| "Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan: A Moment Lost Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: lynx9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
No how could you!!!!. Evil child why can't you just write the rest. Why do you taunt me soo much??!!!!WAhhhhhhhhhhh. Well I guess i can't really talk considering I haven't updated in ove three months. I relly suck. Now I feel bad. *cry* all of you must hate me. *sniff* hey I should be mad at you. Oh you story is awesome.
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 06, 2004 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
100+ 1 review! Yeah! And with this latest chapter, you more than deserve it. This chapter was intensely moving, and the remarkable way in which you deal with Sesshoumaru's demonic nature and longevity and POV is superb. I like the fact Rin's spirit is not broken. Thanks for writing and the acknowledgement! Your work is awesome!
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Title: Sweet...
Reviewed By: Kagura_Yasha_Offline On: May 05, 2004 22:50 CDT
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Whee! Such adorability...I love it all.
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Title: great stuff
Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: May 05, 2004 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesomeness! love how they slept in the same bed soo cute! is there any fanart for this fic? anyways great stuff!!
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Title: Thank you for giving me a shoutout!
Reviewed By: RayJayiscrazy(nsn. Too lazy) On: May 05, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel special! I was in your story and I HOPE there is coming affection. I'm sure you'll do a great job with it so KEEP UPDATING! I read your story when I'm hustling around from Track to my house to band practices and such so It's good for entertainment!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your latest chatper! it is soo sweet. in a way sess is admitting his feelings for rin. lets hope things will go weel for the couple. and lets hope there will be more fluff along the way. ;o]
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 02:19 CDT
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this is a damn kick fanfic please update soon please this is so freak'n awesome
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 04, 2004 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you get 100 reviews! A good story like this should! This lastest chapter was an excellent premise for what is to come. I am lookign forward to more. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 04:05 CDT
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this is a great story please update soon
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Reviewed By: Shaid On: May 02, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really impressed with this! Your writing style is wonderful! Not to mention your knowledge of Japanese language. This is so great! I hope to read more of it in the future!
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Title: Thank you for updating!
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 12:53 CDT
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I hope there's some upcoming affection... Hint hint... lol. Great chapter. Yes, I believe Sesshomaru is very vain about the way he looks... lol... she should have taken him down a notch in manly pride... just kiddin. Keep writing! I'm excited!
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Title: YAH!
Reviewed By: Ldypebsaby [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. The depth of the situation and the raw emotions going on. This is one of the best chapters I have read ever. I just loved it sooo much! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow they're re-united! i love how hes starting to realize his feelings--and the whole father thing was genius! great stuff. update soon!
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 13:15 CDT
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Yay!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: dog_taiyoukai#1 On: April 30, 2004 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw virtually nothing wrong with this fanfic, all of it was good. make sess and rin go back together again... i'm dying with anticipation here. This is possibly one of the best written fanfics I've seen! update soon!
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