| "The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] |
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Reviewed By: sage_libra [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi :) just wanted you to know that since i discovered your fic i've had one more great reason to log on. i love your story and i think it's awesome how much research and information you've poured into it. i can't wait for duo to come to his senses, and though i would love for heero to express his feelings more strongly, i can see how that would be out of character for him. i also like the subplot between trowa and quatre, wufei and meiran, even the conflict between treize and wufei...i would really love for you to explore that a bit more...oh, and why (plaintive) can't trowa just sling quatre over his shoulder and have his wicke way with him...oops, my barbaric hentai side getting the better of me haha...anyway, far be it for me to tell you what to do with your story...keep up the good work and i look forward to reading more!!! yumyum
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 20:44 CST
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So... Heero's going to eat breakfast and charge it to the Penthouse. What kind of "incidentals" could he be thinking of adding to Duo's tab as well? I wonder if Duo and Wufei will get any surprises at the meeting. Wouldn't Wufei just shit a brick if he knew what his wife thought about Heero and him being similar! : D Oh jeez - once I googled "Dum spiro, spero" I got all choked up. Heero just handed Duo his heart on a silver platter. : ( I'm just going to keep reminding myself that you promised this would have a happy ending. *Grabs more Kleenex* Happy ending... Happy ending...
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 49
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 15:53 CST
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Hn! *crosses arms*…I was right! Wufei was calling Duo, looks like the meeting on!!! Will Heero be waiting for him when he get's back to the hotel? I hope not! Duo let Heero go, so he should have to search for Heero once he realizes what he let escape!!! Hahahahaha…Wufei wearing make-up to conceal his shiner….hahahahaha!!! Serves him right…hahahahaha…a little bit of *justice*…Hahahahahaha!!! Great chapter…looking forward to more…*smirks*
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 14:02 CST
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well atleast heero will b there when he returns =D
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 13:51 CST
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so sad =( duo dont b a jerk!
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Reviewed By: Zefyr (not signed in) On: February 24, 2004 09:45 CST
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Ah, I continue to be addicted, and am so glad to see more chapters popping up. With your update rate rivaling mine, a two-day break makes me worry! And, girlfriend, you're slacking. (Hehe.) I failed Latin - even though I was fluent in French once, go figure - so what's Dum spiro, spero mean? Hmph. I adore your notes at the end almost as much as the chapter, but then, I'm a research freak myself. Guess it's time to google... looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Vega -Lume ( member but not loged in.) On: February 23, 2004 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading your fic from the begining nad I thought that it's about time I gave you a review. I really like this story and I am gald that it did not follow the ' Pretty Woman ' story line to much ( hardly at all ) it is very enjoyable to read, and it's getting hard to find fics like this now. please keep writing gundam wing, you are very good at it and I hope to see even more GW fics from you in the future! all my love and Smile, Always. Vega-Lume
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 48
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 17:43 CST
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My, My…it seems Heero has accepted the way he feels for Duo and realizes he must allow Duo to discover whether he's willing to admit his true feelings…COOL!!! I sort of figured they would part this way…otherwise how could there be a fairy tale ending in the end…*grins*!!! Duo apparently still has a lot to discover about his feeling and Heero…perhaps by the end of the day he have the answers he seeks…*smiles* Can't help but wondered if one of the people that Milliardo called was Wufei and if at the end of this chapter Wufei was calling Duo? Something to distract Duo from Heero's departure a meeting with Peacecraft? Very nice chapter…even though Heero's leaving…I know they will be together in the end…it's just the journey to get there…*SMILES*!!!!! I'm also wondering if Heero's going to take the money? There's really no reason he shouldn't especiallty since Duo is treating this like a business agreement…*cocks head*…which in fact it was…*smirks*
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: February 21, 2004 20:49 CST
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uh oh...all is not rite in the land of heero n duo =(
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 47
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 17:59 CST
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Speculating again…I'm getting the impression from Duo's thoughts and actions that he's going to let Heero go (of course we know that he's not really…hopefully)!!! Guess we'll know for sure by the end of the day…*smiles*!!! At least Heero allowed his passion to control him for a change (allowed…right like he could have controlled it…hahahahahaha!!!) If nothing else being with Duo has helped Heero Exercise the demons that tormented his soul these past few months!!! I don't have much to say about Milliardo's and Dorothy's meeting…*grins*…most of it went right over my head…Hahahahahahaha!!! As always looking forward to the next chapter…
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: February 17, 2004 20:58 CST
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Wow! What a chapter?! I wonder what Duo will do? Keep up the good job and keep the constant updates!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 17:46 CST
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Oh. My. God. That was... I'm trying to think of how to describe it. I guess it was so much more than I expected. Do you realize how often you've made me cry in this fic? When Duo gave his life story, and then capped it off with his comment about their "business," it tore me up. I'm surprised Heero didn't bolt. Trowa's story was also horrible. I hope it opened Quatre's eyes that he's not the only miserable one in the bar... I wonder what Wufei's going to do now? Accept what's been found out or push harder to get information about Heero? The kiss... the sex... Oh. My. God. How precious that they weren't perfect. Both of them have broken hearts already. Can they fix them? It appears that the ball is in Duo's court. He's a smart man. Are his thoughts that reality is nothing like fantasy going to come back and bite him? Beautiful, amazing writing Mookie!
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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was an awesome read! Thanks so much for that! And also thanks for answering my question for the mailing list. I got to sign on and everything with your help. I'm 19 anyway so I think I'm old enough to read all this stuff. I have to say, I only hope to be able to arrange my fics like you do. Your writing is...inspirational because you make me want to continue my fics...and i'm very bad at that. I'm so stuck on my ranma fic but my ff8 fic is coming along good and my escaflowne fic is doing alright.Anyway. I don't want this story to end. It's just sooo good. i actually saw pretty woman the other day, I love that movie and I just wanted to so bad see your story instead of that one. I know it would be really long! but who's complaining! lol, certainly not me! Well, hope to see more updates and maybe, when you think you might be done with this fic that you will think of a way to continue it with a good story for them. I think it would be good. For them to continue their lives but then if you feel forced, don't do it, only if you have enough inspiration and thoughts of how it could go and work. Well, enough of my rambling. Get on with your writing!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Dar'ota On: February 17, 2004 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very good. I do like this fic. I am a die-hard 2x1 fan, so the 1x2 lemon in that last chapter was not my favourite part, but it was tolerable. I usually can't stand the stuff, but this was good. Though it would be divine if you could do more 2x1. I love dominant Duo, what can I say?
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 23:52 CST
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big idiot me managed to read chapter um 46 i think b4 i read this one (chap 45) n e way its a great chapter!!
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