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Reviewed By: MysticSilverFox On: January 22, 2004 07:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying reading this story very much. I've seen "Pretty Woman" and as much as I liked the movie, I'm enjoying your story even more. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 20:43 CST
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i want a finger cuff mouse..
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 22
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it warm in here? Or is it me??? We'll get to that later!!! *smirks* I feel like such an idiot *hangs head in shame*!!! Heero didn't fake his own death…it was just assumed that he was dead…*slaps head*…I guess what they say about assuming is true, at least in my case…*grins*... (I'll get you for that) As much as it me pains…I must say I like this twister even better…it could prove much more interesting… But either way, Heero was *smooth* most casual observers would see just what I saw…"OH NO…I'm a casual observer"…*cries*!!! However, Duo's not a casual observer and apparent neither is our blond friend…I want to say that it's Milliardo, in fact that would be my guess…*smiles*!!! Whomever it is they seem to be very interested in the name Yuy, It will interesting to see who unearths Heero's past first. I must say that I enjoy the interaction between Meiran and Heero. In her own subtle way she gave Heero (and myself) a little more insight in Duo's and her husband's partnership. Not to mention Duo's such a flirt…*wink*…always thinking about business. My heart just melted when she said "I think you could be good for Duo."…awwwww!!! I agree!!! Another bad on my part…the bar date's Friday night not Thursday…*slaps head*!!! Another nice part I loved…Duo introducing Heero around. Very nice!!! I already knew Duo would love touching Heero…in that suit, but how much of Heero's actions or reactions were faked or force??? Wow, Heero's opening up a little and I was surprised when Duo opened up as well, almost too well. He also may a slip!!! I think…I could be wrong…that Heero subconsciously want Duo to find out about his past. Discover the real Heero Yuy. I think he wants Duo to know exactly what he getting himself into…*smiles*!!! I think he's starting to realize he may be falling for Duo. Duo as well is finally seeing that *Heero* means more to him then what he wants the other man to know. Boy, I'm just putting myself further out on a limb aren't I??? But isn't that the whole point…speculating??? Heero's answer to Duo's rhetorical question almost floored me, I was so surprised!!! The mystery intensifies!!! The Lemon…I won't degrade it with snide comments!!! I thought it was EXCELLENT, PERFECT, not too much and not too little. They are after all just discovering each other in more ways then one!!! I truly enjoyed the emotions, thoughts and yes passion!!!! I* felt* they were *making love*, not just getting off!!! The attempted kiss…very nice, Heero held to his no kissing on the lips rule, but made it up to Duo in another way!!! The whole scene left me feeling emotionally satisfied…all warn and gooey inside!!! Needless to say, I had to light a cigarette!!! One of the *best* chapters to date!!! I'm sure there will more wonderful chapters to follow. I know it's a really long review, but I had a lot to say…*smiles*. You are truly talented!!!
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Title: MeEh
Reviewed By: NeNa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great! You update quickly and I really appreciate that. So, will Duo leave alone the fact that, that man thought Heero was dead. How will he go about that? Asking Heero that is... Anyway, great chapter! i can't wait until the next one! Keep up the great work. ~*+NeNa+*~
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Title: yama2x1
Reviewed By: yama2x1 On: January 21, 2004 12:20 CST
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Oh, this is getting better and better!!! It's like Heero has so many hidden talents. You've got to keep posting, otherwise I'm dying! You are doing a great job in describing the surroundings and feelings and actions of the characters and through the hard work of what you did it shows that you really care about your story. I also want to give you a big THANKS for the links you always provide at the end. It was interesting! keep going yama2x1
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 12:02 CST
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Yeah!!!!!!! was that person someone Heero used to work with omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 21
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 06:23 CST
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Okay….Relena got a phone call, is this unusual? Just kidding…I'm sure you have some twisted motive for leaving it there, but I'm not going to worry about…especially since the rest of the chapter was most enlightening… I've taken a few moments to admire Heero as well…*drool*…oh man, if only he was real…*sighs*!!! I'm really and I do mean REALLY starting to hate those contacts!!! Just think how much more stunning he would be without them…can we say…HEART FAILURE!!! I would say Heero's intuition is right on the money *grin* the question is will he be receptive? *nods head*…I think he just might be… Well, I've taken the time to check out the links you left…since I know next to nothing about art, besides its only fair considering you spent the type to research this. I looked a long time at "Black Millennium Broken Pencil Structure" and I must agree with Duo…I don't know what to say. I will also agree with Heero it is ugly…Hahahaha!!! The piece Duo was looking at "A Novia Do Malandro" wasn't too bad I didn't get a headache trying to figure it out…Hahahaha. Now I liked the piece by Gloria Moses, "Blue Front Door" I thought the colors were very vibrant, of course I don't understand the title since you could hardly see the blue door in fact I thought it was window…*shrugs shoulder*…what do I know anyway, but it was a nice piece. I also liked the piece by Mikel Alatza. Now "Brute Force" by Russ Andrade I could understand. "A la madre! Yuy!"…I started to smile thinking…Ah Ha! Someone that finally recognizes Heero!!! Damn! He's good…mistaken identity my ASS(sorry) once again if not for those DAMN contacts…AHHHHHHHH!!! *pulls more hair* At least Duo's not an idiot he can put two and two together especially since he now has Heero's last name!!! Now he just needs to investigate Heero Yuy…bet he finds he dead??? Then he has to find out *why* Heero has apparently faked his own death. I knew something was up, but I never expected to discover he had faked his death!!! Very well done *bows* I thought Meiran and Wufei were going to a bar on Hollywood Boulevard, maybe after the Art exhibit…please don't confuse me anymore then necessary…I'm not a well woman…Hahahahaha!!! Poor Quatre…he can't help feeling his poker buddies emotions and it causes him to lose his concentration along with his money. Something else I find interesting…just hand jobs? No sharing or passing of bodily fluids? Wonder if that could have anything to do with what his sister found out…that you have yet decided to share with the rest of us…*glare* This story is so awesome, it oblivious you spend a lot of time researching!!! Thursday's almost over…three more days…*smiles*
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Reviewed By: feckless On: January 20, 2004 20:42 CST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! evil cliffie. now i'll b thinkin about this till like the next chap. try to have it up soon! i won't complain if u don't . . . i'll try not to. mayb. but u'r good w/ updating so that shouldn't be a prob. oh well. yay! luved it, again. update soon, right. yay
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 20:27 CST
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Poor Duo - I loved his tormenting thoughts in this chapter! He's losing it fast. Heero isn't letting on quite as badly... yet. I almost spewed right along with Duo during their little lunch conversation!!! O.o The thing is - I can imagine Heero saying something like that in just that manner. Woot!
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 20
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 12:56 CST
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*smiling*...the scene on the balcony...can we say *HOT*, *SEXY*, *WET DREAM*...**DROOL**!!! Duo has more control then I give him credit for...*grins* You know it sounds like a wonderful Laptop, but I really don't think Duo gives a Damn...hahahahahaha!!!! ""Think you can handle it?" Heero asked, and Duo wondered if he was still referring to the computer.""...what else could Heero be referring to...*wink* Duo's seems to be having a hard(no pun intented...)time keeping his mind focused...I love it!!! Damn!...he's wearing those stupid contacts again at least his beautiful hair is free...*sighs* So their going to art exhibit this evening and apparnetly Heero knows something about art...why am I not surprised...*smirks*! I wonder is it the softness of the suit Duo really want's to touch or the body that will be in it...*grins*. Diet...uh...thanks for sharing Heero...hahahaha!!! Guess he would need to stay regular...in his current occupution...hahahaha!!! Ahhhh!!!...another mystery what was it that caught Heero's attention when he picked up Duo's papers??? Apparently something important enough for him to feel like going with his gut instinct, but what? Was it a name? A name he reconized? Dermail? Hey!!! That's the guy that interrupted Duo's pursuit of Heero at the carnival!! Holy Sh!t!!! Did he see Heero and if so did he recognize him???? So Quatre taken care of some business...guess he needed money for the poker game upstairs... Your killing me here!!! I'm soooooo thankfull that you update so often!!! THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 21:35 CST
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Jeez, you're throwing all kinds of wrenches into this bucket! Now that you've finally thrown Duo and Heero together (*sigh*) Now I have to keep up with Wufei and Meiran, Quatre and his strange poker playing style, Mil, Dorothy (WTF?), Duo's business plans, and Heero's prowess with the new laptop. :) Hopefully there'll be even more Duo/Heero action mixed in with all that, too... I still like this fic better than the movie, and Richard Gere ain't no slouch! ;) Love your update habits!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 19, 2004 19:57 CST
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oo more chapters? ur great!
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 19
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 18:08 CST
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Ohhh...what a pleasant surprise!!! Another chapter...*HAPY DANCE*!!! What's Heero up to now? Give a man a specially designed Laptop and he thinks he can do anything...hahahahaha!!! What's he mean Duo has no idea who he dealing with? Well I don't know myself...but I'm more then anxious to find out!!! Hmmm...what about the phone conversation has Trowa so preoccupied with his thoughts he doesn't even hear the phone ringing? Man, Quatre is *good*, knowing it was Heero calling before asking Trowa if he was going to get that...even if he was flirting at the time...guess he can multitask...hahahahaha!!! Ah Ha...we are about to find out what the addition to Heero's wardrobe is...you know I haven't forgotten just waiting to see when it would come into play...*grins*! Now I'm also wondering just what Meiran is up to and *which* bar on Hollywood Boulevard she has in mind...I've noticed a lot of sneakyness going on in this story...*Payton Place to come to mind*...hahahaha!!! I'm also getting bad vibes from this Dorothy person... Yes Duo get your shit together and go on in...see how happy Heero is with his new toy...*smiles*. Once again you've left me with more unanswer questions and speculations...Alway leave them wanting more huh??? Well it's worked...I want more!!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 17:00 CST
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yeay so many new chapters =) u made my day!
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Reviewed By: coldsiren On: January 18, 2004 22:29 CST
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sorry this is my first time to make a review..^_^ coz its my first time to read a GW fic... i love your fic..!! please update soon..
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