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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_SIT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 00:33 CDT
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Are all men this dumb, or is it just Inuyasha. Of course Kagome loves him for him! And even if he is unsure, telling the truth would be a surefire way of finding out! Of course, I am looking at it from the perspective of one privy to the inner feelings of both parties. Good chapter, and I can't wait until the 20th!
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Title: can't wait
Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh!! I can't wait til the next chapters!! I wonder what kagome will do when she finds out the lord is inu. And what she's gonna do without him for a whole day?!? That should be interesting!!!! And what has happened to ayame and koga? Are they married yet? And is kagome's family going to ever try and look for her?!
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I loved the way you described what he felt as he was transforming. Great job on that description! I'm still curious as to how exactly Kagome found him, though. Anyway, it was a great chapter, and I enjoyed it thoroughly!!
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 09:23 CDT
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HOLA! sweeet ur giving us 2 chapters da next time....but wit da consiquence of waiting until da 20th T~T...o well it will b worth da wait ^^ please continue longer and ur really making a WONDERFUL story here. maybe one day i can also write like u ^_^
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooohhh... Kagome has the right mind to doubt Inu!!! She is pretty smart! Hehe, she noticed the resemblances... How long will it take before Inu returns to a half-demon? It IS temporary, right? Anyway, how can Inu lie like that, when he knows the prince is supposedly dead for Kagome? He can't tell that the prince is a ghost since Kags was able to hold him... Anyway, thanks for the update and I am looking forward to the 20th! Till then, anime-rocks-1010
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 12:05 CDT
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Oh wow . . .I was really not expecting that, and Kagome's getting suspicious. Can't wait to see how this turns out! It should be funny!!
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Reviewed By: me amore On: June 05, 2008 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think if was violent at all. Just graphic about what he felt. Now it seems that it has become a game of cat and mouse. Now what well happen when she goes back home and inu's not there. AND more importantly will he tell her the turth or continue his story . Also what of the Queen surly she has a up coming roll in this. So many question and yet i have not an answer. Cant wait for the next chapter. love Love
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, another amazing chapter! Hmmm so Inu wants to spend his human hours away from Kagome? Somehow at the beginning of the chapter, I was sure that you would leave us hanging with Inu drinking the potion. Man, what a cliffy that was! I have to say, I loved the part where Kagome felt Inu up. It was very clever and a true heat of the moment thing! I'm so glad that Kagome finally decided to let Inu court her. But I was kind of confused when Inu asked her to marry him again. I thought it would stop when she agreed to let him court her...because her allowing him to do so would be saying that she knows him well enough to give him a chance to get to know her more intimately and so I figured that he would take that chance and actually court her before asking her to marry him again. If that makes sense, because I think it does but I'm not sure. Anyways, it was a beautiful chapter, and I can't wait to read the next, especially with that EVIL cliffy you left us!
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally loved the latest update. It's a nice add on, the part where Kagome "felt" Inuyasha... haha... It would be nicer though if Inuyasha would just stay that way, or let Kagome know that he is the prince first before he drank the potion... Well, I hope they end up together, and not Inuyasha and the Queen!! Aww, is it really gonna end soon? waaahhh... you rock! ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome & inuyasha are courting now... who is the queen who made the potion?... will inuyasha turn human after drinking the potion... will he tell kagome the truth since they are courting again... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 18:53 CDT
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HOLA! =3 niiiice chapter! i luved it! wish i culd write like u but i dont no how T~T no fair....o well! ill learn some day! plllleeeaaase update soon! Love, Ani^.^xoxo
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Reviewed By: me amore On: May 24, 2008 08:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done,now well you go into deeper detail of what the Queens payment will be. And how kagome well react once she sees him in his humand form. Or well the posion blow up in his face. Either way I can't wait for the next chapter. Love amore
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Reviewed By: LazyArse On: May 24, 2008 01:39 CDT
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No, my name is not really LazyArse. My name is really Inuyasha_SIT, I was just too lazy to log in...^.^ The moment I started reading this chapter, and saw that Inu was worried about when to take the potion, I just knew that you would leave us there. The strange thing is that my knowing didn't make it any easier. Since I was an awful person, and didn't leave any critical reviews last time, I'll forgive you for not responding to what I did leave. ;) As for my critical eye in this chapter...there was only one thing that, for lack of a better word, bothered me. After Kagome said told Inu that she trusted him and allowed him to officially court her, I truly thought that Inu would stop asking her to marry him every night. Kagome truly showed her respect and trust for Inu. I expected him to show his respect and trust for her in return by discontinuing his nightly proposals - which would show her that he respects her enough to allow her to move at her own pace, and trusts her enough to know that when he gives her his heart, she is going to hold it delicately. When he ended up asking her I felt, I don't know...dissappointed? My immediate reaction was a slight irritation that he may not be taking her seriously. Anyway, that is just me. Every other person on the planet may find Inu to be extremely romantic in his gesture. I just thought I'd give you my perspective. As always, you produced an excellent chapter. I can't wait until the next one. Good luck with your SATs!
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 01:02 CDT
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Aw, I love this chapter! The whole painting scene was sooooo cute! I think that you should have Kagome show him the picture at some point in the future, it might be able to lead to some more fluff! Although, I don't think Inu taking that silly potion os a good idea, i sense much drama in the near future because Inu just has to have his little obsession. Well, I suppose you can't blaim him. I eagerly await your next chapter! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 17:37 CDT
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you HAD to end it there? Ah man, now I gotta wait again. you are SOOOOOOOOO mean!!!!
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