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 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 30, 2014 13:38 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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LOL, cute little Shippou. I'm not surprised the message went over his head. Lovely wrap up chapter! Looks like all the loose ends after the Seiji fall out have been taken care of, and we're just in time to start a brand new branch of the story. Don't you dare let anyone tell you you should end this here and start a new story for the continuation. This is a true soap opera at its finest and this was just a season finale, not the series finale. Luckily for us, the new season starts next update!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2014 15:59 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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YAY! LOL, can we still sing 'Ding dong the witch is dead' when it was a man? Crafty Shimame, appearing like Maeme like that. Just a little nudge to make sure Seiji didn't decide to change his mind. Explains why he wanted the challenge, never having believed in Grandfather Catfish in the first place. One would think if he knew for a fact the catfish was real even he would have had a small speck of doubt in his heart, even if it were just to think that perhaps Tameo would somehow bribe the catfish into take him unjustly. Believing the catfish doesn't even exist explains why he was so rambunctious for the river challenge, completely convinced he'd swim across unharmed. Finally, the play is over...but not this fabulous story! Looking forward to the next arc of adventure!
 Reviewed By: Thayet [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 24, 2014 07:42 PDT
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I'm so glad you're back and that your vacation didn't go any worse. Another fantastic chapter as always. I look forward to Wednesday and Friday (the time difference changes the days here) because I get a new chapter of this. Keep up the amazing work, I can't wait for more.
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 23, 2014 15:11 PDT
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Well worth the wait! Once they all tackled him and tied him back up I was really wondering just how in the heck Seiji was going to wind up in the river. I suppose he could have somehow gotten away from them and ran for it, but this is WAY better! The river challenge, eh? I'm sure we'll get more details on that, later. We already know what the outcome will be, LOL. Super looking forward to it!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 09, 2014 20:01 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Yeah! Let's get him! LOL. I'm sure Shimame's not done with her plan yet, knowing Kazuo didn't want Seiji's blood on any of the villagers' hands, but even so, it definitely looks like things are getting ready to come to a close. Super looking forward to the next update!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 04, 2014 18:04 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Ah, so glad to see Maeme's in good hands, and that Shimame released Inuyasha from his bubble. That he was able to stay as calm about his momentary imprisonment as he did just goes to show how much he's matured over the years, and Kagome's embarrassment over how much she used to use the rosary shows us how much she's matured as well. I'm glad you tossed in that added little comment of Daitaro's, that that's not how husbands and wives should behave. I'm not surprised he immediately made a perverted joke afterwards about what other ways Kagome can subdue Inuyasha these days, LOL. Glad Yoshio's been given the green light to lead Seiji onward. It's time to get this show on the road!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 02, 2014 19:02 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Good to see things from Maeme's point of view. I figured Kaede's medicine couldn't last forever, and it's only natural that she'd want to run to save everyone else from Seiji because that's the kind of woman she is. Good to know the kami are standing guard, and that everything is still going according to plan, or at least Shimame's new plan. Definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 28, 2014 18:57 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Yup, lots of witnesses, LOL. Stupid Seiji, that fire he started as a 'distraction' just alerted everyone to his presence. Even Inuyasha wouldn't have known he was out of the lockup otherwise. It was like a big neon sign saying hey everybody, I've escaped! LOL. I like that Kazuo manifested himself to Inuyasha and they had an actual conversation on the subject, even if he wasn't very forthcoming with details and Shimame ultimately had to create a force field 'cause Inuyasha was going to go off anyway. But you can't leave a hanyou guessing, especially one with his temper and dislike for Seiji, LOL. He needed to be made aware of the fact that the kami were out and about and that Seiji WILL get what's coming to him, and also that the blood will NOT be on his hands. Even though he didn't seem to care about that right in this moment, I'm sure later he'll be grateful. Definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 27, 2014 14:04 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I'm liking Shimame more and more, LOL. And dang it all how I wish I could do that pull myself out of time trick, LOL. I could get all my writing finished that way! I must say, it's a fabulous trick of yours to remind us all of where everyone else is, let us too see the players on the board and know where everybody is in this precise moment in time. Is Kazuo going to let Shimame tweak the ending of his play? LOL, sounds like she has a more climactic idea in mind. Can't wait to find out what it is!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 21, 2014 21:14 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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If I had a mean, bad army leader who got nearly everyone killed, I'd probably run away to save my own hide, too. BUT, knowing Seiji, I wouldn't be surprised in the slightest if his opinion of Motoharu is severely warped. He probably thinks he was an a-hole just 'cause he, oh I don't know, gave him orders, ya know, like a commanding officer is supposed to do? I certainly wouldn't have acted so cold in the face of my dead commander's ghost. He doesn't know it was just the family kami playing a trick to stall him. If it were me, I probably would've had a fairly Ebenezer Scrooge reaction, minus the not believing at first since in that time period ghosts are very real and very believed. Just goes to show just HOW warped Seiji actually is. Ah well, can't blame Yoshio for trying. It's not exactly like he can just manifest himself to grab hold of Seiji's sleeve. I'm sure he probably can, but he's not allowed. Regardless, now that Inuyasha's on the hunt I'm not so sure Seiji will make it to Miroku's, anyway. Looks like Yoshio was indeed able to stall him long enough.
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 19, 2014 18:39 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Such drama! Where's soap opera music when you need it? LOL. I don't know what to say this time, really, except I'm totally on pins and needles for Thursday's chapter!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 14, 2014 21:06 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Things are really unfolding nicely. Sneaky Chika, keeping Eiji preoccupied like that! Being an ex-bakeneko with higher intelligence than a regular cat, I wouldn't be surprised if Kazuo straight up appeared to her at some point and asked her to do him a favor, LOL, rather than creating a spiritual ball of yarn for her to blindly chase around. I bet she totally knew what she was doing the whole time, thinking 'that's it Eiji, just keep following me' LOL. So now Seiji and Yoshimi are both on the loose, an old abandoned shack is suddenly burning for no apparent reason (*cough*divergence*cough*), and there's a knock on Sango and Miroku's door. Last we saw Inu/Kag, they were out snooping around because Kagome's spidey senses were tingling. This is getting GOOD! I'm definitely looking forward to the next update!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 12, 2014 16:08 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Yoshimi, you poor ol' sod, LOL. But then, Kazuo picks his players well. All he had to do was get Yoshimi to the lockup, and he knew the most likely course of events that would follow. Maybe he should have been a drama writer in life, instead of a farmer, LOL. But then again, the analogy of planting seeds works just as well for what he's done. Yes people have freedom to choose, but a lot of people are also predictable, and so it'd be easy for a kami to set things up for those predictable people, knowing which way they'll most likely choose. Technically, he's not making anybody do anything. This is just tampering, not direct intervention like what he did with Morio. Haven't seen him in a long while, though I think in story time it's been what...one day, right? LOL. Maybe two. But we know he's doing well, because he thinks those people at the house with him are his parents, so he's behaving himself, and Chiya is pouting but otherwise doing well. The most urgent thing right now is definitely what's unfolding with Seiji, especially now that the wedding is over and done with. Definitely looking forward to Thursday's chapter!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 07, 2014 19:23 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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And all the other players take their positions on the stage... I'm not surprised she felt that swirl of luck tickle the back of her miko senses. Some things are by kami design, but as we know, people still have freedom of choice. I wonder if Kazuo wanted Kagome to choose they should investigate that sensation... But then, it would have been unlucky for him if he hadn't, and during that luck swirl nothing unlucky is happening, so there you go. I get the feeling that whatever happens, it's going to be more or less exactly what Kazuo wants to happen. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 05, 2014 17:05 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Bum Bum BUM! Good set up! Will he do it? *Nods* I think so, because of the way Seiji phrased it. Let me out otherwise my blood is on your hands...Yoshimi's not man enough to stand up to Seiji with such a threat against family and honor. He probably is already thinking now that if he doesn't do it Seiji's death will be his fault, instead of Seiji's own stupid fault for all the crap he's done. We don't even know 100% that the council was going to decide to execute him, although it was certainly possible. Either that or banishment, I'm sure. If Seiji acted repentant then it'd probably be banishment, but even though it was a good idea in theory from Yoshimi's POV it doesn't surprise me in the least, what Seiji's reaction was to that suggestion. Very obviously, this is what Kazuo wants to happen. Now let's just hope Eiji doesn't show up too early to put a monkey wrench into things. Looks like Daikoku's luck is holding out, even though the auspicious day is coming to a close, so hopefully something will distract Eiji long enough for this scene in Kazuo's 'play' to unfold correctly. In the meantime, the other scene with Inu/Kag and co. was also nice. He actually got full! (I would've lost the bet, too, LOL)
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