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| "A Tale of Ever After" Reviews/Comments [ 303 ] | | Pages (21): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2013 17:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, I really like Koume and Kimi, and hell Kaede too while we're at it. And go Koume for actually hitting the right buttons! Chiya turning white at the mention of her mother finding out...awesome! Poor Michio, but good timing on Tameo and co. Now we get to hear about their fabulous plan, although bits and pieces of it have already been revealed here and there. Sounds like it's a win/win/win x however many people are involved. They get to get Morio out of Haname's hair, check, they've got a place to stick Chiya so she's not homeless nor a burden on Kimi, and it's sort of a punishment for her at the same time which she definitely deserves, check, and bringing in some of the poorer village guys to help also but as paid work helps those families while saving their pride, while also helping Chiya out so she's not stuck with Morio all by herself, check and check. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. :-) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2013 15:58 PDT
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Woo-hoo! LOL, go Koume! I like that woman. Oh I can't wait to see the smoke coming out of Chiya's ears, LOL. Or by some miracle will she actually realize that Koume's right? Doubt it, LOL, but her face might turn an interesting shade of red at the remark that the whole village has been talking about how she fawns over Miroku so indignantly. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter! =-) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2013 11:42 PDT
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I agree with Inuyasha. If the women didn't even figure it out then Miroku's kicking himself too hard. Yeah, on the one hand he should have seen it more than anyone else, being Sango's husband, but on the other hand Sango was deliberately trying to hide it from him; he's not a mind reader. Poor Chiya, not, LOL. Can't believe she tried to pull that 'how would you feel if' crap on Kaede. Chiya just got kicked out, not like her whole family is dead; yeah, Kaede knows what it feels like to lose everyone, sheesh. Good for Kaede, though, not rising to her bait and remaining relatively calm. A little exasperated, perhaps, but otherwise calm. And I didn't even think about Chiya's children, LOL. Well, Aki's out of the house anyway so he's not really a concern, and since Michio is the one who kicked Chiya out I'd assume he's prepared to take over duties such as cooking for the time being. Awesome update, as always. Definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next. :-) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2013 15:29 PDT
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Wonderful update, as always. I'm glad Kimi's finally learning Chiya's true colors, and poor Miroku, too. Somehow, I have a feeling Chiya's not going to have very many friends left (if any) when the dust settles, but she did it to herself so I don't pity her. I pity everyone having to deal with her, LOL. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2013 17:03 PDT
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Poor Kaede, having been left totally out of the loop like that. Fujime and Koume will fill her in right quick though, I imagine. Now here's hoping she can get Chiya to take those 'calm down' herbs she brought, LOL. The continuation of the Inu/Kag scene at the beginning was cute, too. Keep up the great work! :-) | Reviewed By: MA On: April 05, 2013 05:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Awww, I love this story so much! Such a fascinating world you've built up. And now that Rin's back on the scene, I'm positively squirming with anticipation! It's always a treat when you reference her or Sesshoumaru. And I wonder what's going on with Chiya, hmmm... Is there any chance that Kouga will make an appearance in this fic? | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2013 14:11 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww... Inu/Kag WAFF! Yay! After a day like today, I'd want another day off, too. Maybe a vacation hut over in that area where he took her before, so they can escape there for a few days at a time when need be, LOL. With all the craziness that happened in the last few chapters it's easy to forget that Kaede was left out of the loop, too, so good job bringing mention of her back into it, and explaining why she never ended up showing up at Hisa's, having to take care of those other village men after she was done treating Aki. And just when she was sitting down to tea, now she's got to go give Chiya a valium, LOL. And it's all Inuyasha's fault! After all, if he hadn't fallen off of the roof then Kimi wouldn't have had the opportunity to offer to fix his sleeve, and thus Chiya wouldn't have seen what a kindhearted woman Kimi really is. She still would've yelled at Inuyasha for even being there, of course, but butterfly effect and all, maybe things wouldn't have played out exactly the same without the Inu/Kimi-sleeve interaction and thus Michio wouldn't have demanded she give an apology she just couldn't bring herself to give. So yes, it's all Inuyasha's fault, LOL. Shame on you! *snort* Can't expect somebody like Chiya to even remotely consider the possibility that it's her fault, now can we? Excellent update, as always. Definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next, and how you wind this day/arc down to a close. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2013 15:39 PDT
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Good update! Looks like this day is finally getting ready to wind down. I don't blame Inuyasha for just wanting to go home after everything that's happened. I'm sure they're close enough to finished on the temple that they don't need him for the last bit of it. Poor thing, getting cornered by all those women, LOL. At least he managed to spit out a concise rundown of what happened, the why he really can't answer; like he said they'd have to ask Chiya herself. How the hell is he supposed to know why she did what she did? I can understand their concern, though, 'cause yeah in a small village like that, a major upset like this really does affect everybody else. LOL, Chiya most certainly has earned the right to be talked about, hasn't she? So excellent work, as always. Looking forward to the next chapter, as always. :-) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2013 20:41 PDT
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LOL, poor Inuyasha. I know that "I just want to go home!" feeling well, LOL. Really good update, of course, not that I was really expecting anything less than your usual fabulousness. Really liked that little snippet you added with them mentioning his mother. The women talking about making the flower garden into a vegetable garden was cute, too. Reminds me of what I eventually want to do in my front courtyard, doing a Japanese-esque style of garden but exclusively out of edibles. Don't have a shrine kami living in my garden whom I'd get into arguments with over how it should all be done, so it's all good, LOL. Looking forward to your next update, as always. :-) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2013 11:43 PDT
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Good update! Loved that scene with Inuyasha and Kagome out on the veranda. LOL, I like how Riki was shocked and concerned when Inuyasha admitted to falling off the roof, but Kagome didn't even bat an eye and just thought about his poor kosode. He is rather rough on his undershirt; makes me wonder what he did to repair it before meeting Kagome, LOL. Sounds like Tameo, Tsuneo and Daitaro have gotten a few things figured out that we'll be let in on pretty soon. Definitely looking forward to Thursday's update. :-) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2013 16:55 PDT
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I completely agree; that Miroku/Sango WAFF was the WAFFiest! A much needed focus on those two for a primarily Inu/Kag centered story. Got to veer off to focus on the other members of the Inu-tachi from time to time, and Sango definitely needed to be reminded just how much Miroku loves her, and why. Fabulous chapter. Looking forward to next week's installments. :-) | Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2013 12:42 PDT
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That was such a beautiful scene between Miroku and Sango; we really saw how much love there is between them! She finally knows that no matter what, she is her husbands number one priority, alongside their children. Keep up the great work! :) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2013 16:29 PDT
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I agree with Inuyasha; it's much better to get angry over a bitch like that than feel sad, and bad about yourself. Kagome always has been at her strongest when she's defending the ones she loves, so maybe if Chiya had just torn into her, and her alone, it would've been different, but Kagome didn't have time to worry about feeling bad about herself from the put down when Chiya started tearing into Sango, and she immediately clicked over into defense mode. I'm sure she, along with the other women, will really love to hear what happened with Chiya up at the temple. Of course, first Miroku and Sango need to have their private discussion. Miroku/Sango WAFF here we come! LOL | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2013 23:15 PDT
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Fabulous update, as always. Damn you sure know how to leave it on an awesome cliffhanger, don't you? LOL. Loved the light teasing and banter between Inuyasha and Miroku. For a minute there, when you cut back to the guys at the temple, I wasn't sure if you were going to cut back to the girls or not, so I'm glad you did. We're right on the edge, now, so I'm definitely looking forward to your next update. Keep up the awesome work! :-) | Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2013 12:16 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So much DRAMA! You have a way of making me think something is settled, and then something else happens to cause the problem to come roaring back! I love this story but it really doesn't feel like I've been reading it as long as I have! You keep me so intrigued that I don't even notice the time passing by! Can't wait to see what happens next and how Miroku and Inuyasha will handle hearing what was said to their wives! Thanks again for an amazing update to an amazing story! :) | | Pages (21): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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