| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] |
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Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2011 12:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The "talk" between raditz and puar about kids was genius. I love the dialogue amongst the characters. The flow throughout this story is so smooth and flawless. I love it when u update. Great job! |
Reviewed By: Gohans Onna On: April 11, 2011 14:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!!!! I always get so excited when I see an update from you!! Although I am getting a little starved for some V/B interaction!! Hook a sister up hehe ;) |
Reviewed By: ilex9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2011 16:30 PDT
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I am still enjoying this story. I especially like how you are handling Dende dealing with his transition as Guru's successor in this chapter. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2011 09:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dende was so cute trying to act Vegeta-like. I love Vegeta's speech. Can't wait for more. Do u plan on having Trunks in this story? Even if its baby Trunks? Anyway, great job as usual. |
Title: Too cool for Fanfiction
Reviewed By: Lady_BlkDia07 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2011 06:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U writing about a gurrilla war is too awesome for words! I started reading this on fanficiton but then I saw that you had an account on mediaminer and I just had to go see it! I love the pairing with Raditiz and Puar! So freaking sexy! I would love to see more of them in action, I'm still a BxV fan, but those two are hot! Goku is finally becoming a Super Saiyan! YAY! I'm sorry, but it kinda hurt to see him so weak and then u added that awesome little kick of power and made Gohan say he was close to Super Saiyan! Too wonderful, i still have loyalty toward Goku, no matter how much of a goof ball he is. I can't wait to see the development of 18 and 17! He is so hot! Whoo! Just gotta say, again, that You Rule! I can't wait for the nxt chp! 4rm da blk chick$$$ |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2011 05:12 PDT
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It always brightens my day when I see an update for this fic in my inbox. Great new chapter! I feel sorry for Dende. He's been put into some really big shoes! I'm glad Zarbon is doing well though. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and all the others after that as usual! Keep it up! :) |
Title: A DB tip of the hat?
Reviewed By: ChikyuEarth On: April 09, 2011 06:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome and epic as always! Glad that Zarbon is with some good people to heal up with, and will be watching to see what develops there. Hope that Dende will get the nerve to talk to Piccolo, and that he doesn't bite his head off, though I don't see much reason for him to do so. Really just thrilled to potentially be getting a whole section of Piccolo talking etc. Him and Tien have both been haunting the background and the ship for a while now...wonder if there will be a showdown between Piccolo and the other Nameks? But speaking of the other Nameks, you made me grin; you're going with interments as your names, and the name "Tambourine" just made me think of Piccolo's DB assassin brother! Guess in your universe Nail's and Piccolo's appearance weren't the only things shared among the Earth's and Guru's Nameks!! Again great job as always! Please keep it going! *grins* |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: April 08, 2011 19:11 PDT
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:) :) :):) :) :) :) :) :) well I am beyond happy to see Zarbon in good hands ;) also Dende standing up for him self :) :) oh and just imagining Vegeta talking mmmmmmmmm but really good chapter :) |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2011 20:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I wonder if zarbon ended up landing on tarble's planet. Also, poor veggie, so much weight on his shoulders. I'm glad to see that he finally gets the respect he deserves from the resistance. Geez, I'm such a closet nerd. To think, I got hooked on reading fanfics because my son started watching dbz kai. |
Reviewed By: Gohans onna On: March 24, 2011 14:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! Love it! Cant wait for more, please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2011 04:55 PDT
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Poor Zarbon at least he escaped though. Who are these people that found him. I feel like I should know. haha I'll just keep reading to find out. btw ZXB is a weird couple pairing. But I like it. It seems to fit. I'm surprised Vegeta actually agreed to a tribute for Guru. Keep up the good work! I'll read it and comment like always. :) |
Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2011 15:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is great! Ive been reading this whole story the last few days on my phone (and im now reviewing it from my phone as well so please forgive my crappy punctuation :p). So far this story is truly great and has been a huge enjoyment for me the last few days :) I really love your writing style and character development. I also love how you keep characters in character and develop the ones who we dont really know a ton about in a believeable fashion, like Radditz and Paur for example, which is a totally adorable couple btw ;) I cant wait to read your next update and I eagerly await it! |
Title: another great chapter
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2011 19:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad u tied in how vegeta and Yamcha met. It's sad that he died, but I like b/v better. I always get excited when I get the email that you've updated. Hope u update again soon. |
Title: another great chapter
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2011 19:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad u tied in how vegeta and Yamcha met. It's sad that he died, but I like b/v better. I always get excited when I get the email that you've updated. Hope u update again soon. |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: February 21, 2011 18:47 PST
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:D :D Well depressing. Never been a Yamcha fan but none the less I feel bad again for him having to die that way. :( Love Puar. Also super happy for the update! Been too long :) |
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