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| "White Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 224 ] | | Pages (15): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 › » ] | Title: .........
Reviewed By: Tink2Kagome On: January 01, 2008 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very........interesting............The way you look at things.........I have no idea what i'm saying......I enjoyed it...alot....so keep writing.........yeah......no i'm not drunk......
| Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 00:09 CST
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THAT WAS INTERESTING...I can't believe Kagome actually thought of placing her visions on paper! I would freak if I wrote something then someone read it! Still the chapter was overall very beautifully written and I would like to say here, thanks for reviewing my one - shot! A thousand thankies and a merry christmas hug! ^ ^
| Reviewed By: gwineveve301 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think two weeks is a good amount of time to get everything together. People tend to forget that writers actually breath and do other things. The story is fab so far and I can't wait for something darker!
| Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i guess I could handle waiting 2 weeks, beats a month, and a story as good as this....I think I can wait. It's not going to kill me....i hope. Anyways, I'm sorry to say that at the current moment, I have no ideas to help. Porbably a big bummer isnt it. Anyways, I just got on christmas break yesturday! So like you, I have more time to work on my stories! YAY ME! *dose little haooy dance* I feel bad for Inu. To tell you the truth, he didnt really act so nice in the anime did he? Oh well. I like this Inu better. Kags should be more nice to him, even if she thinks he's a liying cheating, monsterious bastard *Sorry Inu!!! *tear* sorry!* dosent mean she can't be nice to him. *sighs* I just wonder when Kagome with really relizes that he isnt what he seems. Maybe after she relizes that the guy from her visions is really Inu. That would be a funny chapter to read! I love your updates by the way. I know how hard it is to write long chapters, If you read my story Charmed and In Japan you will see that my chapters are long to, so thats why it takes so long to update. Damn long chapters, like 40-50 pages long! Good god! Anyways, your probably getting tired of reading my review, so keep up the good work, and I love it. Cant wait for the next update. I wouldnt be suprised if this was the longest review you've had, not trying to brag, you eyes probalby hurt from reading it. Anyways. Keep the chapters coming, and Have A Nice Day! *waves*
| Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 20:32 CST
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Like I said before I love your style of writing! That was a nice update and I can't believe I won! LOL :) *cheers like a little child* Thankies and by the way the little bet was quite interesting!
| Reviewed By: Squeegee_B [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 11:57 CST
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I still say the women are Kikyo and Tsubaki. I guess I'll have to wait and see. I mean, it could even be Sango and Kagura. I really liked that vision that Kagome had, but I really don't get what Inuyasha is hoping to accomplish by lying about who his mother was. Concern that if she knew he was a Lord, she wouldn't like him for him, maybe? The meals are going to be interesting. I can't wait for that to start. I don't know if this will fit into the story, but castles in France had dungeons, called oubliettes. It comes from the word oublier which literally means 'to forget', and they were damn near impossible to get out of without help, because the only way to get in was from an opening from the ceiling.
| Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 08:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man i cant get enough of this story! PLEASE update soon! i am dieing here!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! *and im not the one who usually beggs for naything* PLEASE!!!!
| Reviewed By: dprincess_87 On: December 07, 2007 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this chapter can't wait for the next one!!!
| Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 00:25 CST
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Wow, quite a dramatic introduction. It was very entertaining and personally, I believe that the woman who died was Kikyo, since she is older than him (human years) in the manga, and Tsubaki is the one who cursed him, since she is quite spiteful. As for the rooms, how about the Hall of Mirrors like the one of Versaille or the Piano Room with an antique piano made of ivory keys and something quite expensive. How about a drawing room, the library, a secret garden? BTW, my favorite part of the story of Beauty and the Beast is basically the climax, since it's so intense...well in a different story than Disney's or the Grimm Brothers'.
| Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweeeeeeeeeeet. I like this one. A very interesting idea, sure to be quite entertaining. I would like to voice the opinion that the woman who died was Inu's mom. That would really be the best way to explain the memories from when he was a kid. And also, when she died she mentions something about being with her beloved soon, therefore she couldn't have been a romantic interest for Inu. About the unknown lady, I say probably Kikyo, though not sure about that. I hope Kouga and Ayame get together, so Kagome doesn't go all teary and moaning about losing the man she loves and stuff. It would be just rude to be moaning over her sister's man. He's got the nothing on the ears. I also noticed that a couple things bare a resemblance to both of Robin McKinley's versions of this fairytale: Beauty, and Rose Daughter. Have you read them? If not, I highly recommend them, Robin McKinley is an awesome writer. Great job so far, and I'm favoriting it so I'll know when you update! A great start. Keep writing!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Shenalyn On: November 29, 2007 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
in this last chapter, i was amazed by the emotion displayed in your words. now it may just be that i have a very vivid imagination, however i was taken aback when i realized that because of the way you write i could feel emotion along with kagome. i could sense the forboding of dark castle, and an unfamiliar wonder, rage, and curiosity towards inu. thankyou. i look forward to experiences like this one with your writing
| Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!! Beauty and the Beast is one of my favorite type of stories and this is one of the most creative, and beautifully written ones I've read so far. Your description is wonderful and your style is great. The latin chant was really interesting and the part where the woman says "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorn, and you angered the wrong woman," was like so freaking great. That is one of the quotes I really take deeply to heart and your way of using it was beautiful. Thank you for posting your story on the web, for us to read. It truly is great.
| Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 15:58 CST
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i was a little shocked because i re-read the story and realized that Naraku...is a horse, i would have thought that he would be a villain or something, but i like how you made him, i think it souts him well really. And i think it was a good idea really. And i love the new chapter, really good, i cant wait to find out what happens next, and when did Yash learn to use magic? That's so cool! Are you going to put in the talking candle, and clock lik ein the diesney one? That was so funny! Oh wait! When do Miroku and Sango come in....if they ever do. I thouhgt you would have ut them in before you put Naraku in, but i guess you dont always have to stick to the origanal story thing do you? Anyways really good update, cant wait for the next chapter, i hope you can update at least more then once a month, even if it was just 2 times a month i would still be happy! at least i would get to read more then one new chapter in one month, Anyways. Again, great update and have a nice day! ~_~ Hitsugaya630 ~_~
| Reviewed By: Squeegee_B [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 17:42 CST
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I figured you wouldn't have Naraku be the villain in the story, though I wish I had a horse like that. I mean, who needs the GPS system when the horse you're riding already knows where to go? I'm glad you updated. This is one of my favorite stories on this website. I'm excited for what's coming next. Oh, and I'm sorry about your grandfather. I know how hard that is, and my prayers are with you and yours.
| Reviewed By: DPrincess On: November 24, 2007 04:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story plesae update it really soon. I check it for updates like everyday!!!
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