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| "Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan: A Moment Lost Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] | | Pages (18): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 › » ] | Reviewed By: Uriko Ohgami On: August 16, 2004 19:03 CDT
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Gasp! The author, she spoke to me! I've surely been blessed by the Gods! *faints* Hehe, all right now, seriously, I hope I didn't embarass you with the flattery, though you truly deserve every bit of it. ^_^ As for what happened in episode 162, Rin didn't get kidnapped. She got lured away by a demon that hypnotized children with his flute. She and the others were saved by this group of monks that specialized in killing demons, and then they tried to take her back to the village. Rin didn't want to go, and said that she was waiting for Sesshoumaru to save her. When he showed up, the monks tried to kill him, but he knocked them all out by briefly transforming to his demon form. When the smoke cleared, Sesshoumaru told Rin to do what she wanted, and she smiled and started following him again. The head monk pulled her arm and tried to tell her that living with a demon wasn't right because they were in a different world from humans, but Rin didn't listen to him. Near the end of the episode, she crouched by a grave and shyly asked Sesshoumaru not to forget her when she would die later on, and he looked stunned for a moment. (Sesshoumaru showing emotion? OMG! :P) But then he recovered and replied, "Don't be foolish." The episode ends with the three of them going off on the intent of killing Naraku. I hope this answers your questions, but if you would like more details, then feel free to e-mail me at Tiger5913@juno.com okay? Well, until your next update! Toodles!
| Reviewed By: New Fan On: August 16, 2004 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOoooh Wicked, your pen name precieve you. I love this chapter, but I can understand why Rin did not go postal on Sessy (she being human and all). First, I want to say that I loved how Kouga kids just won't leave Inuyasha alone. I think the pup that picks his nose and wipes it on Inuyasha was extremely funny. LOL!! I think making Kikyo the barer of bad news to inform Rin was a excellent choice. I think that hurricane Charlie just made direct land fall on poor Rin or should I say hurricane Kikyo.I think that you have capture what you wanted in this chapter. Now Rin want to go home. "WHAT HOME"!! Rin and his compainions just left Sess. Will they go to Totosai? I hope so, or will she reach Totosai in time before Kahaku reaches them? Now, how will Sess function without his companions(at this point I do not care, I hope he suffers). Will he still focus on finding his brother? I really hope so, so that Inuyasha and the other would figures out why Rin and his faithful companions are no longer by his side. He deserved it and more. I also hope that in the next chapter they will figure out Naraku's plans not toward Inuyasha's group and Kouga but the real purpose of Naraku for Rin. Great chapter and I hope that you will enjoy the water and come back with another awesome chapter. To answere your question it really was an heart jerker. Last question, will we soon see the full extent of Rin's power. Everyone tells Rin some indrect way she is powerless I hope that very soon she will prove e | Reviewed By: Uriko Ohgami On: August 14, 2004 12:23 CDT
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Oh please, OOC? Are you kidding me? You've kept everyone in character, even Sess! I'm truly impressed and in awe of your work here. I'm only disappointed that you didn't detail their second lovemaking. :P Damn, chapter 17 was great. My eyes were swirling at the end of the read, and to be honest, I read that chapter first before I had read the rest of the story. ^^0 Best damn lemon I have ever read, and I've read many, many before, so that's no small feat, honey. Everything just fit together so beautifully... ^_^ I'm a little mad at Sess, though, for not telling Rin about his intentions. I hope he changes his mind! I'm sure Rin wants children, being the gracious and kind-hearted, loving woman that she is. Anyhoo, please update this soon, and if you can muster up the inspiration, more lemon! ^_^ I'd love to see how Sess gets rough with Rin. *evil grin*
| Title: How many times must I give you a 10!!! ^_-
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 19:05 CDT
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I don't think Sess was OOC. He wants what he wants, and he wants it, now, regardless of what others may think. Tessaiga being a prime example. His father didn't want him to have it. Myoga didn't want him to have it, and Totosai certainly didn't want him to have it. And what did he do when he, literally, got his hand on the demon blade? He did what he does best--show off. Kaze no kizu for everyone! lol It's like he was saying, "See what I can do with the sword everyone says I shouldn't have?" And the same goes for Rin [insert licentious grin here]. Despite his age, I've always believed Sess is just a spoiled kid too used to getting his own way to earnestly consider someone else's POV. As always, fabulous job on giving so much life to our favorite manga/anime characters. And THANKS for over the top review ^__^
| Title: UPDATE! UPDATE!
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy (nli) On: August 05, 2004 08:18 CDT
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*dances the happy dance* You updated! HUZZAH! Sorry, I was just watching Pirates of the Carribbean... Tee hee ;) I hope your story can stay up on FF.net. I think their standards are a little too strict. They took my other favorite story, OGAM, off too... Where are all the awesome stories going? GAH! I'm so confused! Oh well! Update soon! luv RayJay
| Reviewed By: nonschool On: August 05, 2004 05:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah 10 borderline 11 for this fic.Loved reading the "fight" scenes.You still keep Sesshoumaru IC which is great- he's a deamon lord who happens to love a human and he's comming to grips with that,but not well- congrats on your win esp. for a first timer and of course update at will!!
| Title: not true!
Reviewed By: asiancherries on vacation On: August 04, 2004 15:25 CDT
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you said that Sesshomaru was OOC, and i dissagree. i think you have been very faithful to the ins and outs of his character as portrayed in the anime and manga. he's stony, and cold, and ruthless, but he DOES have a sense of humor (albeit very dry and most often at the misfortune of others) and he DOES have a sense of devotion and decency (he revived Jaken--that says it all). and i pondered over it and i do believe that despite the fact that he was in demon-luvin' mode, he would concede to Rin's request for him to stop because he is a nobleman on top of being a demon. he is just as mixed in nature as Inuyasha--a raging youkai nature at war with a dignified "human" nature with a distate for barbarian tactics. all in all, he is a very fun character to sit and think about, and i think you've captured him and all of his quirks quite beautifully.
| Reviewed By: antisocial mint ( ) On: August 04, 2004 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so i guess now poor kohaku is once again the slave of naraku =( i can't believe sess didn't mark her as his mate! its just not right! he should feel really guilty! what about jaken? shouldn't he know that sess wouldn't mark her and tell her before she thinks that he actually did? Will inuyasha be the one to tell her or will shippou!? i hope sess feels REALLY REALLY bad for doing that to rin, but i LOVED how totosai and him fought! totsai's jabs at the demon lord were very funny. I love how much totosai cares for Rin too, you made their relationship so...!!! (can't find the words to describe it its just too well written!!) i am kinda amazed that Rin didn't hear what they were yelling about though. anyways GREAT stuff as always, and i hope you update soon! and i agree with New Fan, this is a 15+ story!
| Title: Yes, It's he stupid author!
Reviewed By: WICKED-ONI On: August 04, 2004 00:47 CDT
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Sorry, guys...I know, I know! I forgot to include the most important vocab word in the whole stupid chapter! TAYU = courtesan, or concubine! Yep, you were right New Fan! I'll try to update soon. The next chapter has one of the scenes I've been most looking forward to, so I'll try to hurry! Any other questions, feel free to e-mail wickedonichan@yahoo.com. Wow - I thought everyone would hate that chapter...Sess was a bit tempermental! (But that's the fun part I guess!
| Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 20:44 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
| Reviewed By: New Fan On: August 03, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that a rating of ten is to small for this fic I would give a 15+. I read some good Rin/Sess fics in my short time reading fanfics, but this one is the best I ever read. I think that you are capturing Sess character perfectly. I just wanted you to know that. Second, what is 'tayu'? If this word means what i think it means. Sess did not 'mate' with Rin, but made her his concubine??!! If that is the case I can see why Rin will have a very LOW opinion of him. What will Kahaku do once he finds Rin. Will he find her when she at her lowest point in her life (when she finds out Sess true intentions). Will Rin go with Kahaku willingly?? Girlfriend update as soon as this weekend becasue this inquiring mind wants to know?? Awesome story do not let me down. You have not yet and I doubt you will. ^_^ If you can email or if you can put me on an email list so that you can email me when you are ready to update. Every week I look for your story to see if you had update this awesome story. Here is my email address if you are interested jhurdleann@msn.com Update sooooooooooooon!!!!!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: antisocial mint ( ) On: July 27, 2004 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh! is it gonna be sess!? is he gonna save kohaku?! update soon! PLEASE! btw loved the scene with kouga's kids attacking inuyasha! "BITE harder!!" LOL! keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 22:00 CDT
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OMG OMG this can't be good anyway this is a great fanfic please update soon
| Reviewed By: New Fan On: July 25, 2004 19:34 CDT
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I hope that we can see some honeymoon blist before all hell break lose for everyone. When will Kagome will have the pup? I hope that she will not have the pup during battle? That will not be good.Update soon.
| Title: WAHOO
Reviewed By: Rayjayiscrazy (nli) On: July 25, 2004 09:09 CDT
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Good job on your second place! I voted for you! ;) Thank you so much for the update! This is such a great story and I want more! YAY! Until your next update... I'm waiting *sits down with a smile on her face and waits patiently*
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