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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another chapter!!!! *dances a happy jig* Awww I'm so glad that they're still spending quality time together instead of avoiding each other because of the pants incident. But one thing that does have me worried....is something bad really going to happen to Inu? I know you said that Kagome was done with the visions, but still. Heh, that was a nice touch, using the book that Kagome nearly died for! Beautiful chapter, like always!
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Reviewed By: Histtle On: April 12, 2008 10:26 CDT
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I absolutly love this story. You made me cry a couple chapters back. Inu is so adorable. I can't wait for Kagome to say yes to him. I love your style of writing, too. (: I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 08:04 CDT
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well, awesome update. And...just a little question. If Inu's eyes were red, doesn't that mean he went full-demon? Just asking, cuz you said eyes of blood red watching her, or...something like that. XD anyways, can't wait until the 25th! I know you say you're like...never late when it comes to updates, but if you are late I will hunt you down and make you write it! I promise I will, and I don't break my promises.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 22:16 CDT
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Kawaii!!! Thankfully I'm back on the internet, no thanks to all the allergies and ailments I'm suffering because of. Oh I absolutely hate spring! Well anyways I have to say your past chapters and this chapter were incredibly wonderful! They are so interesting and beautifully written. I especially like the part when Kagome tricks Inu when she helps heal him and the other part that I absolutely adored was when you described the pond! The diamonds and pearl was such a beautiful way of describing the moon and stars! Truly wonderful and completely brilliant! A sparkly great achievement! This story should be placed in the stars themselves to have the people tell and retell it over and over as the fabulous fantasy continues! *I have to stop eating too much chocolate truffles!* Great job!
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 18:04 CDT
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yaaa! kool update....*growls* da 25th!!!!!!!!????????? r u crazy i cant wait dat long!!!!!!? i read it right away wen i gat da notice of my new email o plz o plz o plz o plz if u can update sooner den da 25th if u can, pllz update! nice update i luved it keep it up and ill b waiting!
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 18:19 CDT
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tralalalalalalala.....im still waiting u no...WHERE IS UR NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!???????????..... >.> i wanna no wat happens u gat me HOOKED to dis fic ur at da top of my list of favs.....NOW UPDATE WOMAN!......well i think i shuld update my fic....now i no how my readers feel wen i dont update.....^.^ im srry who eva is reading mine if ive bin taking very long ima update now i think. well back to u....UPDATE!!thnk u bye ^.^! is fisy a word??? its on da spam filter and ive neva gaten a real word on dat thing so tell me if fisy is a word.(lol u dont have to if u dont want to)
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Reviewed By: me amore On: April 06, 2008 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like the story but could you please note when your wirting another chapter. I know you have other stories to worry about, but I'm afaird your going to start wirting another one and for get this one. And no one wants that so. Update soon and poste as much info about the next chapter as possible. Love LOVE
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 19:36 CDT
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awsum! ya i was on da thnk u list fer reviews!! woo-hoo nice update i simply LUVED it!!!! pllllz update soon. dat last part was hilarious i couldnt stop giggiling i still AM! again awsum update keep it up and update soon! tho i wanna no one thing(not to be perverted like miroku...) did he have underwear on?????...LMAO!!!!! srry i couldnt resist i have to no y he was so embarresed to not let her...anyways update soon! (but u can still answer my ? if u like ^_^)
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Reviewed By: me amore On: March 29, 2008 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your good really good. Drawing evryones attention with the ending. Much like a movie I once saw, but anyway. Can't wait for the next chapter. Kagome is a sly fox, one that shouldn't be under estatmeated. Now the question is, will she tell him what he wants to know and will he do tha same. And how far well they go before she wants or goes back. And am i scenceing some one else coming in to the mix. Well hopfuly these question well be answer on the next chapter. love love
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hah! That was absolutely great! Kagome certainly went about that situation very well. Poor Inu, he's just as bashful as ever...hehe that's what made that scene so fun to read. Wonderful chapter, as always!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 23:11 CDT
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try: Filmmaking - Wikipedia , productionhub[dot]com , en[dot]wikibooks[dot]org/wiki/Movie_Making_Manual . . . that was cool how she caught him by surprise an was finished treating him before he even realized it. good chapter. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 22:07 CDT
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This was wonderful. It is cute how they scwabble. I am not sure about this but when Kagome is given permission to enter his room ("You may."....the door open reviling a nervous) reviling seems like maybe it s/b revealing? Feel free to use whatever you want from me, its cool with me. I absolutely love your idea for your new fic. If i locate any info on that stuff I will let you know.
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Reviewed By: SummerNightsxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 18:01 CDT
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I love this story. I've been following it for a while to see how it comes along, and I must say that its very good. :D And btw, I absolutely LOVE the idea of that story, the one here she falls in love with her character. The summary sounds awesome, and I hopw to see it in the near future. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 17:04 CDT
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awesome update! love it! That's pretty much all I can say. I know it's not much but, that's the only way I can sum it up. And I loved The Purple Lord Of Darkness too. It was funny. Hope things go well. And yes, because they weren't making baby Inu's it can still be classified as T. But, Inu was kind of thinking about making baby Inu's. Lol. Can't wait for next update. Have A Nice Day!
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooohhhh so good! I don't normally read alternate verse stories but you had me hooked from the prologue! Very well defined and articulate. The story is also progressing smoothly (though I do believe Inu is growing impatient). I love the tickling scene, even though your fic runs along the darker edge of the sword, it brought the story it's much needed tension release. 'After the bath incident' scene was another fav. He was so scared, you might actually had thought he would have been 'sat' (if that was even possible without the dreaded necklace?). Kag's senitivity to Inu's feelings was perfection. Your imagery is quite remarkable. I could actually see the castle and the garden, no small feet! Their interaction is right on target as well. Inu's inner turmoil over Kags and Kags believing that what is between them is no more than friendship (god forbid that she may actually love him! Open your eyes, girl!!!). I've very much enjoyed reading this and am looking forward to your future chapters!! Congrats on your nom at the IY Fanguild! I'm sure we will be seeing you there again shortly!
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