| "White Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 224 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyashaluvskagome909 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 16:36 CST
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh my god!!!!!!!!!!! chapter 9 was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!! hmmmmmmm.............but i wonder..... how long till the rubber band snaps and everything starts to go down hill??? i mean things are going to well for the lovers and......... well i just cant help but wonder..... ohhhhh and i'm still concerned over the two mystery women and what i am most worried about is inu's feelings. Are they really real and he loves her for being Kagome or are the feelings just because he has been lonley for 50 years and cant wait till the spell is broken??? so many questions.........and ohhhhh! are sango,miroku and shippou going to be in this story? hmmmmmmmmmmmmm............ and i've also read the Color Purple, great book even if it is meant for a more mature audience. oHHHHHH and please update as soooooooon as you can k!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is one of the best storues i have read and i just cant stop thinking about it. And the summary that you have right now is the one that i feel in love with. hehehehheheheh thanks!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 03:36 CST
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you asked for it... i like the story, it's sweet. . . a pet peeve i have is that i cringe every time i read 'inu' *gack* my mind reads 'dog': 'Kagome gently kissed Dog on the cheek. “Good night Dog,†she murmured...' it even sounds like 'wimpy dog' to me *cringe*, i know it is your story and i respect that i just hope when he changes back in the end she'll just stop calling him 'Dog'. . . i like the 'out of character' gentlemanly manner that yasha, like a sensitive and sweet boy who was belittled and emotionally neglected, a sponge for any small affections that may come his way. his boyish mannerisms are quite endearing but please don't make him into the wimpy dog that someone chose to nickname him. >=P ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... seems that inuyasha & kagome are getting along fine... and now inuyasha will be courting kagome for a week.. but seems that kagome is still unsure of everything... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think chapter 9 was beautiful. I like the idea of Inu being able to court Kagome for a week to show her just how much he loves her. Kagome's reaction to Inu walking in on her bath was pretty realistic; good job! Heh...it'd be nice to have chapter 10 up as soon as possible, even if it hasn't been with the bettas yet. The way you write, I'm sure your mistakes would be minimal and wouldn't take away from the story. Anyways, good luck with your school stuff!
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 19:38 CST
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i will take L.I and Ladygriddlebone advice but only if da next time dey review my fics dey will not flame me and just tell me wat to improve on!bye and once again update!!!!!!!!!!! If L.I. or Ladygriddlebone read dis review thx for da advice and next time just leave out da flame!!!!luv da stori!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 19:29 CST
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update girl dis is awsome if i havent already told u i put u on my favs! and no i dont think deres nething crappy in dis fic. update soon! i luv its great and very sweet so romantic!!!!!! YEAH! Kags let Inu court her!!*squel*!!!!!!! tralalalalalalalalalala!!!!!!!!!! keep it up and i luv da fic update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aha! Yeah man! Me and my brother loved this. So glad to see that Kagome let Inu court her! *dose happy dance* You could not possibly know how much i was hoping she would let him. I was like: Damn she better say yes, if she doesn't say yes I'm gonna have to hit somebody! Lol But this is a really good update. I've had my msn logged on ALL DAY just so that I wouldn't miss it when the chapter came out. And thank god I didn't miss it before I went to bed. i was just about to go to bed when I got the e-mail. (Great timing!) And i have to say, I love this, And I can honestly say (despite my other reviews I do mean HONESTY) I would rather wait until the 29th when your beta's had the chance to look at it. I mean, I love this story. But...i would still rather wait. I'm not sure why though...normally I would want to read the new chapter as soon as possible. but...oh well. I'm sure you don't wan to hear about me and my fucked up brain problems. (That's how I get most of my horrible twist in some of my stories...or the ones that aren't posted here. I can't really post them...too graphic. All blood, guts, gore, and all that wonderful shit)But of coarse you already know this but...ahh what the hell! I'll say it again!! I can't wait for the next chapter. My brother just wants to say that you have to keep up the good work. And that he knows what it's like to hate missing a deadline.(of coarse he's younger then me...about 10 or something...yes I don't remember how old my brother is. Leave me alone!!) but he hates missing one. He's always got me working on all my projects until it's done like..3 days before the deadline. I don't know why though. It's like...why d you care? It's MY grade. Not yours. And half the time he dose my work for me. I know, I'm a 14 year old who gets her 10 year old brother to do her projects for her. *sighs* I can't help it. He's good! He did this social studies project for me once and I got 100% on the damn thing! Plus some bonus points for what ever. But good god. That's just wrong. But enough of my, and my brothers projects. Hope you get your projects, papers, and assignments done in time to update on the 14th, or the 29th. Which ever one suits you best. Hope to see the new chapter some time soon...then again maybe not. Depending on when you post it. But You're probably getting tired of reading this, so I'll just stop typing for a while (and my hands are staring to hurt, from typing this and adding stuff to my stories that I'll probably go and tomorrow anyways. I just hate that, you spend so much time on it only to go and delete it afterwards.) But I guess I should probably let you get back to your work...or go to sleep. (I don't know what time it is where ever you are...so...yeah.) Update when ever you fell like it, and I hope you enjoyed reading this...cuz I sure as hell enjoyed typing it (and as a habit of mine, reading it over to find mistakes. Damn my story writing habits of mine.)But, good night...err...um..good morning...good afternoon...or some other things I can't think of right now. I'm too tired. It's 3 in the fucking morning. I soooo need to go to bed. So..Bye! *waves* (P.S. Sorry for this being so long, I just don't know when to stop. *nervous laugh* hehe?)
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Reviewed By: inuyashaluvskagome909 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 21:39 CST
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG this is a really really really great story!!!!!!!!!!!! i love your version of beauty and the beast!!! hmmmmmmm but i wonder who the mystery women are. i really really want to know!!! at first i didnt want to read the story because its not finished... see i knew that i would not be able to wait for the updates but i just couldnt wait any longer. you grabbed my attention with the summary and iknew that i couldnt wait any longer!!! i loved your library scene it was really really cute! and i also loved the part where he askd her to kiss away the pain!!!!! i was like AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW thats tooooo cute!!!! thanks for the great story and i hoope that you update very very very soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yashkags4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 14:39 CST
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I just read this story today and i fell in love with it from the very first chapter!! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_SIT [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 23:57 CST
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I just read this through, and I really enjoyed it. While I am quite familiar with the Disney version, I have not yet afforded myself the pleasure of reading the story in its original context. This story certainly makes me want to do just that. This is very creative and very entertaining. If I were to be forced to critically analyse it, the only thing I can think of to say is that maybe the relationship is moving a bit too fast. Other than that, (which is really not much of a bother) I'd say this is an excellent piece of fiction. I'm anxiously awaiting your next update! :)
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Reviewed By: lifes_little_chance On: February 17, 2008 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS SO GOOD! I'm glad you posted the name up on your other story. This story is way good I like it more than the real beauty and the beast.Is Kagome going to go back to that one room and find the book that the women hid? And what was the book she tried to get in the library?
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Reviewed By: me amore On: February 16, 2008 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loven tha story,and how you made it your own. I've never seen a story with your kind of flava. When I read this story I'll wait for you, pops in my head. AND I'm guessen a dance scean is coming up. Well either way I can't wait for the 29th.
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Reviewed By: hot for ABERCROMBIE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 00:08 CST
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Awe, that was so cute. I'm really loving the fluff so far. But what happened to your Valentine's Day story? I started reading it two days ago, but I didn't get to finish it. When I looked for it just now, it was gone. It was so nice too:( Anyways, good job with "White Rose"=]
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! This is one of the best Inuyasha fanfics I've had the pleasure of reading in a long time. I love how you've made Inuyasha a beast, since that's what he feels he is in the series as well. You're doing a beautiful job with the story, and I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Squeegee_B [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 21:18 CST
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Squeee! Oh my gosh, they're kissing! Yay! I love it! Okay, got the giggling school girl out again. Great chapter, can't wait for the new one.
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