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Title: sweet...
Reviewed By: NekoNyanko69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Feel proud because this is most extensive review I have ever written. Your writing style is phenomenal. You really should pursue a career in writing. Your reference to different literatures really makes the story. You are obviously a very learned individual. Please keep up your fabulous work. -Neko
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell Chapter 56
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 06:28 CST
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Overall, an excellence chapter!!! I was a little disappointed that Duo was to late to see Heero before he left, but I figure you have something planned, so I'm waiting…*smiles*!!! I was pleased to see Heero facing the demons tormenting him over Kitty's death. I had thought I wanted him to do this with Duo, but I now believe Quatre was the correct choice…after all Quatre was the one to find Herro and befriend him in this darkest hour. It seems Relena tired her hand at matchmaking for her brother. I must admit that I was surprised to discover that Relena was behind Noin's visit. I was wondering how she knew. Now I know why Relena waited after dropping Heero off at his apartment…someone needed to know so they could tell Duo…*wink*. Whoo Hoo!!! Can we say…jealous and embarrassed…hahahahaha!!! What was Duo hoping to accomplish if it was Heero behind that door? Would he have ripped Heero from the person and confessed his love or beat the hell out of Heero for betraying him? What will Duo do now? Can he just forget about Heero, I don't think so; guess he's going to have to do a little research of his own. They say "anything worth having is worth working for"…*smirks*. I felt bad for Trowa…naturally it would be unnerving to hear someone else's name shouted as the man in your ass reaches his climax! At least now Quatre knows how Trowa feels and has felt since the day they met. So…now Heero's home and getting his apartment back in order as well as his life. Duo's on his way home as well, each thinking of the other…I can't wait to see what happens next….
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 21:08 CST
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You are a sneaky imp! Did anyone guess that Relena had called Noin and not Quatre prior to this chapter? I *loved* that Trowa/Quatre action! Especially Trowa's behavior after he left the apartment - his thoughts were precious! You love teasing us, don't you? You give us hope when you send Duo to the apartment, albeit too late. More of the same as Heero muses back at his own apartment and knows he just has to wait for Duo. But then you make Duo think that anything with Heero is "doomed to a costly failure"? See, they both have to start thinking positive thoughts...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 17:25 CST
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good chapter
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Title: Deceptive Cadence
Reviewed By: telpei On: March 20, 2004 13:57 CST
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ooo...the deceptive cadence. The V chord, resolving to the VI chord instead of the I. Yes, very unresolved. I love the sound of it though...sends shivers down my spine. Another great chapter. Hope to see the end soon.
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell 55
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 16:06 CST
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Wasn't that nice of Quatre to postpone his meeting with his father to be there for Heero…well Quatre's a nice guy. A little more information on Heero's occupation, still nothing conclusive. I was torn as well on rather Quatre should tell Heero what he had felt from Maxwell. I'm sure Quatre may the right choice besides it in the stars. You don't have to believe in fate for fate to work its magic *smiles*. I must say I was a little surprised by Meiran visit to Duo and her gift…*smirks*…subtle as always *grins*. You know it's pretty sad when you don't want to meet a business partner because of the clothes he wears…hahahahaha…poor Duo!!! I agreed Janet should get a promotion, she contributed a great deal, in fact I'm beginning to think she's one of Fates little helpers…well her and that damn radio…hahahahaha…guess she needs a new one now…Hahahahahaha!!! Well. I'm glad that Heero and Trowa managed to clear the air sort to speak concerning Quatre. It was nice to see Quatre and his father getting along so well. His father didn't seem to have a problem with him being guy…of course who would with the possibility of Dorothy being your daughter-in-law…Hahahahahaha!!! Hmmmmm….so Duo's taking a later flight…I wonder if it's the same flight that Heero will be taking? Nice chapter!!! Of course that's a given…*smiles*
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Title: The Edulcoration of Duo Maxwell
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh! I wrote the wrong title, but the other is also an equally interesting one. More commentary on this one!!! MY FAV g-bos (DUO and HEE-chan), I love your adaptation of pretty woman, your creativity and please keep up the good work!! Can't wait to read more!! thank you for sharing your talent. (^_^)
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Title: eyes as cold as stone
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! Thank you so much! what a story! onwarded to sequel>>>>
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 14:05 CST
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Reviewed By: soOo_xD On: March 16, 2004 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o wow u kept me up all nite reading every freakin chapter... its just that damn gud ^_^ can't wait for the update
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Reviewed By: D. On: March 15, 2004 23:25 CST
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-chuckles for a while- I Think I'm Turning Japanese by The Vapors. ;) I don't laugh out loud very much, but when I read that I almost fell out of the chair. Your story is wonderful. Thank you. D.
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Reviewed By: feckless On: March 15, 2004 20:42 CST
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woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! yay! update. ok. luved it, as always. can't wait. yay.
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Reviewed By: LadyDea108 On: March 15, 2004 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE the fic the only down side is there are no more updates. PLEASE post more. its addictive and right now there is nothing to go off on. please post more ;.; ja ne
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Title: cool ^_^
Reviewed By: Warp3793 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I've been following this fic since the beginning and it's great! I love Duo and Quatre (my fave g-boys) but damn is Trowa hot!! You really write him well. Also, what the hell is up with Zechs? He is hot, but damn is he being a prick! Keep writing ^_^ Also, you seem to know Las Vegas pretty well, I live there so that's pretty cool. I've never read a fic that mentions it before. If only Quatre really did live in Henderson. . . .
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Reviewed By: Ice Princess On: March 13, 2004 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a most talented person. I have never encountered such originality and creativity before in all my years of reading. You took something that any other person would have made into a regurgitation of the same plot line with the added features of the new characters and made it into something that gives insight into your world and your vast knowledge. This was a pleasure to read and I anticipate the final chapters of this "novel" with bittersweet anxiety. Not wanting it to end yet I know I will throughly enjoy the climatic ending that awaits. I bow down before a master of the art of writing.
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