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Reviewed By: Zefyr (not signed in) On: February 10, 2004 13:47 CST
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I'd say you should have no fear about spoilers for PW at this point. Hell, I think you left PW behind a number of chapters ago! But I do recall this scene - the partner goes to the penthouse suite - but I was guessing Wufei was there to dig for himself into whether Heero was using Duo or was nothing more than a regular streetwalker. I had no idea Wufei would go just for that single reason of getting fingerprints. Remind me not to underestimate your Wufei (or your ability to introduce twists). Anxiously awaiting the next chapter - and btw, just what DID Duo buy? Hehehe.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 21:01 CST
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It's hard for me to believe that this fic is already 40 chapters and you're still not wrapping up the plots! Who's Relena going to call? Who called Mil? Why is Wufei at the penthouse? What's Duo buying? WHEN ARE DUO AND HEERO GOING TO KISS????? *cough* Excuse me - got a tad carried away. What's that mention of Heero's "coworkers" about? Is he in the military? I guess I should stop my questions here. No use scaring away the jury, ne? : ) Thanks again for your update practice. How you can write such a great fic so quickly is really disgusting...
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Reviewed By: aztec On: February 09, 2004 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a great knack for the subtle things... mmm.. how can I read anything else when, in my honest opinion, you have -not only the best style of writing out there- but the best portrayal of the characters as well? I read Epiphany too. I probably missed out on a lot(not only the level of "cool" that increases exponentially, but all around knowledge as well, and I have yet to go through the rigors of college life)... but gosh.. I love the sublety in your works. Falling. Yeaah me too Duo. So is there a climax and a resolution already planned or is this a free flow? Either way... keep writing.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 05:27 CST
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heero lemme help u out...u luv duo so stay with him!! lol great chapter!
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 40
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 22:08 CST
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Ha Ha!!!! I knew it!!!! Wufei went to see Heero!!! *dancing around*!!! It's such a nice feeling to be right…*smiles*…considering how many times I've been wrong *rolls eyes* of course I still could be wrong; Wufei could be there to see Duo however, I seriously doubt that!!! I'm really interested to see where their conversation goes!!! I'm loving the internal battle Heero and Duo are fighting. I'm thinking Heero is feeling unworthy? How can he face his family and friends after the choices he's made? How can he face his feeling for Duo when he knows Duo knows what he had become? Perhaps Wufei will be able to give Heero a better perspective? I'm really curious to know what Duo is up to!!! Of course I have to ask…who call Milliardo wanting to meet? You know your killing me…*smiles*…but I can't complain since you've updated twice today…*grins*…however, being the greedy little thing that I am…I want more!!!
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 39
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 18:48 CST
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Wouldn't Wufei be honored to know that his rival holds him is such high regard…? Perhaps with all his new information, Milliardo will decide to give Wufei a call??? Could Wufei be so blind…to not see the effect being around Heero is having on Duo? I think Meiran once again in her subtle way has opened his eyes *smiles*!!! You what they say about the Woman behind the Man…??? So where's Wufei off to? Could he be on his way to apologize to Heero? Maybe, maybe not *shrugs shoulder*…we'll see… Ok, Sally's friend is heading to LA…wonder what or who she's going there to see…??? Ahhhhhh…the *boys*!!! *smacks Duo up side head his head* of course you could spend the entire day breaking new ground, sexually…seems that's what Heero wants to do!!! So where is Duo off to? It was nice how Duo asked Heero to be there when he got back, I think Heero was a little surprised himself…*grins*!!! And for Heero…*rolls eyes*…he still doesn't quite get it…he wants to break the contract better yet have Duo break it, yet he can't seem to control his desires to be *very* close to Duo *smirk*!!! This two are absolutely precious…you write them so well *smiles*!!! You know I can hardly wait for the next chapter…and the next, and the next…*smiles*
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 13:04 CST
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duo is going to suffer from withdrawal when heero leaves...by the way...HEERO U CANT GO!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 23:27 CST
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aww i just cant get enough of heero duo interaction =D
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 38
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 17:17 CST
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Once again nice chapter…*grins*!!! Looks like the last couple of days have been great for Wufei, especially since he doesn't appear to care whether or not they get the Peacecraft deal. That's a big step for a man like Wufei…*smiles*. All right, what's Relena up to? Who is this person she's going to call? Whoever it is, she seems to have more interesting in them then just business? Perhaps Quatre's father is having a change of heart? I hope so anyway. How is Quatre by the way? Hasn't drowned himself in the shower or his tears yet has he? Damn!!! *smirk* Whats gotten into Heero? He seems to be mighty sexual today, it's hardly lunch and he's been on Duo twice now…*big ass GRIN*!!! Maybe, he's trying to get as much of Duo as he can; since tomorrow is his last day with him…you know trying to get enough memories to fuel his future fantasies *still grinning*!!! No condom this time…*raises eyebrow*…what's next a KISS on the lips?!?! Each chapter brings us closer…my excitement grows!!!
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 37
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 06:23 CST
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**Shocked look on face**…well I certainly wasn't expecting that question *blushes*. But it seems Duo thought it was a pretty good question *smiles*!!! Looks like Duo and Heero may spend the day just enjoying each others company. Duo's right…you can learn a lot about person if you don't try so hard…let's see what he learns by the end of the day. Meiran is absolutely brilliant… {must have been all the mind blowing sex…*snickers*}…I think that idea of her was inspired…hahahahaha!!! Let Duo handle the East Coast and she could have her Wufei all to herself on the West Coast, they could start a new chapter in theirs lives together…*nods head*! Yup, Quatre's on his way to a nervous breakdown. Perhaps as he's drowning in his self induced drunken self-pity the walls will collapse and he will finally be *free*!!! Heero is my fav with Duo a close second…due to this story, I have grown fond of Quatre {like a little brother} and his suffering seems to bother me the most. I hope the poor little fellow gets some relief soon… As always looking forward to more…*grins*!!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: February 06, 2004 05:40 CST
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i love this story =D
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 19:58 CST
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=D
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 36
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 11:54 CST
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Nothing like rediscovering ones true love {sighs}!!! Wufei and Meiran…how sweet!!! Wufei's strode down memory lane was very endearing!!! It's always nice to read about true love regardless of the gender…soul mates if you will. Poor Quatre seems to be just about at the end of his rope. I think he needs to talk to Trowa and then call his sister *nods head*…yup, that's what I think…*grins* With all the excitement and Heero just attacking Duo out of the blue…*smirk*…I had forgotten that Relena had another plan *blushes*, but now that you have so kindly reminded me {without giving anything away…*glares*} I'm anxious to find out what's she up to??? Wonder how embarrassed Heero was at being caught talking to himself…hahahahaha…very cute!!!! Of course I'm dieing to know what personal question Duo has for Heero *pulling hair*!!! The whole "quid pro quo" scene I found to be accurate on several levels and leaves me wondering if Duo's question somehow pertains… Once again I am left with a feeling of contentment. So much happening…so many emotions!!! What choices will they make????
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Reviewed By: Sol 1056 On: February 04, 2004 09:38 CST
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Just a quick note to let you know I'm still reading...and I'm still hooked. What I think I like best about your style - of shorter scenes, jumping from person to person - is that it allows you to do a bit o' the tango with the readers. It's like we can get close, for a few minutes, but before we actually get horizontal, you're zipping us away to another partner. It's a deft way of keeping us from getting all the information, which is a real risk when you're doing multiple limited POVs in a story and want to keep the suspense in place. So! Any chance of hiring Meiran to go smack some sense into Heero 'n Duo? ;D
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 21:24 CST
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Gah! I loved that little playtime on the balcony with the water bottles! You put the best details into this fic, like how Heero tossed his head back. It was very easy to envision (and what a vision it was!) I'm ready to scream though - why doesn't Heero tell Duo what he told Relena? The interaction between Trowa and Catherine was sweet and educational. I've given up trying to figure out who's been under the influence and who hasn't. I suspected Quatre, but now it looks like Trowa was at one time as well. And now what's up with all these people Heero's recognizing? Alvarez, Hilde, and Zechs? Great fic as the plot thickens...
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