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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_SIT [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 19:22 CDT
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At the risk of sounding annoying, I am really glad that you decided to have Kagome pull back a little from Inuyasha. I've always thought that the amount of time the two have had to build up the kind of friendship that they have in the manga is what has allowed their love to become as ledgendary as it has. I gotta say, I don't know how I get through the waiting after each post. This story is just so good, that it sure puts my patience to the test. You're doing a great job. I can't wait for the next chapter! In case you don't post again before next weekend, happy Easter! - if you cellabrate it, that is. :)
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Title: wonderful ... as always!
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 00:21 CDT
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So I think that she he is talking about her reminding him of 'her' it is Kagome reminding him of whom I think is his mother. And he is thinking about when he made the horse, Naraku.. he could see what was going on at her cottage with her family before she came to him because Naraku was his creation... right? I think it is also Kagome at the door because she came down to find her answers by herself and is finding him all bloody and tearing up the bricks with the little package she visioned. I love the petting his ears scene. I want to pet his ears. I also love how frustrated poor inu is getting. I just have two typos... I think. Really now? I tend to think it very fair," he smirked down in reply, loving the way that (he s/b her) chest rapidly rose and fell as she tried to regain her normal heart and breathing rate. A feat easier said than done. "That is unnecessary," she replied, letting go of her hostage. "I do not think that I should trust (out s/b our) lips to converse in such a manner." This was a wonderful way to start off my spring break... thanks. Dei Dei
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how upset Inuyasha is getting over Kagome not sharing her visions with him. If she did he would realize quickly that she is seeing his past, but would he tell her that? I like the ending here too, with the discovery of the book and Kagome finding Inu hurt. I think that she will do her usual bandaging of his wounds and that will aid him in realizing that she does care for him but is just nervous about going too fast. I hope the book will give them a clue at least on how to reverse the spell and make Inuyasha human again. But will he confide in Kagome that he used to be human? Can't wait to find out.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaluvskagome909 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 22:22 CDT
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THAT IS NO FAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!!!!!!!!!!!! I REALLY NEED TO KNOW WHO she IS!!!!!!! THE FACT THAT IT WAS BECAUSE KAGOME REIMINDED HIM OF her THAT HE STARTED TO HAVE FEELINGS FOR KAGOME THAT REALLY BITES MY COOKIE!!!!!!!!!!!! UGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THIS STINKS!!!!!!!! HMMMMMMMMMM BUT BESIDES THAT THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER!!!!!!! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 18:50 CDT
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okay, the way he said 'What are you doing here?' kind of makes me think it's not Kagome. But...Kagome's the only one with him right? Unless you decided to be mean and made Kinky-how...er..I mean Kikyo come back! That's just too mean for Inu. And why does it make me feel like it's not Kagome? Why is it that there are no more visions? What purpose have they served? And why the hell do I get the feeling that something evil and twisted might happen? Good god, I hope you don't make Kag or Inu die or something. God I'd have to hate you then. *nervous laugh* Alright, maybe I should stop my rambling. But damn it my head's pounding with questions. Half of them don't even make any sense. I had to wait to post a review, I had to wait until my brother read it as well, before I could tell you what he thought about it. He still loves it. Though he's extremely mad at you that you ended the chapter like this. And he's got about the same questions as me. All though he asking me why the hell you would bring Kink-hoe back in the story. Ah shit, sorry....KIKYO. God I sooooo prefer calling her Kinky-hoe rather then Kikyo. But can't wait for the next chapter, but it seems like I'm gonna have to. I always have to. *Sighs* God damn it, now I'm gonna be wondering what the hell is gonna happen and who the hell that women is. *Growls8 Maybe I Should just threaten you or something, make you update sooner. Damn that won't work. Seeing as I don't even know where you live, what country, hell I don't even know if you're on this PLANET! (It's a little thing of mine, I always seem to think lifes' a game, and someone's just playing it. So you might be sitting at the controller or something. I'm not sure. But.....lol.) Anyways, can't wait -But I'm gonna - for the next chapter, hope everything goes well. And it's nice to see that you decided to post earlier rather then later. Pleased both me and my brother. He started asking me last night if you were a genius. And I had to wonder the same. But hell, I dunno. Mind telling me that? ARE YOU A GENIUS!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I bet you are. Lol. Hope You Have A Nice Day! And I'll try to keep my rambling on the down low next time. Sound god? Great. *waves* BYE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 18:32 CDT
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awsome!!! i luv dis fic plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! and i have da feeling dat whoeva was at da door was Kagome..........OF COURSE IT WAS HER, SHES DA ONLY ONE IN DA CASTLE WIT HIM ND NO ONE WOULD DARE GO IN DERE FOR FEAR OF INU!!! ne ways update soon i wanna no who it was!
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Reviewed By: lifes_little_chance On: March 02, 2008 09:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry for the multiple posts my cpu is really being dumb. Bummer.
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Reviewed By: lifes_little_chance On: March 02, 2008 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Its sooo very cute. I think the sooner you get the next chapter up the better, but thats me being selfish, and I really do know how those papers are... well... reallllly not fun. I had like 4 due last week it was a bummer. You think teachers would check other teachers plans before unloading a HUGE assignment. So take your time. Thanks for the response, cant wait for the next chapter! (Play more video games homework kills trees!) I saw that on a shirt (featuring a rather scared protesting tree) and it made me laugh.
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Reviewed By: lifes_little_chance On: March 02, 2008 09:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Its sooo very cute. I think the sooner you get the next chapter up the better, but thats me being selfish, and I really do know how those papers are... well... reallllly not fun. I had like 4 due last week it was a bummer. You think teachers would check other teachers plans before unloading a HUGE assignment. So take your time. Thanks for the response, cant wait for the next chapter! (Play more video games homework kills trees!) I saw that on a shirt (featuring a rather scared protesting tree) and it made me laugh.
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Reviewed By: lifes_little_chance On: March 02, 2008 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Its sooo very cute. I think the sooner you get the next chapter up the better, but thats me being selfish, and I really do know how those papers are... well... reallllly not fun. I had like 4 due last week it was a bummer. You think teachers would check other teachers plans before unloading a HUGE assignment. So take your time. Thanks for the response, cant wait for the next chapter! (Play more video games homework kills trees!) I saw that on a shirt (featuring a rather scared protesting tree) and it made me laugh.
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Reviewed By: lifes_little_chance On: March 02, 2008 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Its sooo very cute. I think the sooner you get the next chapter up the better, but thats me being selfish, and I really do know how those papers are... well... reallllly not fun. I had like 4 due last week it was a bummer. You think teachers would check other teachers plans before unloading a HUGE assignment. So take your time. Thanks for the response, cant wait for the next chapter! (Play more video games homework kills trees!) I saw that on a shirt (featuring a rather scared protesting tree) and it made me laugh.
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 09:20 CST
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!! i luv it and deres nothing wrong with it. its very descriptive and very beautiful! i luv dis fic and update!!!(i no i repeat da same exact things cuz its true^-^)
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_SIT [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 04:18 CST
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Awwe! I really liked this chapter. It flowed very well - so much so that although it is a 9-page chapter, it felt very short once I'd reached the end. Inuyasha's antics had me giggling up a storm. I'm sorry to hear about all the work you've got. I can sympathise. (I'm a junior in college, and an English major to boot, so I've had my fair share of large assignments coming at me from all sides all at once) Don't worry too much about the update. While I may be experiencing extreme withdrawl symptomes by the time chapter 10 does come out, I don't want you to feel forced to put out something that isn't your best work. I completely understand your unwillingness to do that as I feel the same way about my own work. Anyway, you know what they say, "Absence makes the heart grow fonder." A few extra days of waiting isn't going to chase away your loyal readers. Take your time and don't post until your satisfied. Good luck with school.
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 22:13 CST
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Haha! I love your story, I read the first chapter a long time ago and just came back to it It's fantastic! Anyway, I just wanted to say, I'm a Junior as well, I feel your pain. At least 75% of my classmates took th SATs today. I am taking them in May. Good Luck! I'm sure you'll do wonderfully. Don't let the story stress you out though. Ste your priorities and follow through. We can all wait patiently for the next chapter! Keep up the great work! I am looking forward to the next update. Best of luck! -Vagabond
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Reviewed By: me amore On: March 01, 2008 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, and you know how to keep the people wonting more.The 14th can't come sooner. Now all I'm wondering is what songs was being palyed. BUT OVER ALLLLLLLLLLL! YOU need to write more than one chapter. I need to know how long their together. love...love
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