| "Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan: A Moment Lost Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 13:31 CDT
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I love your story. Please keep it up. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 00:56 CDT
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Oh and also your first shot at alemon back in chapter 17 or 18 was pretty damn good! I preinted that one out actually, all like a billion pages of it! Lols! I have it in my drawer some where....oh well! lols! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Moushi moushi! I'm not sure if I wrote a review for this chapter yet or not, you have so many it's hard to find andy specific one! I just wanted to let you know that your story is THE BEST Inuyasha story I have EVER read! I know that you must get that alot but it really is the truth. The ONLY inuyasha story that ties with yours is Chronicles by Sueric. She is also a very talented author. You write Sesshomaru better than any author I know of, and trust me I know quite a few! Your work purely astounds me and I thankyou up and down for writing this. Please continue when you find the time. I am so very anxcisouly waiting to find out what Sesshy will do now that everyone has left him all alone *huggles poor sesshy*. I also want to find out when Kagome is going to have her baby! That's goign to be so great! I'm sure you'll post soon, it's been about four monthes, but I wanted you to know that I'm still hanging in here waiting! I've re-read the entire thing about twice now I think, but an update would be nice if you have the time.I wish I could translate stuff, that would be so sweet! I would love to join a fansub group but unffortunatly knowledge on Japan is about all I can offer since my Japanese is limited to basic,basic,basic stuff. I am learnign though and so far it's coming along quite good! The particle and measure words are the hardest things to grasp. and putting the verbs before the nouns as well is confusing. Keep writing! Lots of encouragement, Bakayasha.
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Reviewed By: Laser Crusader On: June 01, 2005 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE. THE WAIT IS KILLING ME. I KNOW THAT YOU HAVE OTHER THINGS TO ATTEND TO, BUT COME ON!!!! IT HAS BEEN LIKE FIVE MONTHS SINCE YOU UPDATED THIS STORY!!!!!! PLEASE STOP TOTURING US AND UPDATE OKAY!!!!
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Reviewed By: ucf_cheryl On: May 28, 2005 20:32 CDT
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(AKA momcitrus-too lazy to sign in.) Incredibly FUN and well-written- I really enjoy OU stories, and this one in particular since you've gone to such lengths to make their "world" come to life. I also enjoy the Japanese you've inserted, but may I make a suggestion? Normally, if this was a printed book, it would be an easy thing to cast my eyes down to the footnotes at the bottom of the page to get the translation. However, since I am forced to scroll down to see them (and hence lose my place), and yet I do enjoy them so much, how about if you broke with tradition and inserted the tranlation in parantheses right after or below the passage? Oh and by the way, I'm writing this after chapter 16: I think the chap. was CUTE, not sappy, and the song you had Rin singing was PERFECT, as well as very IC. Thank you for sharing- this is a rare delight.
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uugh. life sux! please update soon. i've been waiting and i know you've started a new project, but i just got a speeding ticket and an update would make me sooo happy. i just want to hit something/someone. any volunteers? j/k.
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Reviewed By: Laser Crusader On: April 18, 2005 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a beyond amazing fanfiction. This story is truly amazing. It keeps getting better and better. Please update as soon as possible because this story just needs to keep going and going. It is a true masterpiece. You have gotten me completly hooked on this story. So I wish you good luck on your writing.
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Reviewed By: euphoricbliss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic!! it's so angstsy and heartwretching~ which is why you need to UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Jedifool On: April 08, 2005 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
been reading this fic for a long time. one of the best inuyasha, if not the best i read so far. keep up the good work. PLS UPDATE quick.
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Title: Why?
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why didn't you finish? I must know what happens, if I have to drag you to a computer to do it I swear I will... Please please PLEASE finish this fic.
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Title: meep
Reviewed By: Elena374 On: March 29, 2005 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far! Please tell me you will update soon! Please please dont leave it hanging like this, the situation is too tense. Keep it up! For our sakes ;)
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Title: Ninja in the Night
Reviewed By: Sensei Sunny On: March 26, 2005 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic and I am desperately awaiting the next update. I was overjoyed to see a Sess/Rin pairing, especially one that was so well written. Everyone pairs Sessy with another demon and it drives me crazy because it is obvious how much he cares for Rin. The story is getting so exciting and angsty! Your writing is so professional, I was surprised to see that you only had two fanfics under your name. I was looking for other stories to live off of while I waited for the rest of this story. :-P You mention a translating project on your profile- are you translating this fanfic into another language? Well, thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to bring this fantasy to life and I hope to see more soon. *fingers crossed*
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Title: Waiting Paitently For the Next Chapter
Reviewed By: Ebony_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! WICKED ONI! WHERE ARE YOU?! You can't leave us for another six monthz with such an evil cliff-hanger! YOU CAN'T! I am going crazy here! If you don't finish this story soon . . . I'm going to be extremely disappointed!
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 03:45 CST
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My dear, dear writer. . . I hate to sound whiny, but I can't wait for you to update. . . I just recently discovered your story and I am so terribly loving every moment of it! It is beautiful. . . you are not a writer? ! I beg to differ my dear! Thank you for sharing this wonderful masterpiece!
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Title: cH 1
Reviewed By: fluffygal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oKAY i'M REVIEWING FOR CHAPPIE ONE! WOW THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!
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