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| "White Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 224 ] | | Pages (15): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 › » ] | Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 14:13 CST
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Love this chapter,I actually thinks it's kind of nice to see Inu being nice, I mean, the really Inu wouldn't be nice for all that he was worth. (OK, so maybe that is a bit wrong, he would probably be nice to Kagome in the anime after he told her he loved her, but then again, I didn't write Inuyasha, so.. how should I know?)But it's actually a good thing, it adds....what's the word I'm looking for? Ah yes....it adds a kind of flare to the story, and a very nice flare at that. All glittery, and a whole bunch of pretty colors. Lol. But I really like it. And I'm pretty sure that I say that in every damn review...but...ah who cares!? I LOVE THIS DAMN STORY! I can't wait to see where you're headed with this.(Though I think I got a pretty good idea already. :D) Oh, and thanks, and just to let you know, I will be able to read the next chapter without having to have the print at like....72 font or something, cuz I'm getting glasses next week. And that's gonna be great. My brother was reading this story last night. and he said and I quote: "Good god, This is amazing! Who the bloody hell wrote this? Tell them to hurry the fuck up and post another chapter already!" And I laughed at him. But he's gonna have to wait til the 29th. *points and laughs* he's not good at waiting. So, hope things go good with your beta, and Have A Nice Day!
| Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 02:01 CST
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This was so awesome. I just love the part where she starts caressing his ears. I am also interested in know what that book was that she was so willing to fall to her death for. I was and am still a fan of disney. Though when I found out about the original stories in my early twenties.. I was a bit disallusioned. I had found the story of the little mermaid in the attic of my boyfriends house when we were playing pool. I was shocked. Caused me to look into more fairy tales and their origins. Me and my daughter watch and read alot of Disney because I love happy endings but we also read the other stories. I want you to be well rounded, and to think that anything is possible, and there will be many types of endings. I think most Fairytales and such were originally told to teach lessons to the listeners. I personally am a hopeless romantic and just love happy endings but I am also realistic. Well, Thank you again for another wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading your next chapter. Dei Dei
| Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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haha! yippidy-doo-da and all that jazz. they kissed!!! my stomach is dancing with gilded butterflies now. lol. and you didn't make it a boring "then he put his lips on hers hard..". there was actual drama building up with -what i like to call- "sensual healing" having Kagome kiss Inu on the places she hurt him. and not to mention, the whispers past between them before and during the kisses. "kiss here Kagome, and here and here". if i was her i would be like "just let me kiss everything!". lol. sorry about going straight ino the kissing scence in this review but as i told you last time, im a hard sucker for this stuff. i was tingling all over through out this chapter and also waiting throughout the day for tonights read. i know you may have not been keen on the library scence because it happened in the movie but i believe you added your personal -little hentai- touch. i have no doubt that you won't stop suprising me my dear. even with this mysterious woman on the prowl. poor Inu asking the proposal again. i know i think saying yes to him would be too soon but still. i want to cuddle him. and rub those sexual ears. that lucky Kagome. say you will allow him to court you at least! speaking of said girl she seems to be much closer to actually admitting she could have feelings towards him other than friendship. now that you have explained a bit to me why you wrote Inu and Kags personality this way i see it clearly now. Kagome is being herself. she is just in her protective stage ith him like she was in the beginning of the InuYasha series. you are just expanding it more. and Inuyasha's character is divine. we all think we know Inuyasha as a one sided man, which is quiet boring- but he does actually have many emotions and is seen in the manga/anime. its just not as constant as the grumpy hanyou. you have put in so much detail that others have not yet captured. and this is only your second story? im very very impressed. anyways don' t worry about my falling down moment with excitment. i trip over my boyfriends clothes and sometimes friends all the time. im used to it. i tried avoiding objects this time when i danced around the room with happiness. i shall look forward to your email girl. wonderful chapter, in fact im going to read it over a thousand times more because of that. thanyou for the pleassure!
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice update. I liked the library scene, and I have to admit to a great curiosity to what the book that caused the accident was. I am glad that Koga is finding love in Ayame and I hope he lets it develop into true feelings and not second best. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 20:55 CST
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OMFG!!!(O my friggin' gosh, i didnt mean god) i no i reviewed!!! but i cant see my name.... i guess i didnt review.... ne ways awsome so far i luv it very much!.... oh and luv wen guys play with my hair or brush it.... but so far my cousins have only done dat...*sigh* im to ugly to get a BF i mean i had one but he broke up with me cuz he said my friend bothered him alot like "When r u guys gonna kiiisss?" and oder stuff.... but oh well dats not da point dis is a very good fic!(although sometimes i do not understand some sent. u say cuz dey r to like high class sent..... i no i didnt understand wat i said dere eder) ne ways keep it up and plllllllzzzz update soon!!!! ima put ur fic on my favs so i can see when u update!!! keep it up bye!!
| Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 22:27 CST
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I just love this story it is angsty and sweet. I am fine with not having the *. I am more than capable of shifting gears as I read if I need to. I am not afraid of my daughter hearing about kissing though. I am not going to be reading her any explicit sex scenes. I guess dark could mean a lot of things. Have you read some of he Grimm Fairy Tales… or the original Little Mermaid by Hans Christian Andersen…it did not have a happy ending. I am not drowning her in Disney happy endings …though we love them… but I am trying to give her a balance and a variety of things to process in her new little mind. I am so excited about you drawing the hair scene… YIPPEE!!!... doing little happy dance!! Well, I do look forward to reading your next chapter next week. Thanks again for this beautiful story. Dei Dei
| Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow, great update. And Oh MY GOD! You're updating this story on the day that I'm gonna get my eyes checked, I think reading too many stories on the computer fucked my eyes up some how. So I will look forward to reading it! Lol. Hope you update soon! And thanks for drawing the picture for me...or...I should say that you're going to. I just don't know how to word it right. Anyways, great update. Please Update Soon And Have A nice Day!
| Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 02:00 CST
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why thank your lovely beta for me. lol. i like it much too. it tells everyone about me, what i like and its blunt. how much more can you break down a name? as for the quoet, those words are true wisdom in a nutshell. you can tell your betta that he/she does a great job with your work. i need one for daily support myself. and you can tell yourself that your doing such a great job that its almost depressing to others that they are so far behind. anyways, i check on your story as much as i can and you wouldn't start to imagine how thrilled i was. i actually stood up and was going to start skipping around the room till i slipt and fell on my boyfriends superman's undies. lol. so now you can get a picture on how it made me feel. i couldn't believe when i read that Kagome was being so bold. *a good* shock! and Inu's not complaining. i do love the suspence you keep giving us. when i think i know where i am then poof, im off the trail once more. it really ties me in and you have created quiet a knot to untanggle. but then again, who am i to resist temptation. im a quitter. lol. questions like "What does Inu plan on giving to Kagome?" come up. not to mention my bafflement with the flashbacks. which woman is who? who's WHO??? who is comming?.....who am i???-just kidding, skip the latter. very inticing. but the reason why i am jelouse of the mystery laddy is because obviously Inu is involved with her and what if she takes Kagome's place with him? only time will tell though. however when i first began this tale i summed that it was InuYasha's mother as the mystery. but with this deep (more than mother and son) affections, i knew i was wrong. expecially since weve now been introduced to her in the shadowed past. im guessing the woman behind the dream is a character we least expect like Rin, Sango, Ayame or Kagura. not my cup of tea but its better than Kikyou to me. so fluff comming huh? kinda expected that when you left them cuddled on a bed. a good ending to any chapter *wink*. thanks for setting a date with the update. i don't have to go back and fourth now. phew! me and fluffiness go extremely well together! as always i will be pleased to have the privalge of reviewing you again on the thirteenth...till then. thankyou!
| Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 18:46 CST
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Oh Oh Oh OH!!!!!!! This is so cute! It's a very good plot to this chapter. You know? Her being afraid of the rain, him leaving, after he said he wouldn't. Cause if he hadn't left, that wouldn't really have happened the way it did!! I think i'm gonna keep my name! I think I know how she's gonna find out about him!!! But, it's just a hunch. I think that he's going to show her the place that he turned into the half-demon and then she's going to have a vision of him turning into a demon!! Great chapter!! Can't wait til the twelfth!!!
| Reviewed By: hot for ABERCROMBIE [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 23:43 CST
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woohoo! Fluffy chapter coming up! Yess! I seriously cannot wait. I love fluff. And I love this story. woot=]
| Reviewed By: Squeegee_B [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 23:39 CST
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Oh my goodness, the closeness, I love it, it's so good! Okay, now that that's out of my system... I'm kinda bummed there are no more visions, but you made up for it by making the last two incredible. I really hope you explain it soon, (as well as Kagome's fears) because my curiosity is beyond piqued.
| Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is a truely mind capturing saga who have written here. i absolutly adore it. i simply can't get enough of this addiction and im sad that there are no more chapters to read till your next update. but i'll wait patiently, but im like InuYasha, its uber hard to do. lol. its differnent having a soft Inu first starting out this fic. usually it doesn't develop till later on but i don't care at all, i am a sucker for originality. it kinda feels that Kagome and InuYasha (err.....Inu) have changed personalities for the time being. it quite ammusing but im sure you have plenty more in store for us. i do also love their bantering and deep conversations. you have written them so well. precise wording and everything. i can't praise you enough. i simply will just bow at your feet. however i am rather jelouse of this mystery woman and as much as the independent Kagome is right now i do hope she will change attitude in time. i have seen many stories about InuYasha and the theme of beauty and the beast but above all this is the most originally put and suited best for InuYasha. bravo! i look forward to reviewing you time nd time again as this fic continues. i know i want be dissapointed in romance with inu and kag in this story. i will go read your other story and review it too!
| Reviewed By: Squeegee_B [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 23:02 CST
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I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed the past few chapters. I've just been insanely busy, but I have caught up with the story, and I must say that I am impressed. I love how their relationship is building, and I can't wait to see what comes of Kagome's visions. It seems that she's going to figure out who the Prince soon. Guess I'll have to see. :)
| Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 08:06 CST
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I am so sorry I haven't reviewed! I have been killing myself with stress over the finals! Ugh they are killers I swear, even if well prepared the fact that the grades go on your permanent record really freaks me out! Well anyways enough about me now lets talk about you and your awesome story. Well Chapter 5 was so freaking Kawaii! No words could truly describe it's cuteness and description. The roses seem so real and the fact of when Inuyasha was slapped was so resonating the line you used "That's when he felt it. The sting of both rejection and her hand across his cheek." was so beautifully hillarious. I can't believe Inu had the gall to ask such a question just days after meeting her! It would be really an odd moment in time. ^ ^; Now Chapter Six was so remarkable in its own accord on how dramatic you made it. The tension of Inu trying to get Kagome to respond to his words whilst she was in a vision was so dramatic and I kept getting the feeling a tear was going to slip down her cheek making Inu go balistic! It would have made a cute image... but the last three lines was freaking hillarious my dad came to my room wondering what the was! The lines were expected yet the way they were used were so unexpected! It was so funny and cute! I kept reading it and rereading it! I really loved your updates! Thanks for updating and sorry for not reviewing sooner! Once again, great job and keep up the excellent work! ~monkey says great job too~
| Reviewed By: shipposgirl On: January 19, 2008 21:25 CST
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I love it its one of the best fanfics i've read in a very long time please please keep posting chapters lol love it bye.:-D
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