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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_SIT [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 03:13 CDT
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Mmm, delicious. So much mystery in this chapter. I'm all excited now. :D I was so caught up in the story itself, to really read it with a critical eye, so I'll have to read it again later and come back. That being said...NOOOOOOOO!!!! I'm so mad at Inuyasha right now!! How could he say that he loves her, but be so willing to betray her with another woman - just to get something he wants?! I like what you did with the wolves, though. (I can't remember how you spelled their names, so I'm not even going to try. I'll just butcher them. ;) ) They seem like fun characters, and you're really starting to like them, and then they turn on Kagome. You want to be angry at them, but you can't because you know that they really are just trying to look out for Inuyasha. The whole situation makes me wonderfully nervous, wondering just how heavy that other shoe is going to be. I had something else, but I forgot it (it's super late right now, and I'm really sleepy...I become a bit of a spaz when I'm sleepy), so I'll just leave you with an, "I really enjoy reading your story, and always wait on pins and needles for the next one. Can't wait until the 23rd!" I'll try not to forget to to come back with a coherant criticism, but you can properly berate me if I do.
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Reviewed By: Inuluver66613 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 19:04 CDT
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I like it but the last chapter had some minor spelling errors. It did get kind of dull in this chapter but overall, I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: I love the wolves!
Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 21:19 CDT
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Holy crap! I love your wolf characters!! They are SOOOO FUNNY!!! Skoll: "I see no cake" OMG They are so funny! That whole scene was hilarious!!! Inu: "You mock me, yet you want tea and cakes?" Lol lol lol lol!! How did you come up with this?! Cracks me up! I love this chapter, not surprising though, since i've liked every other chapter! :) Keep up the fabulous story! May 23rd i have that written on my calendar!!! Looking forward to it!!
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Reviewed By: me amore On: May 12, 2008 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story it was cute and puts another women in the plot nice work. Now I know in some case bitch means mate, girl dog, and such but you may have had a little too much fun wiht it. Either way you got your point across. LOVE THE STORY, and can't wait for the 29 I think . Until then love. LOVE
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Title: Like, wow.
Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 23:20 CDT
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I have finished reading upto chap 14, and I just have to say "Bravo". Beauty and the Beast story in a very different way. Very wonderful. Thank you for the amazing fic and hope you update soon. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* Well, I finished finally! And my oh my, am I ever glad that I decided to look for it! Dear me, this story is an almost literal ball of fluff at some points! I love it!! And, oh yeah, I was right! It was Kikyo!! Yay!! And, if you would be so kind as to send me the new version of your cover, it would be most apprecitated. I love your story, plus you've already got my email! So will you send it? Pwease? *puppy dog eyes* I'm not sure I like Inu's two lupine pals. They don't seem to friendly to me. And who the heck is the queen?! Dang it! Yet another mystery to add to the list. And I seriously hope that sheisn't going to ask for something...physical as payment. That would cause MAJOR drama between Kagome and Inu! Poor Kagome, how would she feel to see her man with another woman? Hm, then again, it might make her admit that she does , in fact, want him to be "her man." Maybe it isn't such a bad idea after all....
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 06:24 CDT
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well, I had been expecting a full cure, not a temporary cure. That really putts a spin on things. Who is this Queen? It can't be Kikyo, 50 years, she'd be a)dead or b)Old, wrinkled, and crippled. So, now I'm just confused. :S
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 05:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 22:25 CDT
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i read it quikly again *rubs back of kneck* HEY! its not my fault ur really gud at writing OOOOO and i guess tell ALL ur bettas dey r awsome! ur a really gud writer! i luv dis stori and nice pic i luv it! keep it up cant wait till da 23rd!!! [ aaawwww T_T i have to wait all da way till da 23rd damn it..o well its worth da wait ^_^]
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Title: To:Hitsugaya630
Reviewed By: Pirittokuru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 20:58 CDT
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To:Hitsugaya630 Holy shit! That was a really long comment......XD I bet lil6ter feels very special! She should though...... lol still I couldnt even finish reading that comment! Thats gnarly as hell!
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Pirittokuru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again.... love it. Nice chapter update.I like your pictures too they are quite good! Will the "Queen" be explained more in later chapters?
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 20:47 CDT
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Oh my gosh! This really, REALLY sucks!!! I mean seriously sucks! I haven't been getting any update emails on this story, because I think I forgot to put it on my list. So, of course, I've been waiting since DEMCEMBER for a frikkin update, thinking you'd abandoned the story, and you actually have 14 chapters out! Dang it! Well, at least I checked back up on it. Now I'm going to read through the whole thing, and I'll review again when I get to the end of it. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 19:44 CDT
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Great chapter! I love the way you gave Hati and Skoll such personality! So....Inu found Kikyo's journal? Definitely an interesting turn in the story. Well, I just wanted to say wonderful job again, this story is anything but predictable!
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Reviewed By: EllsBells01 On: May 03, 2008 15:17 CDT
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not to shamby.. some parts are a little slow but other then that its a good read... i love it
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 04:13 CDT
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I just thought that I'd let you know that I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter, as I've been reading it for a while. I've never gotten around to commenting on it though. I'll give this an overall 10.
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