| "It's my Life" Reviews/Comments [ 584 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 00:45 PDT
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i really like sesshomaru's youki. it is so funny at times. especailly when his youki wouldn't let him have his way with that female inu. i guess he should have heaved his youki's threat when he said he would make him pay for leaving inuyasha when he was child. anyway, why not send inuyasha to totosai. he might find myouga there since that's where the flea usually be hiding out? if myouga isn't there maybe totosai will be able tell him exactly what is going on with him and the rapid growth spurt he is going through. anyway, i do so enjoy this story and can't wait until the next update.
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Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 23:04 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i like it when sess argues with himself... he's bound to lose *grins* and you make inu sound so self-sufficient, something i totally approve of... ... looking forward to the next encounter youki to youki, so to speak =)
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Reviewed By: hyperactive pup On: April 23, 2007 20:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was awsome the story is really developing well. .sigh. so much drama. Personally I hate Kagome and think that practically everyone in Inuyasha's group is stupid and should be punished for being ignorant of Inuyasha's pain. But you expressed everthing perfectly. Good Job. And Update OFTEN!!! pretty please.
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Reviewed By: Princess Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 23:08 PDT
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wow what a violent bloody battle but i just loved it. i especially loved the way how they so conveinently lost their clothing during that intense battle. i have to say when you changed back to inuyasha so called friends. i nearly screamed in frustration but was glad the scene with them was short. kagome is such an idiot wondering why inuyasha did what he did. i beat koga's has definitedly changed his mind about wanting her as his mate. i know i wouldn't want her after that display. i had a feeling miroku wouldn't have use the wind tunnel. but i would think sango would have agreed with miroku being that she is a demon slayer, she should know that no demon in their right mind will want to be on a leash. and it seems she wanted to keep him on that leash. i never would have picture sango being so cruel. anyway, i am so waiting for the next update. i hope its soon because i am dying to see what will happen next with inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 11:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
did you know that i am IN LOVE with your new chapter....i mean i uderstand why you used the accidental sex thing....it ROCKED all the same throught i hope now that they are partically mated they come to understand each other better...i know that the 'lady of the south'is a threat that doesn't change the fact i hope they work together and beat the hell outta that BITCH....even if their only this close because her plan back fired.....hmm i wonder what'll happen when the normal sess finds out what his yuki did....and the gangs reaction when they find out inu-chan is soon be sess's mate......PLEASE UPDATE SOON i wanna know what happens next.......oh yeah one more thing i love the way inu-chan ran when it was over.....still a pup obviously....and sess comment about enjoying the after glow
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Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 17:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was great. I like the fighting totally H-O-T HOT!lol . But I couldn't help but laugh. I'm sorry My dick fell in you! LOL it felt ssssoooooooo good that I couldn't get it out. LOL man wiping the tears from my eyes thats going to be a classic I tell ya! MMmMMMmm Can wait to read what Sesshomaru is going to do to get his mate. What will inuyasha do? Kagome is such an idiot koga can have her. She still hasn't learn her lesson mayby a good put down from sessie or kikyou that would be fun. Really Kagome is no better than kikyou she wrost and perhaps someone should point that out. I know that shippo is going to have a good part,is he going to leave the others to live with Inyasha. Awweee so many questions.what the hell is wrong with sango Inuyahsa does everything for all of them and they act like this? there making the rest of us female look bad. oh well I never really like her anyway. at least the monk has better scene. well you know the old saying UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: April 17, 2007 16:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This new chapter was kick ass extreme. I loves it good. The fight scene was so awesome I was on the edge of my seat. Then one of the most awesome sex scenes I've ever seen and on your first try. I bow to your excellence. This story is so freaking great. Thanks so much for updating I hope to see more soon. Best wishes and good waves.
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Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 15:40 PDT
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Cool story I like it! Although are a few grammatical and spelling erros that's okay no ones perfect. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: toaist_boy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 14:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your woerk, it's so new and enthralling to read! keep it up! :)
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Reviewed By: szaugg laughs On: April 17, 2007 08:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea, another chapter! I really enjoyed it. I thought the use of the bold script for when the youkai sessh or inu talk works very well and didn't seem OOC because the reader knew they were the youkai parts. One part was a bit difficult for a minute was whether they were talking out loud or thinking to each other, but that may be because I haven't read the previous chapter in a while and maybe it mentioned the mind to mind aspect more? The accidental sex was pretty funny. And no...it wasn't gross. I think all yaoi fans like things a little perverted, heh, so I thought it was just fine! I enjoyed sesshoumaru's attempt to make the mark vs. trying not to lose him mind at the sex. It added to the whole scene in a lovely, humorous way. And being the miroku fan I am, I love the fact that touching the beads was a nervous habit rather than distrusting inuyasha. Can't wait for kagome's comeuppance...and yea for Kouga's disillusionment over her character. She's a bit bitchy in the story, but not so much that it doesn't work. It still feels within the bounds of how her character could be read, ya know? Okay, that's all I got space to write, I think! I can't wait for the rest!
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Reviewed By: Gaara429 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 01:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG for your first sex scene it was very HOT i loved it!!
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Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 01:04 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm. a little nice scene. yes, surprise, surprise - inu tops. but snow intended inu to be seme, as prophesied... although it happened accidentally, it was supposed to happen somehow. yours on the other hand, was to shock both sess and inu. interestingly parlayed into a mating. your mating/bonding is apparently more complex than others... and rituals fascinate me.
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: April 16, 2007 09:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so freaking awesome. I loves it good. Damn that demon bitch and damn kagome. I hope Inu doesn't do anything too stupid but Sesshoumaru needs some sense beat into him. Thanks for posting hope to see more soon. Best wishes and good waves.
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 15:05 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU TELL HIM INU...YOU ARE MORE IMPORTANT...YOU'RE HIS MATE FOR GOD'S SAKE!!!!! DON'T WORRY ONCE SESSH REALIZES THE ERROR OF HIS WAYS (OR YOU'RE STOLEN AWAY FROM HIM, WHICHEVER COMES FIRST) ALL WILL BE WELL!!!! GREAT CHAPTER!!!!! CAN'T WAIT TIL THE NEXT ONE!!
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Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 23:55 PDT
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something wicked this way comes - reminds me of ray bradbury, the sci-fi classic writer. no official pairing? darn. i thought this was a sessxinu story... it sure looked that way til you had kouga come in - then i got confused, but then you had inu back off. i was pretty sure it wasnt kagome because you indicated yaoi, so... anyway. i thought all this were just hardships for sess to get over since he was SO bad to inu when they were younger. but damn. i really thought this was an sessxinu story... which is why i was reading it. and trying so hard to keep right on reading it. if it isnt, will you let me know so i wont be expecting it anymore? depends on who the pairing will be. whilst i can read some inuxkouga, i dont read them with the same ... shall we say, dedication. i think you've changed styles, yes. or at least a change in pacing. i've currently been reading just for fun, not really with an eye to review, except to say what i like and not like..... so i cant pinpoint specifics, just a general feel.
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