| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2011 17:29 PST
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Pretty good chapter. I'm not a big fan of Yamcha but it got much more interesting with Vegeta there :3. It's always good to have back story but now I'm wondering if this is foreshadowing... kind of like how tv shows remind you of what happened a month ago before they introduce a related topic. Anyway good job! As usual, I'll be waiting for the next one. |
Reviewed By: DeadRabbit92 On: February 21, 2011 11:15 PST
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GREAT JOB! man i hope bulma doesnt find out...though that would make you writing this sort of pointless so im sure she will. update soon. |
Reviewed By: fazkataz On: February 16, 2011 09:16 PST
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I have been reading your story ever since you uploaded chapter 15 (that must have been a year ago). "Vengeance" is one of very few Dragonball fanfiction that makes me want to check mediaminer for updates every week (I know that would be ongodly fast for updates). Please don't stop writing! I have made a fanart of one of my favourite scenes in the story. with your permission, i left it on my deviantart for now, I can take it down if you want to. link: http://fazkataz.deviantart.com/art/Vengeance-Fan-Art-01-197679567 |
Reviewed By: Genesis105 On: January 26, 2011 02:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading your fanfictions many years ago, but took a few years break from fanfiction. I came back to find Vengeance, and it's fantastic! I really think you've improved a lot. Your story flows much better and the humour made me laugh out loud, which is rare. The reason I gave you a 9 for spelling and grammar is because of the way you use your quotation marks. I'm not an expert on English, but I was always under the impression that the full stop comes at the VERY END of a sentence. For example: "I hate you." Said Bulma. VS "I hate you," said Bulma. Your story is fantastic - one of the best I've ever read, but this little thing keeps jarring me out of the story, and I've noticed it's been happening since I first started reading your fanfiction. Again, I'm not an expert, so don't take my words for truth. Maybe the style of writing is different in your country. ^^ Anyway, I'm enjoying the story so far, and can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2011 21:19 PST
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Glad Bulma found that information about Cell, but something tells me that it's not over yet. Though I will feel bad for 16 if things go sour. It's no wonder Bulma equated Vegeta's saying he wouldn't have killed her to love. That's probably the closest thing she's going to get to a declaration of love until Vegeta admits his feelings to himself. haha As always,great chapter! :3 |
Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2011 14:40 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome as usual! I wonder what you're going to do with the androids. I hope Goku is able to go ssj. More Puar/Radditz please! XD Can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: January 17, 2011 11:03 PST
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>.< well here is me crossing my fingers hoping that was your way of saying no cell, and hopefully no evil androids :) lol and I sure hope Vegeta is gonna kick some ass soon. :) or some one kicks some ass. oh & Zarbon + Burter? didnt see that :P |
Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2011 08:54 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this. I couldn't stop reading it. I remember spotting it the last couple of..erm...years, but I was like "guerilla warfare? really? lame." But it crossed my sights again the other day, and I decided to just read it. I'm glad I did. You've done a very good job with characterization and plot. I even laughed a few times. You're an excellent writer, and I only spotted a few grammatical/spelling errors. I love Radditz and Puar; who would've thunk it lol. Of course I love B/V, too, and G/CC. Can't wait for the next update! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Animelover6000 On: January 09, 2011 09:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHA I love it, i can't wait until another chapter. i've been reading this for a while now but only now got around to reviewing. i need to make a account for mediaminer lolz. until next update love see ya ^^ |
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2011 13:23 PST
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So happy for the update :) I feel so sorry for Goku, and even though I know this is a Vegeta-centric fic, I am jealous on Goku's behalf that Vegeta got Super Saiyan first lol |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: December 30, 2010 10:05 PST
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ZOMG GOKU!!!!!! At first I thought gohan snapped and almost killed him lol. but damn you gave me more reasons to have Vegeta fantasies... damn you. lol. but seriously thank you for the update that was awesome! |
Title: love love love!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2010 21:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you don't know how much I enjoy reading this story. This chapter was great. I love the interaction amongst all of the characters, especially B/V's. I'm not just talking about the lemon. That was a bonus tho. Keep up the great work. I hope you keep updating this story, cause I love reading it. |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2010 17:49 PST
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Ohhh this was a good chapter! Well worth the wait! Love the Bulma and Vegeta moments as always. :3 What's wrong with Vegeta? Emotional troubles perhaps? Poor Goku with his heart problems but it gives an excuse to meet Tarble, I guess, right? Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter as usual! :) |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: December 01, 2010 15:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love love love love love... so I seriously have been enjoying myself with this story :) been home sick today with some funky infection in my face that I swear is moving around... the swelling has gone from my forehead to my eyes to my cheeks... its nuts :P but anywhoodle lovin it! |
Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Rogue's_Masquerade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2010 19:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you've out done yourself! actually describing parts and functions of the ship, the urgency to get everyone moving and of course the perverted comedy that is Oolong and Master Roshi lol! This chapter did feel a little short but not bad at all, i can't wait for the next installment and possibly a little naughty, naughty from Bulma & Vegeta? |
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