is so sweet and sad. He wants to protect Sango at all costs, without taking into account that Sango may not want to be protected. I'm glad Silk was there to at least try to talk some sense into him. Otherwise he's practically asking to get brained with the Hiraikotsu. I only hope that Silk's right, and everything will work out in the end. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Brilliant!
Reviewed By: Twilight_Alien On: April 16, 2009 20:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story. It is a shame though that you only happen to update it twice a year, but on the other hand it means that I will still be enjoying new chapters for years to come! ahahah! In the meanwhile I really need to get my hands on those books, oh yes I do! I had no interest for crossover stories before reading yours, and I must say it is better than many "pure" Inuyasha fanfics. Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Twilight_Alien On: April 11, 2009 07:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is excellent. Your Inuyasha CC are in character (spot-on, I should say), and the world in which they are is highly interesting. Makes me want to read more about this Mallorean world! Congratulations!
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