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Reviewed By: Ilex9 not logged On: August 29, 2010 16:28 PDT
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Another good chapter. Nice finish with bring the cat out of the bag, so to speak.
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 12:56 PDT
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LOL...Poor Puar XD LOVE the ending! Although I'm not much into guy-on-guy stuff, but this pairing is just absolutely weird and intriguing! Can't wait to see what will happen now that the secret is out ^^ Looking forward to the next chapter
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Title: love love love this story!
Reviewed By: preciousjade On: August 18, 2010 17:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is awesome! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please finish this story! I'll go crazy if I don't find what happens to all the characters in the end. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2010 14:08 PDT
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Aww yeyy :3 I can't wait til the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Happy Clam On: August 05, 2010 23:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You, my dear, are a weaver of Magic! I patiently await your next chapter!
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Title: ch29
Reviewed By: Venus Legacy (not logged on) On: August 04, 2010 12:08 PDT
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Ok that has got to be the best description of a super saiyan transformation I have read, and he didn't even go all the way! You really described it well, I felt like I could see it, feel the fright, confusion, anticipation and awe of the moment as you showed us the POV of the other saiyans. The way you built up the moment was amazing. I also enjoyed that ending, it definitely shows how far both Vegeta and Bulma have come, two stubborn individuals willing to make a compromise, seeing Vegeta's lips curl up in that classic smirk as he pressed his hand to the screen just had me completely. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope theres a turn of events for Zarbon
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 21:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, Bulma admits it to herself. I can't wait until Vegeta gets out of there. >:3 Thank you for the update! I can't wait for the next one! Great job!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 20:23 PDT
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I'm glad that Vegeta and Bulma seemed to have come to some kind of agreement. They both needed a bit of a wake up call and now that they had it they can move on be together again. Very sweet. And Vegeta's getting close to being super, hopefully Bulma's machine can help him with that. Great as always, can't wait 'til next time.
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 18:34 PDT
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Awe, the Goku/Chichi part about made me cry XD Really good chap, and also glad to see Bulma giving back in to Vegeta. Although with slight terms ^^ Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2010 18:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I really love this story! The way you write Bulma and Vegeta are just perfect. The story concept is really awesome, as well ^^ And I hope to see this continued and finished :D
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2010 17:45 PDT
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Poor Zarbon... ugh. Methinks he'd be better off dead. As for Bulma, maybe the rude awakening was what she needed, but the side of me that loves B/V doesn't want to see them split up! I do hope you're gonna fix things between them and as always, looking forward to your next chapter. No rush though- the best things come to those who wait. :)
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Reviewed By: brutalbee On: July 31, 2010 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome awesome AWESOME! as always, thank you for an amazing update!! love where this is going :D
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Reviewed By: tspiteri1687 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2010 14:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I find this story very enjoyable, excited to read the next chapter to come out. I like the whole story line and suprise factors that have came out of it. Will continue to read this story to the very end.
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Title: ch 28
Reviewed By: venus legacy not logged On: July 23, 2010 12:34 PDT
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This chapter definitely gave me a lot to think about in terms of Vegeta's persona and the conflict between the idea of him as a villain and him as a hero. I think it was a good move having Bulma witness the villainous/evil side of him first hand and really be confronted with this aspect of his charater. This has been something that I have been struggling to reconcile myself with ever since the incident with Vegeta and the prostitute he killed, when he was trying to deny the bond between bulma and himself. I wonder how they can move on from this, if they can move on from this. I really like the way you portray Gohan in this story, he has a maturity beyond his years, yet despite what he has experienced, there is still that a trace of Gohan, which lingers, when Bulma said to him that Vegeta needs her and Gohan responded with "He really does, you know." That gives me hope that there is a way forward for Vegeta and Bulma, I just worry about the journey it will take to get there. Can Bulma love/be bonded to a murderer, without a conscience?
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Reviewed By: Sherkane On: July 23, 2010 12:00 PDT
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Vengeance is turning into one of my absolute favorite fanfics!! You did well with this darker chapter. It brings suspence and tension to your story. As Piccolo would say, there is just so much "goody goody" a good story can bear to remain credible. You are so talented. Keep on the good work! Your loyal fans are anxiously waiting for the continuation of the saga.
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