| "Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan: A Moment Lost Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: ManonLeChat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're back, you're back! Wicked-oni, I'm so happy to see you posting updates again and I am genuinely concerned and sympathetic about the loss you've suffered recently in life. Please let me know if I may of help in any way whatsoever (editing, anything). I'll comment on the chapter in another review, but for now let me express my joy on how great it is to read your writing once more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: DPM On: September 19, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good grief. Don't feel the need to edit. It's perfect. I am so glad you've returned. Hope things are working out for you on the personal front. This work is so edgy. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Sess is such a tough and unwielding character. I think he is more inscrutable rather than stoic. There is a definite difference and you've nailed it. I love the transformation of his dress code to entire black !!! how befitting to render this imagery of a person as dark as his thoughts or so he'd like convince the world. I can imagine him pulling his hair mentally when dealing with the headache of Rin. And by the way, congrats to you for making Rin so resilient. Girl power !!! He deserves the anxiety of her leaving him (at least for a short stint so that she can get away from that emotional sphere and try to give them both some breathing room). This story is one of my favorites.
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 14:48 CDT
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This was an awesome chapter and I really liked learning more about the characters than just their outside apperances. I'm just nervous for them all (especially for Rin and Sesshoumaru). Keep up the good work! (Even though you said it still needed work, I thought it was excellent.) XDD
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 09:16 CDT
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Yah!!! I was gonna skip school today because I felt so lousy, but now I have a reason to live! You've made my year!!1 Please post again before my B-day!!!! Yah!!!!! I haven't read it yet because it's so long, but It's being printed as I type!!lols!!! Hope you feel better and everything cause I knpw you were having some family trouble.
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Title: Hoots and Hollers
Reviewed By: conchita [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see you posted again and I hope everything works out for you. Thanks for continuing with this great story!
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Title: Sob Sob Sob
Reviewed By: la_reveur [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 00:56 CDT
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Ahhhh, I'm so happy you're back. Now there's finally something to look forward to in my life from this day onwards. Ha ha... Sesshoumaru's so mean. You mustn't be too kind on him. ok?
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Reviewed By: FuyuKuri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 00:12 CDT
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Oh my god... You came back! O_O *grins to self, secretly hoping her email had something to do with it. ^___^;;* Just kidding. lol. Either way, I'm so happy to see you back, and hope against hope life will begin to treat you much better. You haven't strayed at all from the story line! Imagine that! *glomps her laptop and molests your fic* ^.^ Mmmm... author-y... my fave.
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Reviewed By: Genie3 On: September 18, 2005 23:53 CDT
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I think this story is marvelous. I read it all the way from the beginning to your January chapter and then waited for this most recent chapter. You didn't have many errors here and I'm sure the people who read the current chapter will appreciate that you decided to forego editing in lieu of posting. You are a very creative and well-spoken (written?) writer. Thank you!
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Title: At Last!
Reviewed By: karenebl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad to see this update. The bits with Inuyasha and Kagome in the present day were sweet, sad and scary at the same time. I am curious as to how you plan to resolve the issue with Rin and Sesshoumaru. I hope your life improves and it sounds like that is likely. Karen in CT
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Reviewed By: S.I. On: September 13, 2005 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fiction so much... please UPDATE!! I sware... if you do, I will have every single person I know reading this!!
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Reviewed By: Akita (Kitt) On: September 12, 2005 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo! It took me two full nights to read all twenty-two chapters, but boyo was it worth it! Wow! Great read, even with the occasional foray into Poetic license. I do love your version of Rin even if she does make me insanly jealous. *Glomps Sesshomaru, giggling wildly.* Mine, all mine! You have some real talent and you'd better not torment us too long. (Oh, do stop giggling like a YAOI-obssessed fangirl as you type. The drool on the keyboard is bad enough, mind you, but this insane laughter...){Shut up, Subu-chan, I'm having Sesshomaru-happies! Don't mind Subu-chan, he/she's just jealous!}(I am not jealous, Baka, I just have better things to do than fight with you all night. Besides, don't you have a new Inuyasha movie to watch?){*EEEP*}(That should keep her out of my hair for the rest of the night. Good work, from the sane personality. The Baka Has left the building! *Mwahahaha*){Stop plotting against me, Subu-chan! Don't think I don't know what you're doing!}(Movie? Sesshomaru?){*EEEEP!!*}
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Reviewed By: Akita (Kitt) On: September 12, 2005 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo! It took me two full nights to read all twenty-two chapters, but boyo was it worth it! Wow! Great read, even with the occasional foray into Poetic license. I do love your version of Rin even if she does make me insanly jealous. *Glomps Sesshomaru, giggling wildly.* Mine, all mine! You have some real talent and you'd better not torment us too long. (Oh, do stop giggling like a YAOI-obssessed fangirl as you type. The drool on the keyboard is bad enough, mind you, but this insane laughter...){Shut up, Subu-chan, I'm having Sesshomaru-happies! Don't mind Subu-chan, he/she's just jealous!}(I am not jealous, Baka, I just have better things to do than fight with you all night. Besides, don't you have a new Inuyasha movie to watch?){*EEEP*}(That should keep her out of my hair for the rest of the night. Good work, from the sane personality. The Baka Has left the building! *Mwahahaha*){Stop plotting against me, Subu-chan! Don't think I don't know what you're doing!}(Movie? Sesshomaru?){*EEEEP!!*}
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Title: Very good!!
Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 06:49 CDT
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You are practically teaching me Japanese, I reviewed on ff.net too but I just wanted to tell you twice how incredibly awesome your story is. It's true stop blushing! lol. Sayanara
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Reviewed By: Laser Crusader On: August 30, 2005 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't tell me you have given up on this story because that would really piss off all of your loyal fans. I mean you alread have 224 reviews from your fans. That has to tell you that you work is appreciated. Do you get your jollys by making us wait? Please Please and Please Give some more chapters. You already had more than enough time to write some more chapters.
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 00:55 CDT
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*Groan* Must...read....Sesshy/Rin fic....can't ...die...now...must...keep...going for...fans. *colapses*
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