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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 21:50 CST
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wow heero uve done a lot in your life...aw he misses duo!
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 54
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 05:42 CST
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Pleased to see you updated and a long chapter as well…*smiles… Ah ha! So it becomes a little clearer, Milliardo's dislike for Heero, even if he doesn't personally know the man…he's jealous. Milliardo apparently believes he lost Noin to Heero's sexual prowess as well as "half the women in her department" *smirks* if he only knew the truth…Hahahaha!!! Sounds to me like Milliardo has some trust and insecurities issues of course it probably didn't help matters with Noin singing Heero's praises night and day. Knowing what I know now…I'm surprised he didn't deck Heero when he found him having lunch with Relena…hahahahaha!!! Hmmm…I wonder who it was that called Noin while she was talking with Wufie and Milliardo…could it have been Heero? Well Heero's getting everything in order for his return to whatever it was he did for a living before he took his little vacation. He's not wasting any time…making calls, sitting up appointments and booking a seat on a flight to…well only you know where he going *grins*. At least we know he'll still be in town the next couple of days, since Trowa has agreed to be taxi service. I was happy to read that Quatre is going home. I am a little curious as to how one of Duo's hairs got on Heero's suit? Maybe it was there from Heero's time with him and he never noticed it before either way it's has sadden Heero, hopefully Quatre can comfort him…*raises eyebrow*…as a friend would. I'm also wondering what Heero's reaction will be once Quatre tells him he's one of Duo's new partners. It's all very interesting! You know I can't wait for more. You're killing me…updates all most everyday…then we reach Sunday…what happened? I think your procrastinating…*grins* or you're just trying to see how much I can take…Hahahahahaha!!! I thoroughly enjoyed th
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 53
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 17:49 CST
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Nice long chapter…*smiles*…of course we did have to wait got it, but it's worth it!!! Poor Duo…a little late, he's gone. Now, I'm very interested to see how Duo handles this. It's his move…how badly does he want to see that *face*? Will he think that's its over…after all it was only a job for Heero right…right??? Or will he believe there's something more…something worth fighting for… (that just made me think of Mulan…hahahahaha)! Well, *snickers* wasn't Quatre quick to get himself and Relena out after the business was concluded, but they left poor Wufie to watch the show!! All ready with enough unanswered questions concerning prostitutes in this city…Noin gives him another one…me too!!! Apparently she knows or knew Yuy…the question is how well..*smirks*? Another question…is this why Milliardo is so *rude* toward Heero…even if his eyes weren't blue (at the time)? Something for me to think about. I have another question…why did Relena wait after dropping Heero off? She didn't just wait…she waited until she saw him from his window. Strange!!! Of course it could just be the cosmic forces at work again…*smiles*. Heero seems to be more laid back in this chapter…he's come to grip with his life. Can't deny what's been done. Can't hide from the truth? Can look to the future. Can hope for the best!!! His remembrance of his real job has left unanswered questions??? Makes one think…00Yuy…Hahahahahaha!!! Glad to see Heero put into prospective his feelings for Quatre. I was a little concerned they might affect how he thought about his feeling for Duo…cocks head…am I making any sense??? Did Duo really expect to find Heero still there? Or even that Heero hadn't taken the money... "that he had worked for"…which Duo himself made perfectly clear? Love!!! Why must it be so difficult??? I'm pleased to see Heero and I are in agreement…Everyone he has meet this week is somehow connected…*grins*!!! I can hardly wait for 54!!! By the way…nice touch…I loved it!!! Heero leaving his contacts behind…hmmm…wonder what that tells you Duo???
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 13:55 CST
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pick up the phone n call him heero!
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Reviewed By: feckless On: March 04, 2004 23:42 CST
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*blink*blink* i haven't reviewed in a long time. so sorry. love the story. yay! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! can't wait for the nest chapter. yay! update soon!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 00:32 CST
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Blindsided from every corner... Amazing. So I guess Relena called Quatre "way back when" instead of Heero as I had thought. You were sooooo tricky with the way you described "Dad" as well. I thought it was Trowa up until Quatre identified him. Dorothy sounds like someone that's stuck in the '60's. It would be great if this deal could keep Quatre off the streets. Doesn't Wufei recognize the cute little blonde from the bar? And WTF is the deal with Hilde? I don't know how you do it kiddo! I only hope that Duo's on his way back to the penthouse and that it hasn't been abandoned by the time he arrives. : (
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Reviewed By: Bobcat On: February 29, 2004 00:00 CST
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Oh wow!!! Talk about turning everything around on us! It is Heero's suit that Quatre's wearing isn't it?! Talk about your ironic twist. I really didn't see that one coming! This fic is allways the highlight of my day. I love the esoteric elements you include and references you provide about them. This is one of the most well writen fics i have ever read. Keep it up!
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Title: 52
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 13:02 CST
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 52
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 11:38 CST
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Damn!!! You had me and you know it!!! I thought it was Heero with Relena…until Duo noticed the blonde hair…Quatre? What the Hell is he doing there? Does this have anything to do with Quatre's dad being in town? Wonder what's going on in Wufei's head he knows or thinks he knows what the young blonde does for a living??? What's up with Duo? Where's he going? He has waited all week for this meeting…it's the reason he came to LA in the first place. Why can't he keep his mind on business? Why is Heero invading his thoughts? Another surprise…Noin…why is she here? At first I thought it was Hilde looking for Duo. This chapter has been full of surprises. If Heero wasn't with Relena at the meeting I wonder where she dropped him?
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Reviewed By: Zefyr (not signed in) On: February 28, 2004 10:36 CST
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damn, great mislead on Noin! :)
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 51
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 08:29 CST
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Well not we know more about Dorothy and her relationship with Quatre or lack there of…*wipes brow*…thank goodness Quatre doesn't swing that way…hahahahahahahaha!!!!! Oh my!!! Daddy's here!!! That could be a good thing…let's hope so! Only time will tell. Hmmmm, I wonder where Heero plans to go? He doesn't want to return to Quatre's apartment and I don't think he wants to punish his self more by being at the Hotel waiting on Duo. Perhaps…Relena will have a suggestion…where the Hell did she come from anyway?
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 23:10 CST
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how do u do it! great chapter
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Reviewed By: Zefyr (not signed in) On: February 27, 2004 19:06 CST
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I'm getting this bad feeling...someone's not going to make it out of this one with their heart intact. *sniffles*
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 50
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 14:46 CST
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A sigh of relief…it seems Quatre has gotten over his infatuation with Heero…*smirks* I am curious as to why Heero wants to meet Quatre for breakfast…maybe he needs some advice? Or perhaps he's not planning on returning to the apartment? Probably it's neither of theses since you like to keep us guessing!!! It seems Quatre has something's to talk to Heero about (Trowa…snickers). I'm telling you…there some kind of *cosmic connect* between the hand full of humans in this story!!! What the HELL was Dorothy doing coming out of the restaurant Heero and Quatre were entering? And more importantly she recognized Quatre for who he was even recognized Heero from his lunch with Relena…interesting!!! I loved the reference to Hercules *big smile*!!! Wufei rallying the troops!!! I glad he called Janet on her day off, she's been a big help and I'm sure she will continue to be. Besides she's a COOL OC…*smiles*!!! Well…..what's Trowa going to do now? Is it back to bar? Business as usual? As usual…Great chapter!!! Reading each chapter is like an adventure…you never know what might or might not be revealed…Hahahahahaha!!!! Keep them coming!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 14:26 CST
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good stuff! eager to read more =)
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