| "The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] |
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Reviewed By: BlackX On: May 11, 2004 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me two days to read through this but I just couldn't stop. This is such a great story. I like your style of writing and how you intertwine the different characters' lives. Sometimes I thought you were missing out on some things your story line might have provided (meaning you could have elaborated some parts a little more,) though you don't leave any loose ends (that aren't tied up in the coming chapters). You also seem to put much work in your, how did you put it?, random bits of useless knowledge. Well, I can't wait for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kage Tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story, and I'll be waiting for your next update. ^_^
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: May 09, 2004 20:52 CDT
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u no ive run out of intelligent things to say about ur kickass story...mayb ill just leave it at this... lol im a nerd i no =P
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 19:18 CDT
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He smiled at her. "I breathe." *Dabs her eyes and sniffles.* It's all good!
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chap.. can't wait to read the next one. Update soon...ja ne
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: May 07, 2004 13:59 CDT
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=D=D
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac (Too Lazy to Log in) On: May 07, 2004 00:00 CDT
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Well, judging by Duo's behavior, it looks like he also got a clean bill of health. Whew! OMG - Hil's request to stop for D batteries was a hoot!!! You are so bad! I really like Meiran's character. I think if she had been a character in the anime, she would have been spunky like you've written her. (I haven't read any of the manga, so I don't know if she's that way or not.)
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Reviewed By: Dannii On: May 03, 2004 07:29 CDT
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OH, i LOVE this. Seriously.
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Reviewed By: Dannii Malfoy On: May 03, 2004 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this over on ff.net, and i reviewed chapter 1. Read that. This is fantastic, and i am going to continue reading it here because it has the NC-17 action. Yay. Keep up the good work. - Dannii
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: April 28, 2004 14:13 CDT
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another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 23:31 CDT
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Be still my heart - are we getting a glimpse of a possible Duo/Heero reunion?!?!?! What kind of wrench is Quatre going to be holding though? I'm not sure I'm following that misguided lover's path - Trowa loves Quatre, who loves Heero, who loves Duo? At least it appears that Duo is evaluating his feelings for Heero to some extent. I love how Wufei and Meiran are dangling that carrot of information in front of Duo! That's right, Mei; make him work for it...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: April 22, 2004 20:31 CDT
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lol lets get it rite quatre..
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Reviewed By: Lrigelbbub [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 20:25 CDT
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Wow! an update ^0^ i love it....you update this fic so quickly^^ i take forever to write the next chapters of mine^^ This was a wicked chapter and i can't wait for the next one. be safe -BG
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Reviewed By: Sol 1056 On: April 22, 2004 10:48 CDT
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Unfortunately, the drawback to updating quickly is that when Real Life (TM) comes back into action, and you slow down on posting...people get cranky. Bizarre, eh? They're willing to wait months - even YEARS - for some stories to get a single, 1000-word chapter...yet I go three days without updating Moon and I get the note, "you're updating so slow! do this faster!" I'm like, screw you. I've got three original novels, three fanfics, AND a frickin' LIFE. Hm, I think the life comes first, then the original work...hm. I find a few times I've slowed down out of spite. Don't let that happen to ya... [Duo: please! for the love of all that's holy, please, no!] ---- however, as someone still going strong on GWA's Update Wars (Mal and I are kicking CYT's ass, woo] I can completely relate. However, don't take this to mean I didn't jump on the computer and hit the damn link the SECOND the email notify arrived. Wah! Something to read over lunch! :D ---- *insert happy sounds here* ---- Man, this is WAY better than the damn movie. Right as I'm thinking, okay, she's wrapping it up, and Duo/Heero will meet on the subway or at a party and live happily ever after...you go and spring MORE plot developments and stuff on us. I know you might be getting weary of the story - happens, sometimes - but it's complex and still moving and that's just awesome from a reader's perspective. Keep it up! ;D
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 10:26 CDT
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Hey, I totally understand the long pauses between updates. Life happens. *shrugs* But, it is quite nice to see more story appearing. ^_^ But, we do not want to rush you, hon. Life first, fic later, ne? I will continue to read this lovely piece of writing for however long it takes to be finished. ^_~
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