| "Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan: A Moment Lost Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Title: Dooby Dooby Doo CHAPTER 6
Reviewed By: Inuyashas princess17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Review for chapter 6: I hope you don't mind me reveiwing each chapter but I only see it as being fair to you, oh great author, because if i had found this story sooner I would have reviewed each chapter as you posted them...does that make sense? Oh yeah I forgot to mention in the last reivew...toto dude comes...THREE EYED-COW@! THREE EYED-COW! I love the THREE EYED-COW! hehe...ok anyways sess loves rin he just doesn't know it yet or is able to handle it! Oh and I loved the history you put in this chapter, it helped explain alot and let you connect with the characters...i just wish the anime would go into detail about that! lol oh and you have seen the third movie?!?!?!?!?! I have been wanting to purchase it off ebay but I still have not recovered from buying a new car yet...I am dying to see it, I own the second movie, just have to the first too but since my sessy is in movie three buying it is on the top of my list!
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Title: Dooby Dooby Doo CHAPTER 5
Reviewed By: Inuyashas princess17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Review for chapter 5: Feeew, half way done...anyways you were right very intense chapter, my heart ached for Rin...so sad, your is only one of two fics (I have found) that has portrayed Sess handling love and his feelings on character almost to perfection, the other has so much angst I don't have hte heart to read the next chapter for I fear of what comes next lol but its still a good story. Sorry I digress, anyways great Chapter...Great Story...your doing a great job...lol...^___^
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Title: Dooby Dooby Doo CHAPTER 4
Reviewed By: Inuyashas princess17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Review for chapter 4: Hmmm I am really starting to love this story. You detail everything precisely...not too much and not too little. Great job, you have an awesome talent. Please keep writing...rin is so sweat and kind hearted I hope everything will work out for her! ^__~. Sess and Rin are truly my fave inuyaha couple. Soo cute!
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Title: Dooby Dooby Doo CHAPTER 3:
Reviewed By: Inuyashas princess17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Review for chapter 3: Usually flashbacks are annoying at least for me but...you do a great job with flashing back to the battle and keep my attention. I really like this story, great job. You know the Maven...I read one of her stories on FF.net, its great though I can't think of its title off hand. But cool on to the next chapter!
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Title: Dooby Dooby Doo CHAPTER 2
Reviewed By: Inuyashas princess17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Review for chapter two: oh man intense chapy...great job...your right lots of angst...your doing a great job with this fic please keep up the good work!
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Title: Dooby Dooby Doo CHAPTER 1
Reviewed By: Inuyashas princess17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Review for CHAPTER 1: I am a devoted Sesshou/Rin Fan...its like an addiction I swear it...This story seems promising...good first chapter, I've already read everything just going back to review about my thoughts on each chapter!
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Reviewed By: bootsnspurs On: March 19, 2004 09:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super good story! Me gusta mucho! Update soon please! bootsnspurs
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Reviewed By: amethyst-eyed23 On: March 17, 2004 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummm... your story is unique and Sesshoumaru is yet sometimes different. I like it very much!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a good chapter. can't wait until you update again. i would write more but im dead tired. update soon.
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Reviewed By: madartiste On: March 17, 2004 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Did I mention I love you? ;) You have such a nice, flowing style of writing that suits the story very well. Can't wait for more!
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Title: Ch.10
Reviewed By: sesshorin On: March 17, 2004 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, love how you write Totosai, and how he and Inuyasha talk to each other! Wonder what Sesshomaru's been doing all these months. Hope to find out soon....
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Reviewed By: Dark Phoenix On: March 17, 2004 08:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I loved the last line best. It's got that whole "immortal's pain for a long long time" ring from LOTR to it. The rest of this chapter was kinda enjoyable, slight respite from all the angst so far, but I really want the story to get movin'. I'm guessing it's the quiet before the storm, eh?
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Reviewed By: nonschool On: March 17, 2004 04:12 CST
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always looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: lynx9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOW COULD YOU DO THIS!!!!. NOW MY CURIOSITY WILL NEVER BE STAED, WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. BUT I MUST SAY I AM A VERY BIG FAN OF YOUR STORY, AND UPDATE AS FAST AS YOU CAN. :)
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Reviewed By: I On: March 14, 2004 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT
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