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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 18
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 20:14 CST
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Hahahahaha!!! I get a feeling your finally authors notes were meant for me...maybe not, could be I'm just flattering myself...*smirks* If so I can't complain since you've posted...THREE chapters today, I'll save my 'Omae o korosu' for another time...hahahahaha!!!! One observaation...If it took three chapter to cover half of Thursday how many will it take to finish the day...???(*smiles*) Looks like Duo's unwaving control is slipping, perhaps he's human after all. WOW, Duo was it so good you can't remember...guess you'll just have to try again...*hentai smirk*!! I love it...Duo's becoming so obsessed and he can't yet see why...hahahaha!!! This is sooooooo COOL!!! Calling it an day Duo? In a hurry to get back to the Hotel? *snickers* I know...he anxious to see the laptop...NOT!!! Hahahaha!!! I think this is my favorite chapter so far...it's really got me going *smiles* Okay I'll bite...whats in the brochure Meiran handed Duo??? I have a feeling it's going to be a lot of fun...*grins* Okay, now what up with Quatre? What could his sister possible have to say that would take so long? Whatever it is I don't think it's a good thing...it's giving me a bad feeling!!! Not bad enough to take away from the rest of the chapter...*grins*...Damn, I'm doing it again!!! The whole chapter's been *grin, smirk, smile, snicker*!!! The laptop has arrived...*happy dance*...Heero's like a kid with a new toy...all happy and excited...of course so am I...*beaming*..."I'm so happy my heart is singing"
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 18, 2004 17:20 CST
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tell me about it! out of about 10 emails 8 of them are penis enlargers or perfomance enhacing med lol i think theyd b heartbroken if i told them i dont have a penis. great chapter. janet makes me laugh
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 17:05 CST
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Whoo Hoo!!! Two in one day...I'm in *heaven*!!! Isn't that just like men...something they don't understand or don't want to deal with they place in on a shelve. I could tell Duo why he felt that way...he wanted more of Heero...*smirk*(who wouldn't)! Oooo...the laptop, Heero should be in heaven later...hahahaha!!! Ha! Ha! I was right Quatre felt something from Heero...*pats self on back*. Seems Duo's spending a lot time thinking about Heero when he should be thinking about business. I wonder did Duo think this much about Hilde when they were together? Just had to add another mystery didn't you? Who's the older gentleman and his female companion Dorothy Catalonia? I have a suspicion. but I'm not going to tell...*sticks out tongue*...besides I could be wrong, so I'll just wait and see. Oh man, can you imagine being caught my your *boss* talking about wanting to do him...I think I would just die...hahahaha!!! Hmmm...wonder why the song on the radio caused Duo's hesitate? Another GREAT chapter...*smiles*...not to sound greedy...oh what the HELL I am greedy...there wouldn't be another chapter on the horizon would there??? *grinning like an idiot*
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 16
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 14:03 CST
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Well...it seems that it was *good * for Heero, at least physically, but I get the feeling it went well beyond that, he's just not ready to admit it yet...*smiles*!!! What was it Quatre felt with his *space heart* that made him beam at Trowa? Could it be he felt something from his friend Heero's heart, something Heero isn't even aware of himself? I must admit I was a little confused there for a monment when the sence changed to Heero on the balcony. Then I realized he was reminiseing. I'm yet to understand the importance of this young girl in Heero life except to say she seems or seemed to be very important. To leave or not to leave? I was pleased when Duo woke to see Heero in bed with him even if it was as far away as he could get...hang in there Heero only four more days and you can return to the life you had...*wink* *cocks head* hmmmm...wonder why Duo feels a need to jack off in the shower...it couldn't have anything to do with Heero..could it...*grins*. I must commit on one last thing...with the education and obvious intelligence that Heero has I'm more curious then ever why he's chosen this way of life. As always looking forward to more...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 18, 2004 13:14 CST
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here let me help heero n duo a bit...GET TOGETHER lol ur doing such a good job on this story and you're such an amazing author! or authoress! please keep it up and thx for writing this =)
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Reviewed By: feckless On: January 16, 2004 21:38 CST
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hala. me. ok. yay! i luved it as normal. y'know i've been thinkin and thinkin and it blows my mind how u manage to update like almost averyday. i'm confused. but that's nothing new. ok. crossing fingers for chap 16!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 16, 2004 14:35 CST
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Great fic. Awesome chapters. Update soon and keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good. and yes it was as good as te other chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 15
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 15:54 CST
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Well let's see...ummmm...still thinking. Really don't know what to write here...I'll e-mail you...*smiles* On to Thrusday!!!!
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Reviewed By: Devona On: January 15, 2004 15:34 CST
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Yay! Another great chappy! This story rocks! It's got just enough deviation from Pretty Woman to make it really interesting, but enough similarity to make me laugh my ass off at the differences... keep it up! Write more soon!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 15, 2004 14:46 CST
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ur such an amazing author!!
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Reviewed By: Lrigelbbub On: January 15, 2004 07:44 CST
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I like this! You have a wonderful writing style and i hope you post the next chapter soon^^ be safe -BG
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 14:24 CST
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yeay!! lemon soon!! im such a lil hentai =P
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 12:33 CST
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Oh, how I am loving this story. Strangely compelling and most intriguing. I also love how often it's updated!! The daily updates are a very good thing, since I'm always eager to see what is going to happen next! ^_^
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 12:08 CST
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Whoo Hoo!!! Go Wufei, show Meiran how much she means to you *smiles*! Don't you just love it when your man gets all aggressive...*smirks* Fight! Fight! *Adrenalin pumping*(mine...hahaha) Two strong handsome men rolling around on the floor...*drools* Poor Heero, he just can't catch a break or did he? If he had been a little quicker or Duo a little slower he could have been in and out of the suite without confrontation, but looks like fate has other plans *grins*! *Mouth drops open*...Duo apologized AND admitted he fucked up...don't worry Heero I'm intrigued as well. Ahhhh...you did it again!!! I was all sit to read HOW Duo was going to make it GOOD for Heero when the chapter ended...attach the damd warning...*pulls hair*...at this rate I'm going to be completely bald by time this story is finished...*glares* you are soooooo lucky you update so often...or maybe I'm the lucky one *cocks head*...hahahahaha!!! REALLY!!! REALLY!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!! Is it posted yet????
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