| "Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan: A Moment Lost Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the Maven did suggest this story, and since I am so fond of her work, I had to read yours. I am really enjoying this story very much and I regret that I'm left hanging at this point. You are doing an excellent job with the characters in the canon universe.
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Title: Good story!
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 20:27 CDT
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This is really original! AH! MAKE SESS AND RIN COME BACK TO EACHOTHER! It's so angsty! EEP! How long are you going to have them longing for eachother? I can't take it! I luv it though! It's great!
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Reviewed By: animegirl007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story....it's has the twist and turn in the plot that makes it worth reading.....UPDATE SOON ...I NEED MORE
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Reviewed By: nonschool On: April 23, 2004 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
reading the last couple of chapters and loved the action in 15 and the emotional rollercoster Sesshoumaru is on without Rin,'cause without Rin he has the stability of a three legged table.
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Reviewed By: madartiste On: April 22, 2004 17:31 CDT
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Oh! How terrible you are with that cliffhanger! This is definitely the best chapter yet. It was quite clean and nicely paced. The length is good too. Oh, I can hardly wait for more!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: April 21, 2004 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats so sad, i'm crying rite now, :) he couldn't kill her, he should take her as his mate. if he doesn't hes a jerk and rin should marry shippo!! hehe i like that pairing! anyways its such a great story! i love it please write the next chapter soon!!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: April 21, 2004 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You end it here. How could you. Please update this story sooooooooon. What happen to Kanna and Kagura. When will they as well as Naraku show up to inform Sess they know Rin's secret. Update sssoooooonnnn!
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Title: Ch.16
Reviewed By: sesshorin On: April 21, 2004 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! They meet again face to face at last! I love it. Great chapter! Nothing for me to nitpick. I said this before, but I just love how you write Totosai and the way he talks to Sesshomaru and Inuyasha! I'm really looking forward to your next update....
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Reviewed By: theMaven (not signed in) On: April 21, 2004 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another great chapter :D You've got such a good grasp on the characters' underlying personalities. You've also managed to combine all the best ideas from the fanfics out there and pulled it into one cohesive, coherent and highly-entertaining ball . . . So is the next chapter gonna be like that Peaches and Herb song? "Reunited and it feels so good."
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Reviewed By: theMaven (not signed in) On: April 20, 2004 22:40 CDT
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Good action chapter :D
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Reviewed By: Sacred Flame On: April 18, 2004 14:30 CDT
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Oh, by the way, that was chapter one n-n;;
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Reviewed By: Sacred Flame On: April 18, 2004 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good, but I really wanted to smack Sesshy >< DAMN YOU FLUFFY! Anyways, great story ^n_n^
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Reviewed By: Nema On: April 15, 2004 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn... That's all I can really say about this story. Even after 15 chapters you've managed to keep things fresh and exciting. Sesshoumaru in particular is one bad ass character, especially during chap 15. Although, it makes me worry a little about Rin's fate and whether things are going to end happily. Anyways, this is a really great story and I'm looking forward to seeing how it ends.
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Title: Dooby Dooby Doo CHAPTER 15
Reviewed By: Inuyashas princess17 (like the other times On: April 14, 2004 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh Heh Heh...last review I said it was for chapter 17...opps I meant chapter 14 but oh well. Anyways...this was a really really intense chapter...I LOVED IT!! Sesshoumaru was his great evil self...well maybe not evil...um determined...yes his great DETERMINED self. Oh and he is wondering what he did to Rin...I hope the bastard is guilty..lol...EEEE i can't wait till they come face to face...they have been apart far too long...Sess/Rin! Sess/Rin! I know I have to be patient but its SOOOO hard! Ok well I can't wait till you update again..hopefully then I will be able to review on time...lol. ~Inuyashas princess17
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Title: Dooby Dooby Doo CHAPTER 17
Reviewed By: Inuyashas princess17 (too lazy...what's new?) On: April 14, 2004 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin left...Sess has just realized she not with Inu...oh man this is getting GOOD!!! I am sitting on the edge of my seat here..dying!?!?!? EeEeEe I want more more more...wait I still have one more chappy to catch up on....YES!!!!!! ~Inuyashas princess17
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