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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 00:19 CDT
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Oh yeah and nice cliffhanger I wasn't sure what was going on until Kagome noticed it was a wolf on top of her.... Thank you...it just HAD to be wolves!? My most hated mythical creatures! Well, not most hated, but not my favorite either... You know why. Lol Kagome has a heart, she actually forgived Inu. Yaaay! But I don't think I like what's about to happen. *Sigh, growls* You're very evil, you know? Very, very, evil!!! The last part when Kagome fell to her knees crying reminded me of Snow White with all the animals watching her...Lol.... UPDATE!!!!!!!!! I love your story! Not that you don't already know that. :) Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 00:10 CDT
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You already replied to me? O_O Hmm? In witch e-mail did you? Ah what ever. I didn't really get what you said in the A/N. It was sort of confusing....Anyways nice chapter! A little typos here and there but WONDERFUL! Lol update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_SIT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 23:54 CDT
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Ah! I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing! (Actually, I just now read chapter 20 ^_^') My computer crashed this summer, and I lost my wireless internet driver for a while. Also, I've been transferring schools and trying to move from one apartment to another by myself, so I've been a bit busy. Anyway, I LOVE your story! I dunno, the only thing I could say that could be construed as concrit would be that I thought that Kagome let Inu off the hook just a little too quickly. Other than that bit of insignificance, it was wonderful. This last chapter may not have been action-packed (at least the beginning of it), but it was no less entertaining. I enjoy those tender little moments in fics. That ending, though, was amazing and scary and adreneline pumping all at once. I can't wait to find out what happens next! My email alerts have been working fine, so I think that I'm good on that front. I don't think I want any sneak-peaks either. I don't generally like knowing what happens before I read something. I don't even like watching movies based off of books before I've read the book! :D
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Title: I LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: December Love 05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!! You did not disappoint AT ALL!!!!! I've been waiting alllllllll day for this chapter. I'm excited to see what is going to happen with the queen. Update soon please. And when you say the 26th, I assume you mean the 26th of August? Cause here in NJ school doesn't start until Sept. 3rd
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Title: This is madness!
Reviewed By: Whitey Action [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is madness! I can't wait until you post the next chapter, I busted into tears when Inu said "I love you" to Kagome... Oh God! I want the next chapter posted!
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're right....this was TORTURE!!! Ahhh....how could you do that to poor Kags?!?!? He tells her he loves her and the bopsie twins haul him off to repay his debt?!?!?!? *growling* Before she could tell him her feelings!!!! *Gaaahhhh!!* Cliffhanger, indeed! Love the vunerable side you've shown from him. A big romantic playful softy under his brash exterior. Love how Kags still is trying to keep him at arms length but her resolve is SOOOOO crumbling. And now the Queen. That evil witch (literally)! I have an idea of what her 'payment' could be and I don't like it. Yes, you're very evil, but I wouldn't have you any other way. *grinning* Update at your pleasure, Madame, but I love the sneak peak idea. *smirking*
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit what did you do!? Gah! You stole Inu! And here I wanted to lock him in my basement. *pouts* That's so mean! And right after he said he loved her . . .soooo soooo soooo sooo mean!!! You evil, evil, evil women! Gah! I can't even begin to tell you how many times I could say you're evil right about now, not even characters for this review to do that! *Starts mumbling incoherent words* Good god, damn it! And I got to wait a while too! EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL! . . .I think you get the point. . .oh well . . .you're still evil! Very, very, very, evil. Gah! The 20th better come fast . . .*growls obscenities at you* *glares and growls* The next chapter better be good or I'm sending my evil Inuyasha after you, not half demon Inuyasha, blood thirsty, full demon Inuyasha. Got it? Good. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 22:22 CDT
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*sigh* i finally gat time to read it!!!!! T~T forgive him Kagome! Forgive hiiiim! Good...August 6th perfect date cuz im sur ill be dun wit Breaking Dawn---da 4th book of da twilight series AAH! yay!--- by den! ur awsome keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 (not signed in) On: July 29, 2008 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has gotta be one of my fav chapters yet! I love all the angst and the transformation scenes. Can't wait to find out what's gonna happen in the next chapter... And I'm wondering when the queen is gonna come in! It's getting good! Update Soon, Please!..
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhh...angst galore!!! This whole chapter gave me chills reading it. Tomorrow??? Chapter 21???? You're down right evil woman! Tease us like that! And a oneshot??? Jet lag hasn't kept you down for long, if anything it's seemed to fire up your own jets. *giggling* Please, please, please, please, please update before the the big O. (oh, that didn't sound to good did it? *doggishly smirking*)
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Title: and for chap 20
Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! finally, the truth. Kagome really does care for Inu, even when he lied to her... Yahoo!!! And hey, the chap is long! You're back to that. Looking forward to chap 21! Till then, anime~rocks~1010
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 20:00 CDT
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sorry, typo. I should've said this chap is not long. Sorry bout that.
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Title: For chap 19
Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Finally, Inu would tell the truth. I hope Kagome forgives him, although I know it's not gonna be easy. ^_^ This chap is long, but I don't think it has to be long to be good. You could have put more dialogue exchange or some thinking dialogue to make it longer though. Anyway... thanks for this... again.
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished chapter 18, and moving to 19. I'm so sorry the review is so late, but I followed your suggestion, but then got caught up with school. As you said, I think the last part was the best. The way you put the words are so effective. Anyway, on to 19! and THANKS FOR THIS FIC!
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story so far, I have read the hole thing in one shot. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more! :)
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