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| "White Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 224 ] | | Pages (15): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 › » ] | Title: Lol
Reviewed By: December Love 05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww. What an amazing ending. Now I just have to wait for the epilouge!!! YAY!!! Lol. I can't wait to read another one of your amazong stories.
| Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet ending to a beautiful tale!!! Thank you for sharing as much as you have. I'm saddened that you couldn't finish it here as everyone would have liked you to, but I understand your reasons completely. Loved this story entirely. Hope you continue writing more of Inu variety of stories. You have a rare gift at showing Inu's sweeter side with out making him OOC. LOL
| Title: adding to my other post
Reviewed By: Dark_Author [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just to add to my other post, you did an amazing job on this entire story. Its phenomenal. Thank you for sharing it with everyone, and I'm glad that you are continuing to write. Love this story, again. lol
| Reviewed By: Dark_Author [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! I...don't think I can say more than that without it being a biased opinion.
| Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 17:37 CDT
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Amazing! It's so sad to think that White Rose is almost over, but at the same time, I'm really excited to get to the end of the journey, not to mention to know more about this Esmeralda...she's not at all what I expected! One thing I've noticed though, is that you haven't mentioned Kagome's family at all in the last couple of chapters. Is that parallel story going to be wrapped up in the next few chapters too, or would it be too long to include? This was a great chapter, and I really enjoyed reading it! I can't wait to read more...especially about that mysterious BIRD.
| Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 21:19 CDT
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hmmm...Euroseiga sounds like a mixture of Europe and Tenseiga...just thought I'd point that out ^-^
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Reviewed By: uchihacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that sucks...I would be so pissed if I were Inu. What a horny b***h. She's so desperate she would rather him be miserable for the rest of his life to be with her...greedy...
| Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 16:39 CDT
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Quite frankly, I'd rather you take your time with the ending, and we'd still have a proper closure to the story, than a rushed 'lets-get-on-with-it' finale. I'd rather wait an age between one chapter and the next but still get a proper ending, than throw a cat in the hen-house and get a complete pudding. I'm sorry, I don't know what the circumstances are, but as a reader, I'm _quite_ disappointed.
| Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 11:45 CDT
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I HATE ESMERALDA!!!!!!!! YOU SHALL NEVER HAVE INU!!!!!!!! Heheheh sorry. Nice chapter, loved it and hated that it ended like THAT. You, my friend, are PURE evil! EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL!!!!!! Though that is not what is running through my mind right now. What is running through my mind is 'Edward, twilight, edward, twilight, edward, twilight, ext.' Not that you don't already know that ;). Lol update soon!
| Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 01:17 CDT
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im so shocked and so very very VERY sad! noooo! i hate that queen. kagome has to make it in time before you know what happens. oh please!!! boo hoo. im so so sad and because of that I can not think of anything to really write about except that inu is going to give in. you already know that i think everything else is perfect. only this i must say....."please have a happy ending. one where the queen goes bye-bye"........review you soon girlie! again, love your stuff!
| Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-dies- Oh my god! Way to end the chapter! I'm sorry that you aren't going to be able to carry on the story like you wanted to but I love the story nonetheless. I seriously cannot wait to see what is going to happen. I want Inu and Kagome to be together! They are so sweet. When Inu told her that he loved her, oh my god, it brought me to tears. You are an AMAZING writer and I thank you for writing this story. I am so going to read all of your storys from now on. Anyway, to stop my rambling, thank you so much for the story and I can't wait for the next one!
| Title: Jeeze
Reviewed By: December Love 05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeeze!!! My heart couldn't be racing more. Lol. It was a good chapter. I totally forgot today was the 10th. Lol. My mind has been on my boyfriend all day. I've been with him for 2 years and 7 months. On June 25th, he left to go to Fort Jackson in South Carolina to train for the Army. So I've basically been mopping around all day. And the fact that it's raining here in NJ doesn't help my mood. I really miss him. I get to talk to him for 5 minutes every Sunday. That's all besides the letters I get once a week. So your chapter really made me feel better. YAY!!!! Lol. Can't wait for the next update!!!
| Title: I LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI!! I'm sorry i haven't been reviewing!! I haven't been reviewing, only because i've been away ALL summer. i visited my family, then i went to camp for four weeks, then i visited my dad and only got back two days ago!! But, i would like to say I loved those chapters. i think i seriously started crying when the queen's wolves STOLE inu!! i was so mad i was like "WHY?????? I HATE THAT ****(the word for female dog) lol. so, i really enjoy this story! i think that i'm getting really into it. but, i'm really sad that you're going to shorten it! but, i'm sure you have a lot on your plate right now with colleges and school! By the way, I live like 10 minutes from SCAD!!!! i can't believe your going to visit there!!! that's really cool. i mean, it's a little wierd but on the 20th i can be like: oh my gosh, she's in the same town as me... right now!! lol. have fun!! The story is really good!! Keep it going!! can't wait til the next chapter!!! :)
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha_SIT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 03:32 CDT
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Noooooo!!!!! I must know why! I neeeeeed to know why! *cough* -Get a grip. She said she didn't want to tell you. *Yeah, but I loooooove this fic! -Therefore you should respect the author, and honor her wishes *Do I have to? -Yes. *Hmph, fine. Alright, I'll try to understand. Whatever it is, it may (probably is) not good, so I'm sorry that whatever it is that happened, happened. I hope your visiting trip goes well. I've loved this fic, and your writing is excellent, so I trust you with it's end no matter how many chapters it does or doesn't take.
| Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 23:36 CDT
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Awww. So I guess I should've read ahead after all. Well, as I always say, stuff happens, and we have to do what's best for ourselves, not for everyone else. So are you going to cut out some of the filler stuff, or rewrite what you already have to make it shorter, or what? It's too bad that this story is going to be cut short, because I really enjoy it. I wish you the best of luck, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story.
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