| "Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan: A Moment Lost Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shey On: January 23, 2005 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this chapter!! please update it took a really long time to get this chapter up, i know i know you have to write the next chapter but still its so good update!
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not signed in) On: January 18, 2005 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't write a review to give your story the justice it deserves...keep going please
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so happy that you finally posted after all these monthes!! Please don't ever leave me hanging like that again! I feared for the worst after the first two monthes. I thought you'd forgotten all about us! You write Sesshomaru better than anybody I have ever read! You honestly have a gift for it. I was so happy when I read that I finally had an update from you that I cried. I was so happy I just couldn't find enough ways to express myself. My mom thought I had broken something and yelled to see if I was alright!! I have read your entire story four times through waiting for you to update!!! Thank you so so so very much! You have no idea how happy reading your fiction makes me! You use the most descriptive, flowing writing I've ever read and the way you write Sesshomaru is, as I said before, unbelievable. All your characters are done perfectly and not a day goes by after reading your posts that I don't cringe in agony because I just can't wait to read what's going to happen next! I know it sounds like I take this kind of stuff to seriously but it really is true.Reading fanfictions IS MY LIFE! I am such a big Sesshomaru fan. My compassion for him is incomprehensible even to me! This chapter was so good! I have been wishing that Rin would let him have it! I think her blowing up on him was exactly what he needed because truthfully, I don't think anybody has ever stood up to him or told him he was wrong hence his air of superiority and supremacy.keep it up! ~Bakayasha~
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Title: You're back!
Reviewed By: Rayjayiscrazy (nsn)* On: January 17, 2005 12:16 CST
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Hey! Nice to see an update :) I'm going to go read it now. How have you been? I read in your profile on Ff.net that you were involved with a translating program. How did that go? luv, RayJay
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Reviewed By: Avan On: January 16, 2005 03:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is soo beautiful yet so amazingly angsty and sad, so full of emotion. I had been waiting for this chapter for soo long and after reading it, I can only say one thing, each day I look hopefully on Fanfiction net for this chapter to come out, has not been wasted, the long waiting time has been rewarded by a wonderful reading experience. There is just one small thing I found a little bit frustrating though, it seems that you deliberatedly used great lenght of the chapter to dwell on Sesshoumaru's tragic past, while I was just looking forward to read about sesshoumaru/rin's affairs. I know you can't give everything out in one chapter, but you are torturing me!!! Well, lets just forget the previous paragraph, the fanfic and plot has enthralled me. Please update sooner, I am so dying to read it!!!!
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Title: yay! you're back!! =)
Reviewed By: karye On: January 15, 2005 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YESYESYESYES!!!!!!!I'm so glad you started on this story again!!! i ADORE this story, but i was afraid that you decided to stop writing on it.... *phew* and i'm really anxious to find out how this is all gonna end......*starts squealing* but poor rin. you said i would either like this chapter or hate it, but for me, that all depends of the ending ^.^ if i could i'd give you a 1,000,000/10 for all the ratings! keep up the SUPER DUPER WRITING AND WORK!!
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Title: Jess
Reviewed By: New Fan On: January 15, 2005 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You keep amazing me with your writing. I love this chapter. Poor Rin-chan. How will she overcome this great betrayal? Sesshoumaru is not listen to Rin. That is why she throw away his precious gift to her. Rin is trying to give him a chance but he is not getting it. I can not wait for the next chapter and THANK YOU for dedicating this chapter to me. YOu are awesome.
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 15:36 CST
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this chapter was so freakin' awesome!!! i'm sorry for the reasons it took this long to update and if you take another handful of months to update i won't mind. this story is just too good to care when an update will be...since i'll be talking about it for that long and telling my friends to read it! it has so much emotion and pain which kept me on the edge of my seat. i don't know if this was the greatest review i could have left, but like i said, your chapter blew me away. i wonder what's going to happen now... i'm very interested on how sesshoumaru is going to work through this one. OH! i loved the dream/flashback scene!! very awesome chapter to a very awesome story. take as long as you need to bring us more lovely chapters as these. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Tainted InuShemeeko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, this chapter was amazing. I was wonderful to read, the emotion that was in it was beautiful as was every single word. Great work keep it up. Ja ne! Tainted InuShemeeko
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: January 15, 2005 14:00 CST
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omgOMG i've wating but benn worth the wait this geat please update
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Title: Long time no see :)
Reviewed By: theMaven (not logged in) On: January 15, 2005 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was GREAT!!! Well worth the long wait, lol. I'm sorry to hear about your troubles. Some people can be real sphincters, but Jess does indeed rock :) I'm glad she got you out of your disillusionment and on with the wonderful writing. There aren't words enough to convey how happy I was to read this chapter. The battle scenes were super, your characterization abilities are astounding, and everything flows together so smoothly. Kudos on yet another job well done!
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Title: Well, Yay!
Reviewed By: Karen in CT On: January 15, 2005 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray! I'm very glad to see this new chapter. I'm sure in your down time you spent a lot of time thinking about this story. It is so carefully crafted. There are no wasted words; everything is purposeful. The story line is engaging, characters compelling. It is my hope that Sesshoumarou will work through to his better self. Please keep writing. Karen in CT
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Title: WAHHHHHH!!!!!
Reviewed By: lynx9 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You want to kill me don't you!!!!! WAHHHHHHHH I am sooooooo sad. How doare you not give me anything to read for the school year. Do you know how hard it is to be here and have nothing to do but learn? I resent the fact that you get to be older than me. and yes I know that I'm whining but I don't care. I wanna knoow what happens to rin. Hopefully this isn't the fault of my computer. Write on. Merry YuleTide !!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadiyaray On: December 07, 2004 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good Rin/ Sess fic. I love angst! Poor Rin, finding out that she will only be just a sex toy. I hope she learns to master the naginata and gets to kick some major butt!
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Reviewed By: Ellie On: October 21, 2004 16:49 CDT
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AWESOME STORY!!!! ;) Lovely handling of the relationship between Sesshomaru and Rin. Plus, original characters = very cool.
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