| "The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell" Reviews/Comments [ 283 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 23:40 CST
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perfect chapter!! u spoil us!! o my fave one! they kissed =D
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapters 45 & 46
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 22:33 CST
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I hope you don't mind…I'm combining reviews for chapters 45 and 46. That's Hilde on her way to see Duo isn't it? Won't she be surprised…actually I guess they both will be. Looks like Wufei didn't get as much information about Heero as he thought he might…*smirks*! Yet he was pleased to know Heero didn't have a criminal record (aren't we all)…but I'm sure he was intrigued to discover Government clearance needed to uncover more. That fact in itself could speak volumes!!! Why would anyone need Government clearance to run a check on a prostitute…??? Heero and Duo seem to having a good time…sort of…talking, snacking, thinking, enjoying each others presence for what time they have left…*sniffle*!!! You got me a few this times with chapter 46!!! I was very surprised when Trowa pulled Quatre into the bathroom and lost it!!! I bet that's more then Trowa has said his entire life…hahahahaha!!! We know Trowa must be **really** upset to leave closing the bar to someone else even if it his sister. Now the question is what's Quatre going to do? Is he just going to sit there trying to figure out what just happened while Trowa's sister glares at him or is he going to go after the highly emotional young man? Maybe, better yet…first sit and have a little talk with Catherine…? That was just freaky…cool, but freaky…Heero comparing Duo to a Greek God then unconsciously in his comparison speaking aloud his actual given name…unintentionally causing Duo's to opening up about his childhood!!! I felt my heart clench when Duo said it didn't matter that he had told Heero because their *business* ended the next day. I was also a little surprised that Heero opened a little more about Kitty! The **Kiss** wasn't surprise of course we all have been expecting that…it's what happened after the kiss that I found interesting…*smirks*!!! For someone who stated adamantly that he *only* did uke Heero couldn't wait to side his cock into Duo's body and WITHOUT PROTECTION!!! I would definitely say a man possessed…*drools*!!! A bit rough perhaps, but…DAMN!!! I almost had tears in my eyes when Heero was whispering into Duo's hair thinking him asleep (I thought he was asleep too). I'm thinking since he can't sleep Duo will be doing a lot of thinking tonight while he stares at the wall. Their time together is almost up. Nice work!!!! Very long chapter…*smiles*…I'm glad you went ahead and finished up Saturday now we can move on the Sunday!!!!
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Reviewed By: ily On: February 15, 2004 20:53 CST
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aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 12:11 CST
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duo y in gods name r u pushing heero away? huh? sheesh...men...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 12:00 CST
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aww poor guys..perverted lil guys lol
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 44
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 10:37 CST
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Hahahahahaha!!! Wufei thought he could get away…only he wasn't fast enough!!! I laughed out loud when Meiran slapped him upside his head…*hard*…LOL!!! She knows her husband has done something stupid, but doesn't want to know what…I thought was funny to…I guess she knows she'll find out sooner or later…hahahahahahahahah!!! Now! What's wrong with the boys? Everything was going along so well. Then Duo had to get his undies in a wad. Poor Heero so consumed he'll suck, lick and nibble on any part of Duo to get the desired moan…*snickers*! They're both fighting so hard…it's a shame they are fighting a losing battle…*NOT* I don't really know what to say about Trowa and Quatre , so I'll just wait for more information…*smiles*
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 43
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 00:20 CST
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Hmmmm….*thinking*…how long does it takes to run someone's prints? Perhaps by time the results are returned Duo will already know everything he *needs* to know about Heero!!! Well, the day seems to being going well for Heero and Duo. Duo has learned that Heero's vocabulary is quite extensive as well as suggestive…*smirks*!!! It appears Quatre is getting some answers as well.
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Reviewed By: coldsiren On: February 13, 2004 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
duo.. you're such a sweetie..
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Title: Chapter 42
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 20:35 CST
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It would sure put Wufei in his place if Heero's prints came back with no criminal record but maybe some kind of accolade from his "other" job... Poor Quatre - now I hope he doesn't do anything stupid! Duo's idea of the "simple life" was just adorable. I can just imagine his face as he was purchasing all those things! And he was so worried about Heero's reaction. The thought he put into those items spoke volumes, but I still hope he and Heero will get the nerve to talk about how they feel before it's too late.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: February 11, 2004 20:33 CST
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i dont like u wufei..mind ur own business!! aw duo ur such a sweetie
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 42
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 18:24 CST
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Let me start by stating…I'm no longer upset at Wufei…I know he's only doing what he feels is the best course of action. *smirks*…At any rate once Duo and Meiran find what he's done…he'll get his…Mwahahahahahahaha!!! Poor Heero…he's got it bad…since when does he feel comforted by someone else's presents? He has verturely uncontrollable impulses to be intimate with Duo…even to the extent of pleasuring Duo and allowing him to ejaculate into his mouth without the ever present condom…**shocked**…mouth still hanging open!!!!(OH MY)!!! Sorry…*lights cigarette*…I got off track there for a moment…anyway it's seems to me to be unusual behavior for someone that wishes to leave *cocks eyebrow*!!! A smile…a real smile…Heero seems to be pleased with Duo's plans for the day. Just a nice lazy, game playing, snack eating, lying around the suite day…Hahahahahaha!!!! What a perfect way to bond and get to know one another…*sighs*!!! Once again it's hard for me to articulate just how this chapter left me feeling...suffice it to say…I feel really *good*!!! I know I don't have to tell you, but I will…you're great and I'm looking forward to 43…*smiles*!!!!
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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 17:06 CST
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This is so good! I dont' want it to ever end! please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: feckless On: February 10, 2004 23:36 CST
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yay! i haven't reviewed in a LONG time. so sorry. haha. but my reviews are like all the same so i really don't think it matters. anyway love the story as always. but you keep leaving evil cliffies. no good. oh well. haha. @ least you're really good @ updating, so i don't have to wait too long. unless you do choose to wait long because of this review. hn. oh well. love the story. update and get rid of the cliffie. you'll probably just make another one in the next chap. damn.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 15:21 CST
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o dont tell me wufei is gonna like fingerprint it or something...hes starting to irk me...leave duo alone! great chapter! u always get me so into the story =D
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 41
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 13:57 CST
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Ah Man!!! No fair!!! *kicks Wufei in the shins all the way down the elevator*!!! I thought you were there to apologize to Heero not try and get something with his finger prints on it *shakes head*!!! Not what I expected…I'm sooooo…pissed at Wufei, how dare he…*fluming*…I hope he hasn't ruined the mood!!! Ok I give…what's in the bags…*grinning like it's something for me*…what did Duo buy to play with…!!! Still flabbergasted, shocked and amazed at Wufei behavior!!!
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