| "Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan: A Moment Lost Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Title: My drive by review lol
Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 08:33 CST
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Just stopping by to say I miss your writing and your creative wit. Pls come back to us! I drive myself mad waiting..
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Reviewed By: aznwolv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 02:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A beautiful story. You may not have created or own the characters, but you wield them with an ease that makes these characters 'your own'. Please, PLEASE continue on with the story. I am eager to see what will happen next!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 03:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
quoting you from chapter 8 with comments in brackets "Furthermore, if you don't like my writing style, simply offer advice on how I can improve!(They must nuts as I think it is easy to read(and no spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes that I can see))I thought that was the whole point of the "review" option! Or, better yet, if you "hate this story SO much" --- just stop reading it!(Yes a lot of InuYasha fans are nuts, as are Fans of other stuff (Like Harry Potter,)(Do not send hate male with a name, or pretend you are someone famous...)(Wonderful so far (re-reading it again) absolutely lovely.)
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 00:09 CDT
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I've spent the past couple days reading this fic every chance I got. I love the way you've portrayed Sesshomaru and Rin, especially the more mature, adult side of Rin. I have a fic of my own where Rin is older but I have to say I like how you wrote her much better hahaha Do you have any plans to finish this fic? I guess where it ends now COULD be an ending but everything still feels really unresolved. Considering you last posted in 2005 though I guess it's fair to say the fic is dead. That's sad for me because I truly enjoyed reading it. I'm still anxious to see what becomes of our Rin and her Sesshomaru. My only complaint about your fic is the random insertions of Japanese text. It was rather distracting to have to scroll down to read your translations at the end of each chapter and I don't think it particularly added anything to the fic. My only other complaint was your Inuyasha Kagome storyline. It was well written and all that but the way I read it, it was mostly filler and I honestly ended up scrolling past 90% of it to get back to the heart of the story. All in all though I think you've done a stellar job and I sincerely hope you update in the future. All the best! -Langus
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Oen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a little dark for my tastes, but other than that, it's a wonderful piece of work! It's a good idea to look over your fics every once and a while, and kudos to you for doing so. A lot of authors post it and leave it, and then it often looks rough and unfinished. I loved how you tossed Totosai in there. :D He's so funny! Oh, and congrats on reaching the front page! :3
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Reviewed By: devillivedlin02 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 21:52 CST
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I'm a big fan of this fiction. I have read many and by far this is the most well thought out and written story. I hope you finish it. I see you have started to re-write your beginning chapters. This is really a piece of art and to me every chapter seems like a cliff hanger. I would love it if you continued to update.Keep up the excellent work.
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Title: Keep it up!
Reviewed By: Alena [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You keep sayign you are a mediocre writer but this is one of the best fan fics I've ever read. Keep up the good work! I love this Sess/Rin fic because it keeps them in character and at the begining there is a delightful amount of angst! Please don't give up on this story.. I'm waiting with unbridled anticipation!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 16:40 CDT
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I think your writing has fairly progressed from steadily growing to seemingly great. You have such a passion and I just hope that you will finish this story. I'm jumoing up and down from the expectations of a great next chapter, like always.
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Title: update again soon!!
Reviewed By: poodow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 13:58 CDT
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I was so excited when I saw that you updated the story even if it was just revising old chapters. I hav eread this story many times and am currently reading it again in the hopes that by the time I am done you will have put out a new chapter. I love how you write. I have seen on your deviantart webpage that you said others have told you you don't know how to write! I DO NOT UNDERSTAND WHAT THEY ARE TALKING ABOUT! THEY ARE SO WRONG. I love the dynamics you show between all the characters in this story (needless to say especially sesshy and rin- so many get them wrong- ie too eager to be together) They are most definitely my favorite anime couple regardless of what other people think about the age difference. If you think about it Inuyasha is at lest 100 years old and she is only 15 what's up with that I say.... SO MUCH LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT INSTALLMENT- DON'T GIVE UP ON THE STORY- YOU WILL HAVE SO MANY DISAPPOINTED FANS I'M SURE.... Till next time
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: Sci-Jess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please let me know of your updates as well as your new website. You know there are other websites beside this one and its there lost by letting you go. My email address is jh007419@yahoo.com. or jhurdleann@msn.com. Update soon and let me know when you do. I love your writing and keep writing.
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Reviewed By: coarse dareei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 00:53 CST
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Sesshoumaru, OOC? I think the transition from a cold, distant youkai to a youkai with emotions was inevitable in your fic! I wouldn't say OOC...I'd say...his personality was gradually modified maybe? Lol. But the whole thing with Sesshoumaru's "intent. Or lack thereof" argument with Totousai was really saddening. Ugh...what is wrong with Sesshoumaru? Hehe...don't you love it when you get your readers all riled up? Well, nevertheless, I still find your fic ADDICTING. As you can tell by my reviews...I've been sitting, here, on my ass almost all day reading this story to the very latest update. Do I have a life? Not today. :D
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Title: Kohaku!
Reviewed By: coarse dareei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 22:45 CST
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Ohhhh...how cunning of you to make a cliff-hanger so evil and deceptive? Well...I admit, it was pretty awesome to just stop there and leave your readers aching for another chapter! Eeeeeeeek. I hope he doesn't return to Naraku just yet...
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Reviewed By: coarse dareei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ahhh...such a refreshingly addicting story. I love your subtle humor, it comes so unexpectedly that it makes the humor sharper. "He laughed --- not the mocking sound that usually meant some creature was about to die painfully, but a sound full of genuine humor." I found myself laughing at that because it was so true that Sesshoumaru would laugh only when he got to torture some dying creature. lol. Despite some grammatical things that everyone tends to miss from time to time, I found your story to be quite elaborate, yet easy to understand and follow. The story line is structured and each "fact" you invented for your story seemed to fit so well into the anime's story line. BEAUTIFUL!!!! I think you're underestimating yourself when you say you're an average writer. Wheeeeeee!
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: Sci-Jess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 19:48 CST
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email address is jh0007419@yahoo.com
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: Sci-Jess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 19:48 CST
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I willing to point out your typos if you send my the original work I will send it back showing you the mistakes.
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