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| "The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] | | Pages (19): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 › » ] | Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: February 03, 2004 20:31 CST
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u never get tired of hearing wat a great chapter do u b/c i've got to say it again!! =P
| Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 35
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 17:08 CST
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Seems to be a nice quite morning at the Hotel, Heero and Duo sort of caught up in their own thoughts…mainly about each other…*smiles*! Looks like Quatre may have a chance to find out a little more about Trowa, as well as the rest of us. Great chapter, it pulled a little more on the heart strings…*grins. As always looking forward to more!!!
| Reviewed By: holly (ardicana@msn.com) On: February 03, 2004 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it took me a minute to understand the last line. but i get it now. it was HEERO's shower that had turned scalding-hot. thats why the water in quatre's shower wasnt hot, he just felt that it was. okay. i get it. very clever. i love quatre in this fic. i usually disregrd him as a *too* nice person. but in this fic, you make him very human, and i like him for it. wonderful story. heero and duo's slowly evolving relationship is very very well done. the line wher duo says something along the lines of, "only one more day left" in regards to heero. does that mean that he has one more day to acctually speand TIME with him, or is it just simply that he needs heero to bring to the buisness meetings. im guessing it goes either way. greatr story. you know i love it so much. -holly
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 14:52 CST
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poor quatre...oh i hope heero stays with duo n e way
| Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 34
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 12:07 CST
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Very Nice!!! Seems there more order to Heero's thoughts…not as confused or scared like a deer caught in headlights…hahahahaha! Poor dear…thought he had taken his contacts out the earlier…*wink*! I'm getting the feeling Heero wants to break his agreement with Duo and I'm not sure why? Could be he wants to get on with his new life or it could be he wants to see if there's anything between himself and Duo without the verbal contract…then again it could be something else…*smiles*…you great at keeping me on my toes!!! You know this being Saturday and all, I never expected another mystery like this one ""There had also been-""…What the Hell is that??? *Hands strangling Mookie neck*…WHO DAMNIT WHO!!!! If you say Duo I'm going to scream…!!! *deep breaths*… Then you went in for another shocker…not that Duo was naked…still that was nice…*sighs*, it was the speed of Heero's attack…not the actions of a man that wants to get away…wouldn't you agreed? Maybe without a contract Duo could feel the sensations of exploding in Herro's mouth and sliding down his throat…I love this chapter their thoughts, their actions! I found it touching and for some reason soothing. I liked how you ended that scene…very nice!!! They both know they have one more day...or at least Duo is assuming…Hahahaha!!! Can't wait to see how it goes…*smiles*! I don't know what to say about Quatre…I feel so bad for him, to love someone and know they don't love you back is bad enough, but to be surrounded and overwhelmed by all these other emotions as well…it makes my heart hurt!
| Reviewed By: Yume-chan On: February 03, 2004 07:36 CST
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wa~~~i I wanna read more and more and more and more. Please write more and update again soon. I must commend you....you do update very frequently...which is great. -huggles- Keep up the good work. Ja~
| Reviewed By: Rude [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super story!! In reference to the Colombian nose gest: I use it with a friend when we run out of things to call each other, (teasingly of course). She used to do it from across the main hall with me being at the other end, yelling something like - entonces que gonorrea!!- she is a bit crazy, ^_^ I dont think I've seen anybody use it specifically for describing a homosexual... but a lot of our lingo come's from stuff that people "de ambiente" say or do in the "zona rosa" in Bogota. Stuff like say - uy! marica! viste a Heero?!! esta buenisimo!- comes from gay people slang and now its common use for both male and female young people, so it may have started out like that, guess if u know what the simbol mean, its appliable.. gay or not. hehehe P.S calling someone gonorrea is crude gamin talking, in our case we were just being gross in the middle of the University hall. Check your sources on: "proper etiquette in the Jorge Tadeo Lozano University" and you will find a story or two like that.
| Reviewed By: holly (ardicana@msn.com) On: February 02, 2004 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey again. i was just wondering. why is it that you update on mediaminer.org, so much ahead of fanfiction.net? is ff.n really that slow? or do you just update on one before the other. hm. that was an amazing chapter. heero seemed to need that conversation with kitty, before he was able to take that one final step into sorting himself out. now that he knows he has her approval, and i for one, know that he will be okay emotionally. i liked the interactions between the two of them. even the kiss was innocent, even though he could tell that she had become more grown up between the last time he had seen her. and their relationship does remind me of wufei and meiran. before wuffei and meiran came together as more than just freinds. its sweet. sort-of an additional look into wufei's and meirans relationship prior to becoming love interests. how else does wufei remind kitty of heero? ill have to think on that. very sweet chapter. it was just what this story needed right about now... heero getting his things together and realizing things about the past that plauged him for such a long time. did i tell you yet, that i loved duo's scene at the end? him thinking about heero counting "kitty"s and then pulling him closer. you amaze me with your ability to take such a simple action as duo pulling heero closer, and putting so much meaning to it. i love this story. i cant think of ANY better. -holly
| Title: im a fan
Reviewed By: chibi-libra-chan On: February 02, 2004 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall i like it lots You once mentioned you used the same word a lot, i guess i picked up on that coz sometimes i think the language used could be different Originality wise ~ well its based on Pretty Woman but definately has its own flow I enjoy this fic more than string cheese (a damn lot!!!) ps.i hope you dont think this is annoying *waveses* ~*~chibi~*~
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 19:36 CST
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whew damn good chapter!
| Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 33
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 15:41 CST
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Well I must say…this one was different…Very nice (nods head), but I don't speak Spanish, so what does "La traición no puede existir a menos que viva la confianza allí primero? You know it not fair leaving something important like that in a different language. Perhaps now it will be easier for Heero to work though his demons. He has received absolution from Kitty concerning her death as well as a lot of other things to think about…assuming he remembers and I think he will…*grins* I thought it very clever of her to appear with a braid, but I don't think Heero got it…*grins*. You had me going right up to the end…I thought he was really carrying on a conversation with a ghost instead of dreaming snuggled up against Duo! Let us see what the new will bring…*smiles*!!! I realize my review is shorter then usual, but I found this chapter pretty self-explanatory. Very nicely written and the best part…BELIEVABLE!!!!
| Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 20:12 CST
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You do realize that whatever you write from now on will be expected to be updated at the pace you have held with this fic, right? Da-yam - each chapter I read immediately becomes my favorite! There's still so much that we're missing about the background of these people, but what you've disclosed so far has been impressive. That conversation between Duo and Heero at the beginning of this chapter (32) was a hoot! Gerbil races? Village People? Disco Music? Wait a minute - some disco music ain't too bad... Poor Duo being teased like that. Love Wufei and Meiran falling in love all over again too. Still trying to figure out the Quatre/Trowa thing. Ah well, I'll just sit tight until tomorrow, ne? : )
| Reviewed By: holly (ardicana@msn.com) On: January 30, 2004 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello again. i decided to read these next chapters on mm.o, because ff.n was being stubborn and no working. -- wow. what an amazing story. i had thought that things were beginning to wind down in this fic, but i can see now, that when it does go out, you wont be one to drag it out. its so exciting, in a mysterious and brainwracking sort of way. perfect. -- i love quatre's character more and more each time i read about him. he is so complex, almost as much, or more so, than heero. the both of them are so enigmatic inboth their ways about themselves, and about their pasts. -- the absolute best thing about this story though, is the acctual feel i get for the characters. you dont try to make them seem more than they are. or less than they are, for that matter. there is no one who is specifically "good" or "evil" in character. (except for dermail, but im not exactly sure about ANYTHING abou thim anyway. and im not sure if i really want to find out.) but everyone has good and bad qualities, and each character is growing emotionally and changing, throughout it. it just makes it that much more realistic. it completely brings the story to life, in a way that is not possible for most authors. i can tell how much YOU love this fic, also, just because of the quality of the writing and the play out of ideas. -- why is trowa so upset/angry at quatre? is he just worried about him as a friend? or are his feelings for him not entirely innocent? :) -- there is such as vast range of emotions throughout, i have to just pause once in awile to let the words and ideas settle, before continuing. im just never able to rush throiugh this fic, i love getting out of it as much as i can. which is... a lot. -- great story. i love more than all of the others. completely amazing. you make me love the characters and care about them, without having to idolize or have false ideas about any of them. -- my thanks, -holly ^^
| Reviewed By: holly (ardicana@msn.com On: January 30, 2004 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
| Title: I LOVE U
Reviewed By: Oxbeachflirtxo On: January 30, 2004 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS! I started reading this on FF.net and I was soooo happy when i found ever moRE chapters over here! I love this story. I love ur charactors, and i love everyones personality! Keep up the great work!
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