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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ONEWORD ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ............... WOW!
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 29
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 12:26 CST
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*SHOCKED*, STUNNED*, *SURPRISED*…definitely not what I was expecting!!! I knew there would be a fight and a confrontation, however nothing like this even crossed my mind…*smiles*!!! There really wasn't the confrontation I was expecting…Duo never ask Heero to explain his actions, nor did he request an explanation. It seemed Duo was acting solely on jealous rage and the fact that Heero was unintentionally looking soooo fucking enticing (like he could help it…rolls eyes) didn't help matters. I guess Duo felt the need to claim or reclaim what was his {possessive isn't he}…I nearly melted when Duo proclaimed Heero as his and then Heero's reply of "Yours"…I was a puddle in my computer chair *sighs*!!! To say that I was overjoyed would indeed be an understatement!!! Of course now the question is where do they go from here??? I can hardly wait to find out…*grinning*!!! Can't say I was surprised that Wufei received a call from Peacecraft, but I can say it made me smile…of course the mention of Peacecraft's name didn't go over very well with Duo…*snickers* Seems Wufei is wanting a little himself before the start of that evenings plans…*wink*…wonder where the little woman is??? We all have self doubts its only human…however NEVER doubt yourself about this story…It's wonderful…so much more then the movie Pretty Woman...prostitute meets wealthy business man, falls in love and has a fairy tale ending. Although the overall plot may be the same its much more in depth and has a much larger supportive cast which makes the story that much more interesting…it not just about a whore and a business man…its so much more than that…I can't come up with the words to describe how this story makes me feel!!! As far as *dragging it out…you can't make an omelet without breaking some eggs…besides, its part of what makes this such a great story!!! You update almost daily sometimes twice a day in one case you updated three times in one day…what the Hell else could anyone want…of course we both know you can't please everyone, so don't even try…write and post updates to please yourself…well and me of course…hahahahahahaha!!! Just had to express myself…*smiles*… Okay, on to chapter 30…no pressure{yeah right}!!!
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Reviewed By: Yume [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 06:11 CST
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Hey hey.... This story is amazing...I absolutely love it...and I can't wait for you to write more...I loved the possessiveness in this last chapter. ^_^ I love it when Duo is soo possessive over Heero. Keep up the good work and please update again soon....I am dying to see what happens next. ja ne btw...I love the pairing
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Vega -Lume [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
at first I thought the pretty woman idea would mean that this story would be all sappy, but it's not and thats why I love it! thanx for a great fic! smile, always. Vega-Lume
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 13:08 CST
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uh oh duos p o ed
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 27, 2004 12:55 CST
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well im glad he listened to relena
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 28
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 11:20 CST
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Looks like I could have been wrong *again*…maybe Treize Khushrenada's not such a bad guy after all. You are soooooo cruel, mean and evil... **""OMAE O KOROSU""**…I'm telling you, your ONLY saving grace *is* the fact you update so often. OH MAN!!! Is Duo pissed and poor Heero has no idea. Let me guess…Duo's going to let his rage consume him when he confronts Heero? Just goes to prove Duo cares more for Heero then he's aware of…why else would he feel so betrayed…??? You know I'm going to be pestering the HELL of you more so then usual until Duo confronts Heero…then again maybe he won't…maybe he'll just kick Heero out, never wanting to see him again…*bawling* Short chapter…short review *smirks*
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 27
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 10:34 CST
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Okay, so Milliardo acting the big brother…getting his sister away from the *evil* Duo Maxwell's friend…Hahahaha!!! I was kind of hoping Milliardo would attempt to make Heero release his arm…fight fight…*nods head*…but I understand they don't have time for such pleasantries…Hahahahahaha!!! I was however pleased that Milliardo didn't just send his sister home…I thought "oh shit" the idiot not even going to listen to her. He actually got in the Limo with her and listened to what she had to say. Of course I can't blame him for not trusting Heero, after all he doesn't know Heero the way *we* do…and he's only trying to protect his sister, like a good brother should. When Milliardo said "For some reason, I thought you had blue eyes."…I got all excited, thinking OK here it comes…*pouts*…just another teaser!!! $#@*&^%@!, *^#@!^), :&%$^#...Just wanted to express myself like Sally and Wufei…hahahahahahaha!!!! I can't help, but wonder…who did Milliardo call??? I could go out on that preverbal limb and speculate that he called Duo…I know, I know that's a long shot and most likely wrong, but it made me smile, just thinking about it…hahahahahahaha!!!! Have I mentioned lately how much I love the fact that you update so often…*grinning ear to ear*!!!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 22:14 CST
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Well, Julia Roberts never got into anything this hairy in the movie! I love the detail you've put into this fic - even if I can't pronounce methyl-whatever. Kewla has some good points below; I'm anxious to see how much of her guesses are correct. We know something has to happen, because the week's almost over. :( Oh well, enough blabbing; get back to writing!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 21:31 CST
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wow ur so thorough!! ur amazing authoress times 20!!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 26, 2004 13:11 CST
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Oh you got to update now. I wonder how Milliardo will take it. Keep up the great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Telpei On: January 26, 2004 11:14 CST
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Yes, yes, yes! I *knew* it was going to be Heero! Ooh...I can't wait for the next chapter. This is all unfolding quite well. Keep up with the frequent updates (you're a hell of a lot better at it then I am...)! Great fic, so far. I can't wait to see how it ends, and at the same time i never want it to finish. *happy sigh*
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Title: GAH!
Reviewed By: AtomicBlue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic for a while now, and I must say I absolutely love it. Twisty and turny, and almost at the end? and you update so often! Love it, love you! do you have any more fics?
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 26
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 10:21 CST
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Ha Ha!!! I thought it might be Heero Relena was meeting…*smiles*…I didn't want to say anything, just in case I was wrong... again. There's differently more to Heero then he let's on…*grins*...Duo would be a fool to let him get away…hahahahaha!!! So it seems Zodiac and Romefeller are up to no good and want to use Peacecraft as a scapegoat. Now…we can't let that happen!!! Relena has some interesting information now, thanks to Heero. I was wondering if she would be able to convince her brother to back out of this deal…then lo and behold who shows up. Did he follow his sister? Milliardo's statement…"You seem to have made some rather interesting friends, Relena."…caused my heart to skip a beat!!! What does he know? Will he listen to Heero or get all prideful? Wouldn't it be a HOOT if Heero showed up at the afternoon meeting with Milliardo and ran into Duo and Wufei…the four of them could *kick some serious butt…Hahahaha!!! Of course then the *shit* would hit the fan…hahahahaha!!! Is the drug Methylenedioxymethamphetamine causing Quatre's empathy? If so, how? I mean was he unwillingly being used in an experiment? Whoo Hoo!!! Things are starting to heat up!!! MORE MORE MORE I want MORE!!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: January 25, 2004 21:56 CST
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another wonderful chappie
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