| "The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 14:14 CST
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great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 07:46 CST
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oooh please continue and write more...I am fully obsessed with this ficcie and I am dying to know what happens next. I ADORE the relationship between Duo and Heero...its beautiful...espcially in hte last chapter. -snuggles- Keep up the good work. Ja
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 32
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 06:11 CST
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Holy Cow!!! This was one loooong chapter!!! *smiles* Fridays over…*dancing around*…only two days and one night left…Poor Quatre, he does seems to have it bad for Heero, but is it really love he feels or the pull of a kindred spirit? Now we know how they met, but yet to discover what lead to the meeting. Why was Heero in that alley? We still don't know why Heero turned to prostitution. I think its time for Quatre to get out of the business also. I'm surprised with Quatre's *sensitivity* that he hasn't realized how Trowa feels for him, guess Trowa's better at hiding his emotions then thought. Yup, I knew Wufei and Meiran were heading home to get a little more *personal*…smirks!!! Is Wufei serious about his car, if so I wonder who Meiran has in mind to give it to? There's something I'm curious about, actually a lot of things…Hahahaha!!! Why is it that Heero only does uke??? What…no kiss??? I was sort of expecting the kiss, maybe tomorrow night *smiles* at least tonight they snuggled. What's Relena up to now…ever heard that saying give someone an inch and they'll take a mile? It seems her win with her brother (getting him to listen to her) has gone to her head. Can she do it again? DRUGS…don't you hate them… Looking forward to the start of Saturday there's still a lot to cover …*grins*
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Reviewed By: Alana Quinn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Mookie. The progression in this is going extremely well. You've got me checking all the sources to look for chapter updates now because I want the next chapter so badly^^. I think you're bringing the drug isssues across really well and i really liked the end to chapter 32 because we are finally seeing Heero open up to Duo about his past. (right?) All the historical and biblical factors you keep bringing in are very nice as well. I really enjoy learning about new things (esp. mythological stuff) while reading a story as fantastic as this. Keep up the excellent writing. Lol. Alana^_^
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 29, 2004 14:18 CST
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talk about a surprise! quatre n heero???
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 29, 2004 14:03 CST
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no heero u cant leave duo!!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 29, 2004 13:40 CST
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Great fic. Great pair of chapters. Update soon and keep up the awesome job!
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 31
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 08:01 CST
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"reiki, typically refers to Reiki. To oversimplify things, it's a spiritual or energy healing method, often translated as "universal life force energy." The word can also be translated as an established rule, a chill, an electrical excitation, or an aura in general….Told you it was a cosmic thing…*grins*!!! Very nice chapter!!! Very romantic!!! I can't wait for 32…I wonder is this when they kiss…*sighs*!!! The Bar scene was great!!!! Wufei opened up and let go his demons!!! They shared painfully memories. Quatre was accosted!!! Wufei to the rescue…sort of…Hahahaha!!!! Wufei and Meiran have the Bar, assumingly going home to consummate these renewed desires and passion…(whoo hoo)!!! Trowa concern for Quatre both in rushing to his rescue and in taking his drink from him was very touching!!! Is Quatre really bothered by his concern? Me thinks he protest to loudly…*grins*!!! It didn't come as a surprise to hear Quatre had fucked Heero…as Trowa so elegantly put it. What did surprise me was the fact that it sounded(I can hear his voice)like he was pissed maybe even hurt…in a jealous way…which is odd considering he knows what does for a living. Now for the Hotel scene…I knew there was a reason Duo chose the bathroom Heero was in…and looks like Heero intents to take full advantage of Duo's weakness…*smirks* I pleased to see Heero give into his desires and looks like Duo's not to far behind. Looks like Heero is finally truly analyzing Duo's dual personality. The tub scene was very romantic …Hell the whole chapter just dripped romance!!! However the tub scene was my favorite, probably because I have this thing for Heero and Duo…*smirks*!!! I can't wait to read 32…*drools*!!! See I'm repeating myself…hahahahaha!!!
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 30
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 06:56 CST
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Looks like things are about to come to a head…finally…hahahahaha!!! Not just with Heero and Duo. It must be a cosmic thing…so many different emotions being felt by so many at the same time. Meiran is nervous about the up coming talk and she doesn't know why and poor Wufei is no better…someone that was hoping for some *action* before going and he lost his nerve…??? Perhaps all this nervousness between the married couple is indeed a sign that their relationship is about to change and its unsettling because it's unknown. Meiran's thoughts during her shower were more enlightening, giving more insight to the characters. I would say she's a very observant woman. And don't we all secretly love it with our other half gets all possessive and protective…*smiles* Is it me or does Duo seems a bitter that he's been denied a kiss, even though he can't stop caressing Heero's arm…perhaps subconsciously he knows a kiss *would* break the spell on his heart… Quatre is confusing me…I get the impression that he really care for Trowa in a special way, but he keeps giving thoughts that he cares deeply for Heero as well…don't worry it probably just me…*grins* I also found it interesting that Quatre had meet Heero he couldn't get it up for money…*arches eyebrow*…strange for a prostitute. Heero…ah yes Heero…his world does seems to be crumbling all around him. I see he's still thinking about Peacecraft's stride being familiar…perhaps it is, hopefully we'll find out. You know Heero's got to be pretty shaken up…if he's thinking about getting out…of course getting out is a good thing…he needs to. I'm sure there's a thousand other things he could do while trying to hide from his past…and Duo…*sniffle* Isn't it terrible went two grow men can have *meaningless sex*, but can't open up and tell the other one how they really feel…more *sniffles*… Well I see you have posted chapter 31!!!(smiles) Think I head on over and read it…
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Reviewed By: Bobcat On: January 29, 2004 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style is good, I like it. Spelling has occational mistakes, but we all have those. Grammar is a lot better than most of the fanfics I read. I had to give you the 7 on the whole originality thing for obvious reasons, but I like the way you've adapted the story. I'm esspecially enjoying the way you're giving us bits and pieces of the characters pasts as you go along. The whole mystery of who Heero really is definitly keeps the reader wanting more. I just finished Ch. 29 and I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed that last scene with Heero and Duo. I don't know what it is about me and fight scenes turning passionate... It must be the intensity of emotion: intense anger turning into intense lust. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for more. P.S. I also appreciate your updating schedual. You know us readers! We're always impatient for the next installment!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 21:50 CST
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Oh my. I was going to write a longer review but... I need a cigarette. ;)
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Reviewed By: feckless On: January 28, 2004 18:24 CST
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yay!the story is movin along very nicely!couldn't get on this site for a while so i was thrilled comin on and reading like 3 chaps. yay. keep the chap flow coming.
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Reviewed By: enoel On: January 28, 2004 18:13 CST
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UPDATE SOON, PLEASE! I really liked that one chapter, but I need to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 28, 2004 16:03 CST
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Well that confrontation was really something! Keep up the good job and update soon!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 14:32 CST
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didnt expect that lol great chapter
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