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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 19:10 CDT
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well dat was a short chapter O_O...thats not like you really.... T~T i wanna read mooore!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update plllz!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omgoodness this story is soooooo good and it just keeps getting better and better! I cant wait for the next update even though you say it's going to be short. I ont care i just love reading this story. It's very creative and i can tell its going to be a semi long if not long story and i love long stories. Well good luck with your jet lag and please try to get the next chapters like 20 up as soon as you can since 19 isnt going to be that long but i understand if your tired or whatever from traveling so good luck!
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 15:48 CDT
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Something happened to my review the last time, it all earsed *sob*. Okay whatever. I'll just review the last chapter you put up. Uh-oooooh that's not good...Kagome's now sure that Inu is the prince O_O. I hope that doesn't do anything bad to the whole relationship....Get back already! I wanna read the next chapter!!!!! Lol byyye--------Adri
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 22:27 CDT
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AWSOME! Im at North Carolina for this whooole week im lucky I even found a computer >_
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Reviewed By: kfino7 On: June 25, 2008 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know that I am truly enjoying your story. I have read quite a bit of Inuyasha fanfiction, and all different categories. Yours has been one of the best to combine drama, romance, and you have kept it both fun and dark. Very few writers can do this, and most only make it super dark, or sickly sweet. I actually have never left a review on a fanfic, but when I saw that you were losing some motivation with the story, I had to say something because it would be a real shame if you didn't finish this story. I am excited to see where you take this story from here, and I think that I will wait for two weeks before reading the next chapter. And I will continue to review, if that will help you to continue with this wonderful story. Keep up the good work! I am excited for what's next!
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Reviewed By: inu_babe34 On: June 23, 2008 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! i am in love with this story!!!! it is so dang good, and i stay up every other friday wating 4 your update!! i luv it and it's one of my FAVORITE stories ever!!!! please continue writing this story, cuz otherwise i'm gonna have to do something drastic lol!!!!! luvs ya, bye!!!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omgoodness i absolutely LOVE this story!! It's one of the best stories i have ever read. Ive been looking for a really good story to read for the last couple of nights and when i checked this story andsaw that you updated with not 1 but 2 chapters i was in complete bliss! There just arent that many good stories out there any more. If you have any good stories that you would recommend to me that would be great! I will do as you say though and not read the next chapter until a couple of weeks have passed because i know that i am going to HATE waiting a month or so for the next update. Well i hope you have fun on your trip and good luck with the jet lag! Lol. Oh and update as soon as you can when you get back. Thanks a bunch for writing this story your a great author! Chao. Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_SIT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 00:29 CDT
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This answeres a lot of questions (albeit, unasked questions - because I trust you so much :D) about how Inu was going to keep Kagome from finding out his secret. I'm glad that Kagome told Inu the things she was keeping from him. I don't remember there being any bad mistakes in the story itself. Now the AN on the other hand... :P
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Title: Excellent Story
Reviewed By: Bramblekitty94 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this fanfic since ch. 1 and I love Beauty and the Beast and Inuyasha, so this was a great idea. Your style of writing is great and your ideas for scenarios surprise me every chapter!!! I can't till you come back from your trip, but have fun and unwind for awhile... Thanks for writing WR and follow your dreams. Your devoted reader, [IMG]http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc149/bramblekitty94/1158038003267- 2.jpg[/IMG]
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Title: Excellent Story
Reviewed By: Bramblekitty94 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this fanfic since ch. 1 and I love Beauty and the Beast and Inuyasha, so this was a great idea. Your style of writing is great and your ideas for scenarios surprise me every chapter!!! I can't till you come back from your trip, but have fun and unwind for awhile... Thanks for writing WR and follow your dreams. Your devoted reader, [IMG]http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc149/bramblekitty94/1158038003267- 2.jpg[/IMG]
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Title: Love it!!
Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it loved it loved it!!!!! I loved those chapters!!! They were sooooooooo cute!!! Dun dun dun... Kagome now knows that inu is he lord!! How will she react!?!?!? Have fun on ur trip!!! Can't wait to read the next one!! Oh and by the way!! That wasnt a cliffhanger, but that is soo an open ending! Its like torture not knowing how she's going to react!!! Why?!?!?!? Lol
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was supposed to be finishing a chapter for my own story but I'm having a bit of a mental block so i decided to read what i've missed... the only thing i can is wow. you've worked out a wonderful story it is really different from the boring "beauty and the beast" typical story. keep up the great work, i hope is far from over since it's getting very interesting. ;)
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 19:34 CDT
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Kikyo was 13? Jesus, anyways, I guess that is the normal age for the . .1770 I think it was . . .my bad if it was wrong. And the 13th is Rubix's birthday! He'd like have a mini spaz if WR was updated then. But no pressure, he probably wouldn't care too much. He honestly doesn't care when it's updated, just so long that it IS updated. But, I got to head to bed soon, before my fingers drop off and my eyelids permidently close.I can NEVER get any sleep! I sleep for EXACTLY two hours then I wake up and can't sleep anymore. It's ANNOYING AS HELL!!! Anyways, have fun on your trip and I'll be waiting for your next chapter! Seeya!!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 19:13 CDT
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alright! I got a chapter dedicated to me! *does happy dance* And I haven't read chapter 18 yet, as your request to review separately, that I can do. And I don't think I was 'Bugging' and 'Reminding' you . . .more like nagging you. I only nagged a lot cuz I go the update days wrong. I thought that you were late by a day or something. My bad. Love the chapter. And the strawberries and chocolate! I was actually eating strawberries and chocolate when I read this. Lol. Dunno why . . . weird craving. Awesome chapter though!
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi (ugh...too lazy to log in, sorry!) On: June 18, 2008 15:16 CDT
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Wow...that was amazing! I love how real you made Inu's transformation seem...almost like you've actually experienced it! Every single aspect of him, internal and external was covered. Great job! Ha, of course Kagome had to find him. How much does she really suspect that the prince is Inu? The conversation between them was wonderful too. How long does the potion last...I thought it was only one day? Because human Inu wants Kagome to come back and see him the next day, but what I'm thinking is that I remember you saying the potion would only turn him human one day. Forgive me if I'm wrong! And then there's also the issue of Inu not being there... Through the whole chapter, I was wondering, how did Kagome even FIND him? The place Inu went to transform seemed so protected and yet she found it so easily. Almost like she followed him! I'm guessing that I'm probably going to have to wait for the next few chapters to come out to have most of my questions answered. Again, great job, and I also wanted to say that you're doing very well on going into the depths of Inu's mind. All the thoughts are very realistic. Anyways, have fun on your trip, I can't wait to read more!
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