| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jade Cricket On: September 22, 2005 22:36 PDT
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Hello! I came across this yesterday, and seeing as it has both of my favourite series, I couldn't resist trying it out...and I absolutely love it! Read the whole fanfic in one sitting...haha, got to sleep round about 5 in the morning, but it was worth it! I notice you update within a week or so...pleeeeease update soon! Can't wait to see how everyone's going to react to Rin's new abilities! (I bet she's going to mention the birds talking to Pol...which will then start that whole thing about the Will and the Word coming with the onset of puberty, right?)
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 22, 2005 21:03 PDT
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Ok. first of all i have to say that your evil to do this to rin. but i belive it will help her more later to fight of whatever may attack her, so your forgiven. Second of all i'm extremly glad that you didn't post this late at night. i'm supposed to be asleep before my husband gets home from work, but you happen to keep me awake. and third, thank you for two more great chapters. they where very will written. the only problem i had was i thought according to the books, birds mostly talked about themselves. but then everything has a purpose. Keep up the great work. luvs ya.....
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 05:32 PDT
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having rin be able to use the will and the word was a twist i was not expecting. I'm just wondering what sesshoumaru is going to do to garion when he finds out that he is the causing rin so much pain. and your right, watching fluffy hunt in human form is deffently more enjoyable. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: The Journey to the City of Enless Night On: September 21, 2005 00:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
teribly addicting this it. its 3am yet i cant stop reading...
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 22:06 PDT
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thanks for another chapter. was expecting two at once. and to answear your question. As a giant dog, dripping acid and leaving a burning trail....lol
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Title: I love fluffy hunting!!!!
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 21:23 PDT
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terrific. Sesshoumaru hunting with grace and ease. loved it. and need more of it....i know i'm bad.. keep up the good work and add a story to that poem. it's my first one!!
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Title: your very welcome
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 12:54 PDT
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your welcome for my last comment. just finished reading this chapter, and i love the way inuyasha "hunted" that guy. personally i belive he should have got a lot more. fluffy tranforming and helping chase the sob.... btw...i have a poem out, called silent tears. if you have a chance give it a read. thanks for a great chapter... luvs ya
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: September 09, 2005 15:26 PDT
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Knifty, it's good to hear from you again!! Was getting kinda worried about you since there hadn't been a peep from you since 8-27. I live in Washington state myself, the only thing I have to worry about is earthquakes. Just for grins, here's another quote from my story idea. "If she chooses to keep her power, you have mentioned this before, but you have made no effort to elaborate. You will explain it to me now." The Lord of the West said in a tone that while mild, demanded obedience. Zaadren growled, pulling a hand down his face. "Fine, but we need to be where no one else can see or hear us."
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 15:24 PDT
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I grew up reading this series. it was the very first my aunt lent me. you managed to get all the right personalites to mix lovely. i must say you do David Eddings proud. keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: September 06, 2005 12:36 PDT
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Hope you don't live where the hurricane hit. Just drop a line and let us know if you're still alive, please. Your long absence worries me.
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 05:12 PDT
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a very interesting story line, although I am not familliar with the crossover it has been so well done that it matters not where the orginal crossover storyline takes place. I have been trying dessperatly to put a character's pesonality to a name but am being baffeled to say the least. I wish to know if the character's introduced in this story are of original design or if not the name of the author they where borrowed from please, If they are borrowed then I would like to read more on the author. Great Story I look forward to seeing the rest of it unfold.
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 27, 2005 09:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapters. The shoe thing was hilarious. How old are Kagome and InuYasha in this story. I assumed they were in their late teens which would make Rin only 4 or five years younger. I love this story, so keep up the good work and I will be watching for updates.
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Reviewed By: chey On: August 26, 2005 19:58 PDT
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this is really good you should have moer reviews than this i cant wait for the next cahpter.
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: August 26, 2005 10:01 PDT
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Gotta love the change of heart Sess has about Inu. The later chapters are even cooler. Just for grins, here's a quote from that story idea of mine: "Remind me whose bright idea it was to go sightseeing in Feudal Japan?"
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 23, 2005 20:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for a great update. I wonder how they are going to hide his human night from everyone, and lets hope they don't get attacked before the morning.
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